Old-to-New Information by Peine, Lynette https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566 Made with a wink and a smile en-us 2021-08-11 12:51:50 UTC 2021-08-12 08:22:01 UTC hello@padlet.com to many repetition https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676586679 2021-08-12 08:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676586679 linking workd https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676586784 2021-08-12 08:18:24 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676586784 https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587148 Using this/these+ noun]]> 2021-08-12 08:19:00 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587148 Use of synonyms https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587410 2021-08-12 08:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587410 Lack of linking words https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587419 2021-08-12 08:19:27 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587419 https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587533 pick up information from last sentence.]]> 2021-08-12 08:19:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587533 Exact repetition of vocabulary https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587557 2021-08-12 08:19:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587557 Variation in part of speech https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587644 2021-08-12 08:19:47 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587644 https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587794 Some sentences are not explicitly related to the previous one.]]> 2021-08-12 08:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676587794 Change from one topic to another https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676588234 2021-08-12 08:20:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676588234 The writer does not have a complete outline, and there may be missing information in later content https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676588326 2021-08-12 08:20:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676588326 sentences are too short and choppy https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676589053 2021-08-12 08:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676589053 paraphrasing https://padlet.com/lynette_peine/1uvs061xsfu6w566/wish/1676589105
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