For and Against Essay 5C by Alejandra Jeréz

how does technology help us ?

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TECHNOLOGY WILL MAKE TRANSPORTATION BETTER

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Internet is good for me

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TECHNOLOGY WILL MAKE TRANSPORTATION BETTER

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Why the intenet is importan to us

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Will Technology Make Transportation Better ?

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Why the pizza is much better than hamburger? (Why is pizza much biggert than the hamburger?

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TECHNOLOGY WILL MAKE EDUCATION BETTER

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HOW IS MY DAILY LIFE? :)

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Technology has changed during the last years and has making our live better especially (specially) on transportation.

why pizza is better than hamburger

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I'm going to present why and how is much better the pizza than a hamburger :D

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WILL TECHNOLOGY MAKE TRANSPORTATION BETTER ?

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the tecnology can change the world and the persons

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WILL TECHNOLOGY CHANGE SOMETHING IN THE FUTURE?

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Internet is a thing (thing) that we use to search tinks (things) that we want to see or thing (things) that dont know
the internet is like a place of enterteiment or knowlege .(.)

will tecnology change the education?

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introduction : the tecnology can help us in the education but some it cannt not (cannot) (.)

How the war affects all the wordl? (How does the car affect all the world?

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La guerra puede crearse entre dos o más países, a medida que pasa el tiempo se vuelve más dura y peligrosa,

puede ser buena para un país y mala para otro. (why is it in Spanish?

FOR WHAT THE TECHNOLY CAN AFECT THE EDUCATION ? (How can technology affect education?)

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pizza is better because is more easier to eat and is more delicious than the hamburger and it has more options than the hamburguer thank u >:D

how does internet changes (change) our lifes?

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Why is entertainment mostly on the internet?

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introduction: Technology is evolving every year. In this year we have many types of vehicles thanks to technology.

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intro: In most of my daily life is repeat (repetitive),and obviously almost everything is boring.

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The technology during this time help (helps) us to communicate(.)

how the contamination is on (in) our dayly life

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well we start with the comparison of these 2 things, well the pizza has more nutrients it doesn't have so much dye and species to be delicious and when you watch the hamburger in a commercial, it seems delicious but when you order it, is crushed and the bread is not like a bread.

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The technology is very important for us , so the humans then can have more capacity to do more fantastic and advanced things.

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in our daily lives we use internet but .are we all the day in the internet? and this can (can this) affect us in a future like a society (.)

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argument to the suject: the tecnology can help us , for example when the covid 19 appeared we couldn`t go out so we can go to the school, so with the tecnology we could do virtual class so we can have our classes other thing is that with the tecnology we can send our projects to our teacher.

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To begin with, what is entertainment? It is a diversion with the intention of fixing the attention of an audience or its participants.

K- pop for people

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Intro:The K-pop is a gender of music from South Korea. There are much types of groups

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Internet is good because some times are important to our live, like when we are lost we can use google maps or sometimes we can buy things (things) in the computer whith out (with out going out) go to the supermarket and we can buy more cheaper (cheaper) and we have a lot of advantages we have entrtaimen(entertainment), study contents and a lot more. (.)

the contamination is on(in) our air oceans but we are going to check out the positive (possitive) and negative impact(.)

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If the human in the future has more capacity and creativity to do things like for example cars that fly, that will help more and more about the transportation and improvement of the mind of the children.

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In the internet we can use (it) to search thinks (things) or entretaiment us (of) what ever you want(.) :D

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Firstly, I think that there are a lot of changes in trasportation. People transport every day to many places, like the supermarket, a hospital, to school etc, depending the place they want to go. Some people like to go in (by) bus or (by) car while others prefer transporting on (by) a airplane or (by) a train. In addition (,) transportation has a great evolution on science, the scientist believe that in some years we could travel to mars.

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Introduction: The technoly can afec (affect) the education for distractin (because students get distracted) the estudents (students) and cant help for work or presentations (.)

