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How I overcame my obstacle

JaeAh — 2022-05-26 23:41:43 UTC

Writing Sample

JaeAh — 2022-05-26 23:41:50 UTC

One of the difficulties I've had was that ________________________________________________
In order to overcome this difficulty, I __________________________________________________________
Through this experience, I learned _______________________

예시1) 10136 홍길동

JaeAh — 2022-05-26 23:41:58 UTC

내가 학교에서 겪었던 어려움들 중 하나는 새로운 친구를 사귀는 것이었다. 13살 때 나와 내 가족은 서울로 이사왔다. 처음에 나는 외로움을 느꼈다. 이 문제를 해결하기 위해 나는 독서 동아리와 축구팀에 가입했다. 나는 또한 반 친구들이 나에게 말을 걸어주길 기다리기보다는 먼저 친구들에게 다가가려고 노력했다. 지금은 친구들이 많다. 이 경험을 통해 나는 뭔가를 원하면 직접 가서 얻어내야 한다는 것을 배웠다.

One of the difficulties I’ve had in school was making new friends. When I was 13, my family and

I moved to Seoul. I felt lonely at first. To solve this, I joined a book club and a soccer team. I also tried to approach classmates first rather than wait for them to talk to me. Now I have a wide circle of friends. Through this experience, I learned that if you want something, you have to go get it.

예시2) 10137 홍길순

JaeAh — 2022-05-26 23:42:06 UTC

내가 겪었던 어려움들 중 하나는 내가 15살 때 넘어져서 오른팔이 부러졌던 일이었다. 이 어려움을 극복하기 위해 나는 뭔가를 왼손으로 하는 법을 배워야 했는데, 가령 먹는 일이나 쓰는 일 같은 것이 있었다. 이 경험을 통해 나는 나의 신체 능력이나 건강을 당연한 것으로 여기지 말아야 한다는 것을 배웠다.

One of the difficulties I’ve had was that I fell down and broke my right arm when I was 15. In order to overcome this difficulty, I had to learn how to do some things with my left hand, such as eating or writing. Through this experience, I learned that I shouldn’t take my basic physical abilities or my health for granted.

10516 안준서

2022-05-30 01:40:35 UTC

One of the difficulties I’ve had was that I infected Covid-19 two months ago. In order to overcome this difficulty, I had to isolate at my home and eat healthy food. Now I’m not sick anymore. Through this experience, I learned that health was the most important thing in my life.

10535 한승우

2022-05-30 01:46:30 UTC

One of the difficulties l've had was having trouble with a friend when I was 15.

In order to overcome this difficulty, I tried to understand my friend's mind.

Throug this experience, I learned understanding other is important to friend's relationship.

제가 겪었던 어려움 중 하나는 제가 15살 때 친구와 문제가 있었던 것 입니다.

이 어려움을 극복하기 위해 저는 친구의 마음을 이해하려고 노력했습니다.

이 경험을 통해, 저는 다른 이를 이해하는 것은 친구 관계에서 중요하다는 것을 배웠습니다.

10532 차유림

2022-05-30 01:50:23 UTC

One of the difficulties I’ve had was that I had to prepare for an exam alone without private education. In order to overcome this difficulty, I listened to the class hard and asked my school teacher what I didn’t know. Through this experience, I learned that if I work hard, I can do it alone.

10522 이다희

2022-05-30 01:50:43 UTC

I moved to Gimpo when I entered high school. So, everything was unfamilliar to me. And I got lost on my way to school on the day of the entrance ceremony. So I was really frightened. Somehow I arrived at the school and it was full of strangers. Everyone was quiet and the classroom was silent. But I wanted to make friends, and I spoke to my classmate next to me courageously. Then she answered me kindly and we became close soon. Through this experience, I learned that courage is important.

