https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige INSTRUCTIONS: Add a post to each column. Celebrate your victories and celebrate your classmates!! en-us 2021-09-08 11:54:06 UTC 2024-07-15 13:27:16 UTC hello@padlet.com jburks9 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724609996 2021-09-08 11:54:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724609996 jburks9 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724609999 Adding small detail and small actions to my writing are some ways that I grew in my craft. By zooming in one the small details and movements, I'm able to help the reader picture the scene more.]]> 2021-09-08 11:54:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724609999 jburks9 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724610003 "The bus crawls to a stop, the worn down brakes screeching as the momentum slows. Grabbing my large backpack - the one that I’ll be living out of for the next month, filled to the brim with layers of clothes to protect my warm Texas skin from the harsh Scottish winter - I lumber down the aisle and step off the dusty steps of the airport transit bus."]]> 2021-09-08 11:54:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724610003 jburks9 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724610006 The activity that was most helpful for me was the "first, last, and times I realized something" activity. It helped me remember small meaningful moments I had forgotten!]]> 2021-09-08 11:54:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724610006 jburks9 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724610008 I need to keep working on adding dialogue, specifically dialogue that reveals information about the speaker and the meaning in the moment.]]> 2021-09-08 11:54:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724610008 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724844363 2021-09-08 13:27:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724844363 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724854365 2021-09-08 13:30:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724854365 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724857344 It's all was good to put good detail in your story.because there is always a small details and the big ones too. It will make more sencie in the story.]]> 2021-09-08 13:30:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724857344 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724857550 2021-09-08 13:31:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724857550 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724862453 2021-09-08 13:32:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724862453 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724865436 2021-09-08 13:33:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724865436 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724893041 2021-09-08 13:41:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724893041 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724894147 2021-09-08 13:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724894147 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724897892 2021-09-08 13:42:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724897892 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724898460 2021-09-08 13:42:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724898460 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724900433 2021-09-08 13:42:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724900433 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724904283 2021-09-08 13:43:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724904283 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724907041 2021-09-08 13:44:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724907041 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724939140 2021-09-08 13:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724939140 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724948896 I learned what internal and external means and how the are important in your writing.]]> 2021-09-08 13:57:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724948896 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724953417 2021-09-08 13:58:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724953417 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724969525 2021-09-08 14:03:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724969525 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724991047 2021-09-08 14:09:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1724991047 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725006776 2021-09-08 14:14:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725006776 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725006859 2021-09-08 14:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725006859 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725033347 "OMG" i ran all around the house ]]> 2021-09-08 14:21:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725033347 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725034142 I learned what  internal and external mean to help me be a better writer  and understand it more.

]]> 2021-09-08 14:22:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725034142 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725035764 Sometimes I don’t like them but I do at the bottom of my hart and we don’t only speak English I speak Korean and people think that I am Asian just by looking at me and they do even say anything but I am half Asian because South Korea is in asian]]> 2021-09-08 14:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725035764 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725039816 2021-09-08 14:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725039816 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725043135 2021-09-08 14:24:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725043135 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725047547 grammer]]> 2021-09-08 14:25:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725047547 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725052099 I want to keep working on adding to my first and last and adding more ways to helping my writing become better.]]> 2021-09-08 14:27:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725052099 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725078578 2021-09-08 14:34:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725078578 https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725625430 is that what every i can do you can do it to]]> 2021-09-08 17:36:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jburks9/1uwm5btjxnlhzige/wish/1725625430