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firstly,When I wake up I go and put on my uniform or if it's not a study day I continue sleeping a little more :).When there is school, after getting dressed I go to the bathroom and brush my teeth, put on sunscreen, accessories, etc. If there is no school, I will have breakfast like a good daughter :D.

Hi,I going to talk about of (how) the technology can change the world and the people in the future.

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Firstly, i (I) think war can be good to someones (someone) because maybe that country is defending his territory saving all the people from that country, making proud its(their) family and the people and also in cases the goverment help the soldiers.

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arguments agaist the subject: some disadvantages are that sometimes the camara does not work or we cant listen well,there is that if we dont`t lisen well we cant undertand so it is more difficult.

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IF YOU GO TO ITS HABITAT HOW THE TIGER WILL BE WITH YOU? (how will the tiger be with you)

by Antonia Triviño

technology Technology) has become more and mores (more) advanced (,) and it makes our lives better because if we evole schools , children will have a better education (.)

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Argument: Fristly I think that K-pop is a tipe (type )of Korean entertainment in form of music. For Kids,teenagers and adults .💗

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INTRODUCTION: THE TECHNOLOGY IS EVOLVING EVERY YEAR TO HELP US OR OTHERS. BECAUSE IT MAKE (makes) BETTER OUR LIVES. AND WITH TRANSPORTATION

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Since there is entertainment for children, such as Peppa Pig, etc., there is also entertainment for adults and teenagers, for adults it would be novels, news and games, for teenagers it would be movies, it depends on the topic because it can be a specific topic like Stranger Things. or series and movies can also be horror or drama.

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But aside of that the internet have some points bad , he (the) internet is (is) sometimes addictive (addictive) and that is bad because we will spend a lot of time in some pages and it can damage our vision (vision), and in the internet (there) are some bad people that (that) can do bad things (things)

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conclusion: the tecnology help us all the thing but in the education some times it doesen`t work.

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Intro: In the present, the world has changed too much, scientists think that in the future technology will improve cars so they are studying technology too much because they said that the technology would take a big part of our lives.

the AI can change the world?

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In other hand, When it's school, after brushing my teeth and all that, I go and have my chocolate for breakfast, I just don't like to brush my teeth before having breakfast because I feel like they get dirty again, but my mom forces me, and when there's no I go to school and I'm in cell, or I fight with my mom for doing neo, and I don't want to. D:

On the other part, pizza has ingredients that make the digestive system healthy, Tomato, Margaret, Fungus, etc but the pizza has other bad parts, like the dough, the cheese, pepperoni, sausage, and the mixtures that the pizza too bad for the digestive system.

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On the other hand , children and adults can become addict to the technology and can die , because if you take the cellphone or something that he / she has in their hands they can die or they can kill you .

arguments for: There is a variety of vehicles in the world. if the technology continues evolving fast, the vehicles will evolve too. First, maybe in the future all the cars will work with solar energy, and maybe all the cars will drive by themselves. Another advantage is that, if the cars could fly we will arrive faster to every place because we won't have to waste time in the traffic. The last argument is that the vehicles will not damage the world.

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On other hand, the war can be fatal because the soldiers can be hurt or also can die, the food can be so limited to everyone so the get hungry and they can die in a few days. maybe they even do not return to they (their) homes making sad his family (making their families sad). as the time pass the floor were they figth (figth) become more damage and at the point is simply useless, the hard decisions the soldiers have to to take makes us reflex about how the war affect so much.

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The relationspip between human and tigers hasn´t been lovely or happy in all the cases. Here I will tell you about the advantages and dis-advantages if we meet a tiger.

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Fristly, the internet is important to us because without the internet we couldn´t call anyone , we use the internet to entretaiment (entertain) us when we are bored or talk whith (with) our families or friends , the internet in this ages is important to us (what do you mean?), we need to upgrade the internet and make it better for the future , the adults work by (with) the internet or search thinks (things) to their work.