10503김기태

2022-05-30 01:50:58 UTC

One of the difficulties i've had was when i hurt my ankle playing soccer.
In order to overcome this difficulty, I took medicine steadily and received physical therapy diligently
Through this experience, I became less aggressive when I played soccer

10505김란이

2022-05-30 01:53:10 UTC

One of the difficulties I faced was that I broke my ankle while doing ballet and had surgery. In order to overcome this difficulty, I used crutches, but it was difficult to even walk. Through this experience, I learned and thougt that I should cherish my body and be careful because dangerous situations can come at any time.

10531조홍석

2022-05-30 01:53:11 UTC

One of the difficulties I've had was that I broke a promise that I previously made with my friend.
In order to overcome this difficulty I apologized to my friend and I said that I would not break a promise again.
Through this experience, I leaned that breaking a promise can hurt someone and I have a nice friend.

10530 조성제

2022-05-30 01:53:30 UTC

One of the cases where I had a hard time was last year when I broke up with a friend because he made me frustrated and angry. But as I went up to high school, I sometimes thought of him. I regretted leaving him for trivial reasons. So, to overcome this difficulty, I made up my mind and contacted the friend and apologized. As a result, I am now getting along well with that friend again. Through this experience, I have learned not to distance myself from my precious friends, even for trivial reasons, and to resolve him through conversation.

10523 이서연

2022-05-30 01:54:31 UTC

One of the difficulties I've had was that I had no will although I had to study. In order to overcome this difficulty, I set my daily goals and tried to keep them. At first, I couldn't keep all my goals, but as I continued, the day when I kept all my goals came. I was glad to felt a lot of sense of accomplishment. Through this experience, I learned that the beginning and being steady are important.

10512 박채영

JaeAh — 2022-05-30 01:54:48 UTC

It was the day I participated in the school science fair. The theme was making the special road for the ball. So the ball could be rolled extreme way. I could swear my instruction was perfect and neat. And teacher also praised my instruction too. So I entered the contest with pride in my instruction. But the real construction wasn't the way I have expected. The ball kept escaping from its road and the speed of the ball was too fast that it jumped out and rolled away. I thought of many solutions, and the final one was making the most simple road. And by doing so we could succeed in our contest. Through this experience, I learned simple the best. And instead of making the complex, it is much better to concentrate on the quality. My conclusion, in the end, is quality is always better than the quantity

10511 문기응

2022-05-30 01:56:13 UTC

This is my picture of (4) Vesta. Yes, I took the picture of it by my telescope. But, there was many attempts and failures to took this picture. I will talk about this instructive experience.

When I was 16, I continued to fail to observe asteroid (4) Vesta through my telescope. I used classic find-object method called star hopping which helps to know the location of the object with the stars near it. But I couldn't see the (4) Vesta through the findscope despite its bright magnitude, 5. However, I didn't give up. I started to learn about (4) Vesta and its orbital elements. Finally, I succeeded to add (4) Vesta on my GOTO mount by input its orbital elements and after three attempts, I was able to see (4) Vesta through my telescope. I immediately took a picture of it. I was so excited that I still remember the moment when I saw (4) Vesta by my eyepiece. Through thus experience, I learned a lesson that "don't give up".

10510 나윤준

2022-05-30 01:56:30 UTC

One of the difficulties I’ve had was that I broke my right arm and had an operation. In order to overcome this difficulty, I had to rehabilitate to restore my arm. It was very painful and it took a long time. Through this experience, I learned that I can’t get anything without pain.

10526 이정윤

2022-05-30 01:57:00 UTC

One of the difficulties i've had was a presentation in front of friends. Since i was young, that presentation gave me hard time, so I hated the presentation time the most. But In order to overcome this difficulty I challenged the presentation with constant attempts. It piles up and piles up and I don't tremble any more when I make a presentation. Through this experience, I learned that it takes persistence and challenge to overcome fear.

10527장민기

2022-05-30 01:57:49 UTC

One of the difficulties I’ve had was I read the letter for my teachers at the graduation in elementary school.In order to overcame this difficulty, I took a deep breath before I read and only looked at my parents.Also I just tried not to read it fast. Through this experience, I learned that the brave is up to my mind.

10514 범수혁

2022-05-30 01:58:52 UTC

One of the difficulties I've had was broke my leg when i was 14 years old. In order to overcome this difficulty, I didn't do any exercises that would strain my arms. Through this experience, I learned should always treat my body preciously.

10513 배진서

2022-05-30 01:59:00 UTC

One of the difficulties I’ve had was showing my report card to my parents. I screwed up my midterm exam. So I was afraid to show my report card to my parents. In order to overcome this difficulty, At first I hid it from my parents, but eventually I had to show it. So I showed it courageously. Through this experience, I learned that courageous it's no use trying to hide and to be courageous

10521 이고운

2022-05-30 01:59:40 UTC

One of the difficulties I’ve had was that i had a bad habit of being late for school.
Because I slept late and woke up late.
In order to overcame this difficulty, I did my task without being lazy or postponing and I had a sleep early.
Through this experience, i learned a good routine is important and necessary not only in a beautiful life but also in health.

10520이건호

2022-05-30 02:00:13 UTC

One of the difficulties I've had was that I was jumping on the  trampoline and I broke my left arm when I was 14. In order to overcome this difficulty, I exercised a lot to grow my left arm's muscle. And that made me stronger. Through this experience, I learned that I shouldn't do anything dangerous while I'm jumping on the trampoline. Also I thought that the trampoline's safety facilities should be prepared.

10502권은서

2022-05-30 02:00:36 UTC

One of the difficulties l've had was

After arguing with a friend who was close to me when I was 14 years old, we didn't pretend to know each other for 2 years
in order to overcome this difficulty,

I got advice from a friend around me
After some time, the friend apologized first, and although not as much as before, we are getting along well as friends
Through this experience, l learned

10528 장은서

2022-05-30 02:01:35 UTC

One of the difficulties I've had was that I fought with my best friends.The reason why I fought with my friends was because there was a small misunderstanding with each other. They were close friends and it was my first time to fight, so I didn't know what to do, so I just avoided conflict. In order to overcome this difficulty, we talked each other and solved the misunderstanding by talking about upsetting things. Through this experience, I learned that I should think about the other person's position and Having a conversation without avoiding conflict. I also learned the importance of my friends.

10534 최유리

2022-05-30 23:27:04 UTC

One of the difficulties I've had was I got covid 19 two months ago. In order to overcome this difficulty, I tried not to skip class and I asked teachers questions about the class I didn't heard. Through this experience, I learned that no matter how difficult situations comes to me, I can overcome them with patience.

10524 이선주

2022-05-31 07:44:01 UTC

One of the difficulties I had was that I almost couldn't go to the high school I wanted because my school grades were so low in the first semester of the third year of middle school
In order to overcome this difficulty, I studied very hard in the second semester
Through this experience, learned that I have to study hard steadily and that my responsibility for my actions comes back to me

10519 오나현

2022-05-31 07:45:35 UTC

One of the difficulties I’ve had was the concern about career choice. I thought that if I took what I liked as a job, I’d hated it. So I pursued a stable life avoiding what I liked. But thinking about it like that, I had no way to go.
In order to overcame this difficulties, I asked my parents several times and searched for many things on the Internet and books. Then I thought many things about it by myself and organized my thoughts.
So, I learned the standard of career choice. I was confused between stability and likes and there were so many things that I let go of because the future was unstable even if I wanted to do. But it's okay to give up stability, money or moderation. If I did what I liked in life, I would be happy without them.

10517 양준오

2022-05-31 07:45:49 UTC

One of the difficulties I've had was a few years ago when torn apart In order to Overcome this difficulty I quickly took my brother to the hospital to tie up the torn aparts and I nursed my brother next to him Through this experience I learned that I wouldn't leave my brother alone and also I should always be careful because I would be able to get hurt by my mistake like my brother

10536 황찬솔

2022-05-31 07:49:03 UTC

One of the difficulties I’ve had in middle school was making new friends when I was 14 years old. In order to overcome this difficulty, I tried to talk to my friends first, but I couldn't because it was too hard. But thanks to other friends talking to me first, I have more friends. Through this experience, I learned that there are many thankful people around me who approach me first.