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To sum up,When there is school, after breakfast I go on the road and I doubt my existence, and when there is no school, I start doing neo, or I go out with my mom to have a coffee or go for a walk around the neighborhood :o .

Conclusion: pizza and hamburgers cause so much damage to the body and other parts of the system, (it) is much better to eat salad and be healthy, eat sometimes eat (/) that food, that's it thanks for reading goodbye!.

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Firstly,I think in future the tecnology are (will be) more advaced than now.For example the cars (will be able to) can fly or some persons are (will be) robots.In the future (we will)have many advances

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Firstly, I think that the technology help us in the past can help in the future.

The technology help (us) to transport to the daily life, education , media and internet, warfare an work.

most in the home.When the technology has problem with the internet .

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So for that reason the technology have to stop a little bit so we don't have more deaths in the world.

Firstly(,) theres (there) is alot of good actions on the emviroment,here are the advatages to the embiroment(environment), the trees controle (control) the air on the atmosphere that air contain us and gave(gives) us our life, another advantage is that the plants that grow made food for us,to the animals (.)

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On other hand, other singers do songs that colaborated with K-popers like Natty natasha,Ozuna,Dua Lipa ,Selena Gomez,Lady Gaga,Cardi B,Coldplay,Megan Thee Stallion,Laxed,Siren Beat and more.Aprovetating (taking advantage of ) the fame of BlackPink, BTS,Twice, Got the beat, Lesserafin,Newjeans,Hsawa,Itzy, Jeon Somi, Aespa, (G)I-dle and more groups tat (that) (have) are been afectated (affected by) for much(many) artist(.)

First, children get up every day to go to study from Monday to Friday, children get stressed by all the homework and exams so that this does not happen to them, we would use technology so that they learn more, for example by putting math games in the classroom. video bin (beam) and try to get the children used to the technology so that they have better performance in all subjects (.)

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Argument to suject: The technoly can help for example , when in the city are (there are) strikes and not cant (we can't) go to school or wen COVID 19 apearce (appereance) we ~~not~~ cant go to school for (because) (we) can contamined (contaminate) the viaurus and for that the technoly (technology) cant (can) help (us) for virtual class , the virtual class cant help very well for in a moment for a viaurs, streaks or other problem the technoly cant help and is a tools for cant used very well (.)

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on the other hand. the technology help us in all

INTRO:In an era defined by rapid technological advancements,Artificial intelligence (AI) stands at the forefront of our world.

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In conclusion I think that internet is good but in short times and with supervition and I (I) think we need to try only use the internet in very especial cases or important cases.

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A tiger might always be a solitary and territorial animal so we have to take that into account because this characteristic could make the tiger react in a bad way. But by the good way, the tiger has especial healig qualities that can help treat chronic illnesses and replenish the body´s esential energy.

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Since there are horror movies and novels, there are also reggueton singers, rockers, K-pop artists,
In each category there are artists who are widely listened to in reggueton: Feid, bad bunny, Duki, Emilia M, Mora, and Morat, in K-pop it is Twice, blackpink, new jeans, aespa and etc.

Conclution

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In my opinion the best gender is the k-pop.

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On the other hand, so many people believe that transportation can make that oil will run out and most people won´t travel at all. However Zhuge Liang, Carl Benz, Alexander Winton and more inventors worked hard the mayority of their lives to make people´s life better, thanks to that they are very famous for making a very big difference in the history of evolution. Also (,) this inventors on the process had to do many difficult and dangerous things. The most difficult part was invented (inventing) the project, structure and all of that. Another disadvantage that many people thing is that if we create more and more vehicles we could destroy de world.

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in the internet they are to many posibilities (posssibilities) in the part of social media the people pass(spend) more time in social media and forget his (their) responsabilities like school work etc and this c ould affect negatibely (negatively) in his life(.)

arguments againts : However as we have many advanteges, there are many disadvantages too. The first is that if we have that technology we will be fat because we won't do exercise. Other disadvantage is that we wont talk much with our family because when we are in the car and there is many traffic we usally talk with the people that is in the car, but if we arrive fast to every place we would not have time to talk.

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to sum up, the technology can work for us

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Argument: Firstly, I think that technology will help our lives in a big part, so we need to be prepared for the future, I think technology will be a good inversion if we use it in a proper situations.

to sum up, the persons do not understand how (does) all that (the) soldiers and civiles die? why this need to happen? why (does) all the people die? why do not make more problems and be happy with everything you have? please stop the wars and be more friendly with everyones. (everyone)

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In conclusion, I think that technology will afect transportation in a good way, because we will have a lot of advantages and we will be happy(.)

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On the other hand, the kids are being adictive to the internet in this years and that is dangerous for their eyes , if we are (spend) so much time in internet our eyes will be tired and we will need to use glasses , in the internet sometimes has inadicuate thinks (things) for the kids and for adults. :v

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Now in theory they hardly listen to other types of music, it is normal that they listen to Feid and Bad Bunny a lot more because of the collaboration, the percentage of other genres is almost very low.

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Arguments agaist: Some of the disadvantages are that some times the estudets (students) can distracted(spelling) with games or in virtual class (.) they do what they don't have to do or some times the internet no't work very well and cant lose class (.)

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To sum up, I think that transportation can evolucionate with technology. Today there are many pollution thanks to the oil we use in the cars, buses (busses) etc,but we can change that with technology and will be a new world.

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but the internet is not alwais bad it has positve things like it help( helps) the comunication and to search informatio m(information) (.)

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But unfortunately, the tiger can be too aggressive. Some studies by zoologists show that if a lion and a tiger fight, the winner will be the tiger with its inmese claws and its fierce attack. The tiger´s actually worst enemy are the humans because we are his greatest threat since they stalk him to hunt him, that is too bad because he will ract in a very bad way with our presence so he could attack us and almost kill us:

NO TO THE WAR

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Arguments for:firstly The technology are (is) evolving transportation and created (creating) a variety of vehicles like: rols roice,tesla,predato,ferrari,ect.in some years the transportation will be better. in addition the tecnology will be make humans life easy.another advantages is that many people make easy (will have an easy way) to go to many place.

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In conclusion, well, in my opinion, Feid surpasses many artists.

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Conclusion:the technoly cant help very well the education even thought some times cant afected .

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Yes, but the children could become addictive and their eyes could be damaged in the second. The mothers would tell us why we put technology in since the children are very rude because of applications like Tiktok and they would not pay attention to the parents.

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In conclusion, the tiger has good and bad things and he is in danger of extinction because of us , so we need to start taking care for it.

On the other hand,the people no(will not) have work(jobs) because the robots they (will) cover them.The people they look lazier because the robots (will) do all of (for) them.But other people like that because there (they) are lazy and he likes that they do everything to him.

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But they are also soo (so) bad actions on the emvirioment(environment),they (there) are industries that they through(throw) the plastic,the trash,etc,to the ocean, theres is a bad disabantage (disadvantage), another is that the rives (rivers),lakes like the(/) el rio de bogota are with so much of trash on it,it acomuls (accumulate) and in soo (so) much of year we are goind to be like the lorax, we need to buy air, there is no trees,no good water.

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Arguments againts:On the other hand

My conclusion is that we have to put technology so that children (what?), but not much (.)

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To sum up, i(I) think the internet help (helps) us to the school (education?), the work(job) or to seach thinks(ww) (.)

you can change the contamination today and hep (help) us, in my opinion we can change it now to dad (have) a good future.