내가 중학교에서 겪었던 어려움 중 하나는 14살 때 새로운 친구들을 사귀는 것이었다. 이 어려움을 극복하기 위해 친구들에게 먼저 대화를 하려했지만 너무 힘들어서 하지 못했다. 하지만 다른 친구들이 먼저 말을 걸어준 덕분에 친구가 많아졌다. 이 경험을 통해 주변에 먼저 다가와주는 고마운 사람들이 많다는 것을 알게 되었다.

10501 곽영은

2022-05-31 07:49:06 UTC

One of the diifficulties I’ve had was that I gave up my old dream. My dream was Korean dancer but I gave up my dream. because It was so hard mentally when I was 15 years old. So I lost my goal in life
In order to ovecome this difficulty, I tried to find a new dream.I’m going to do a variety of apilitude tests and I thought about what I like to do. Through this experience, I learned the courage to dream again and I get a dream to make a dancer’s costume

10533 최서현

2022-05-31 07:49:53 UTC

One of the difficulties I 've had was that learning to ride a bicycle.
When i was 9,i had ride a two-wheeled bicycle for the first time.
At first i kept falling, i was able to succeed by kept trying.
Through this i was able to ride a two-wheeled bicycle very well.
While learning how to ride a bicycle, i got to know that You can do anything if you try.

내가 겪었던 어려움들 중 하나는 자전거 배우는것 이였다.내가 초등학교 2학년때 처음 2발자전거를 타봤다.처음엔 계속 넘어졌지만 계속 도전을 하니 성공할수 있었다. 이를통해 나는 지금 두발자전거를 잘 할수있게되었다. 나는 자전거를 배우면서 노력하면 무엇이든 다 할수 있다는걸 알게되었다.

10525 이세연

2022-05-31 07:50:31 UTC

One of the difficulties l’ve had was a hard time preparing for the competition(concours) in the fourth grade of elementary school.
In order to overcome this difficulty, I practice and practice until the music could be continued naturally.
Through this experience, I learned no matter how hard I struggle, I realized that if I don’t give up, I can accomplish the result I want in the end

10515 손예솔

2022-06-01 03:19:13 UTC

One of the difficulties l’ve had was that I had to complete a support performance for the athletic competition in a short period of time. But there were some uncooperative friends. To overcome this difficulties, I had to find a way to make uncooperative friends actively participate. I divided my friends into groups to practice. This method worked very well. And instead of forcing my friends to work hard, I showed myself working harder. I filmed and sent the choreography video to my friends. I learned how to actively engage uncooperative friends and fell in love with them all. Also, I learned the mindset of not letting go of friends who want to give up because they are having a hard time.

내가 겪었던 어려움 중 하나는 단기간에 체육대회 응원 공연을 완성해야 했다는 것이다. 그러나 비협조적인 몇몇의 친구들이 있었다. 나는 이 어려움을 극복하기 위해서 비협조적인 친구들이 적극적으로 참여할 방법을 찾아야 했다. 나는 연습하기 위해 친구들을 조로 나누었다. 이 방법은 매우 효과가 좋았다. 그리고 친구들에게 열심히 할 것을 강요하는 대신에, 내가 더 열심히 하는 모습를 보여주려고 했다. 나는 안무 영상을 친구들에게 찍어서 보내기도 했다. 나는 비협조적인 친구들을 적극적으로 참여시키는 방법을 배우게 되었고 친구들을 더 사랑하게 되었다. 또한 나는 힘들어서 포기하고 싶어하는 친구들을 놓지 않고 함께하는 마음가짐을 배우게 되었다.