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To sum up ,I think the tecnology have negative support positove support in the future because of wath i said before. bay ( the idea is not clear)

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arguments against, critics argue that AI and automation can lead to significant job loss across various industries, potentially creating unemployment and economic inequality.There are ethical concerns surrounding AI, such as the potential misuse of AI in warfare, autonomous weapons, and decision-making systems that can have life-or-death consequences

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:05:07 UTC

You wrote a very interesting essay. Make sure you verify punctuation and spelling.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:09:31 UTC

Welldone! Make sure you avoid contractions on an essay as it is formal. Also, try to avoid the goodbye at the end of the text.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:13:15 UTC

You have wonderful ideas. We need to work on spelling and grammar as the mistakes confuse the reader.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:36:33 UTC

Jero, it is important to add different arguments that support your ideas. I missed some of them to understand your opinion better.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:37:41 UTC

Dear we have plenty of time to work on the essay. It is important to pay attention and use your time wisely.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:40:07 UTC

Nice text. I would have loved to see more of your opinion in the conclusion. Check spelling and punctuation.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:42:20 UTC

Welldone! Make sure you check punctuation, grammar and spelling always, sometimes those mistakes can confuse the reader.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:43:35 UTC

Dear you were doing great. The text is incomplete.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:45:12 UTC

You wrote a well organized text. Nice supporting details. Keep it up!

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:48:20 UTC

Sarita, you wrote a very personal narrative and that takes a lot. Good job. It would have been better to put in the tittle like a comparison between your good and bad days on your daily life.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:55:28 UTC

Dear you wrote and organize essay. It is important to organize your ideas first. In the second paragraph you are saying the same many times and that can cause your arguments to be weak. Check spelling and grammar.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 19:57:37 UTC

You wrote a very complete text. It was nice to read your opinion on it. Keep it up!

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 20:01:16 UTC

Dear, your wrote a nice and entertaining text. However, by reading the conclusion I don't undertand how your arguments lead you to talk about Feid. Maybe if your wrote the title, Why is Feid and amazing artist?, your ideas would have adapted better. Make the proper corrections please.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 20:02:12 UTC

Welldone. You keep it simple and clear.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 20:05:16 UTC

Dear, your wrote a nice and entertaining text. However, by reading the conclusion I don't undertand the connection between the arguments and the conclusion.Make the proper corrections please.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-24 20:05:56 UTC

Dear, we have plenty of time to work on the essay. It is important to pay attention and use your time wisely.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-25 12:20:34 UTC

Dear, you follow the structure of the essay, make sure you check spelling and grammar. What is the difference between thing an think?

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-25 12:21:28 UTC

Dear, we have plenty of time to work on the essay. It is important to pay attention and use your time wisely.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-25 12:26:49 UTC

Welldone, check your introduction as it is in Spanish. Also, check spelling of some words.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-25 12:29:48 UTC

Dear, check the structure of a for and against essay. Also, make sure you include the conclusion.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-25 12:32:15 UTC

You writing skills are on another level my friends. Keep it up!

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alejandrajerez — 2023-10-25 12:37:22 UTC

Welldone. You develop your arguments in a possitive way for the reader to understand your point of vew. Keep it up!

Conclution

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K - pop is for every one. It didn´t have gender💚

arguments,AI systems can process and analyze vast amounts of data, providing valuable insights and helping organizations make data-driven decisions . AI can assist in medical diagnosis, drug discovery, and personalized treatment plans, potentially leading to better healthcare outcomes.

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conclusion:Certainly,here's a concluding paragraph on the topic of how AI can change the world:As we stand on the precipice of an AI-driven future, the potential for transformation is both awe-inspiring and sobering.

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Arguments against: On the other hand as we have advantages, there are many disadvantages too. The first is that if we have too much technology we will be very fat becuase we won't need to do nothing, because the car will come to the place that we will be, and we won't do anything for the movement of our body because we won't go to the car.

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In conclusion, I think that technology will be a good way to be transported from one place to another, because we will be happy of won't go and get the car out of the garage because, with only a click or something like that, we have our cars in front of us. Goodbye.

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alejandrajerez — 2023-11-02 12:35:05 UTC

Welldone!

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alejandrajerez — 2023-11-02 12:37:02 UTC

Welldone Mathi, next time try to use your language skills to write your ideas too.