Lola jablonski’s Showcase 2021 by Student - Lola Jablonski

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ljablonski4 — 2021-11-14 22:55:40 UTC

Mr H's Feedback

choward109 — 2021-11-21 03:00:28 UTC

Lola, I feel like you need a little more information in relation to your questions. You haven't really answered them. Fro example, your questions ask how much of clothing goes to charity shops but you don't actually mention any facts. What you have wrote is a good start but find more!

Also, with the Call to Action, I love the box of care idea. Are you planning to start one or to get other people to create one? Did you write a letter to one of the charities to ask what they need? I also think that your topic does connect to poorer people and the homeless but you haven't really mentioned them at all.

Grace

2021-11-22 04:08:13 UTC

Lola I think you did an amazing job with making it visually appealing but somethings you could work on are things like: talking slower, adding a bit more info to your report and maybe making more eye contact with your audience. good job overall!

Harriet

2021-11-23 00:54:21 UTC

Lola I thought your showcase idea was amazing, i loved how you cared about other people in the community and how you could help the environment. The only small thing you you improve on it time management be sure you still had 7 minutes left. Other than that it was an astonishing website and I loved it! Xx

Megan

2021-11-23 03:50:57 UTC

Why was this topic so important to you and what is something that you have learnt about the topic that interested you?

Emma Kanaan 5N

2021-11-23 03:55:08 UTC

Lola you have done amazing on your website. I love how you included this paragraph: “My two favourite things is clothes and helping out people and the planet and by doing this deed I am. Even thought it my be old people will treasure it likes it is new.” You are trying to make this planet so welcoming! Well done! I think you could of add a bit more information although other from that very well done!

Questions:
What we some facts that you could of included?
Why is this topic so important and entertaining to you?
What do you think you could of added?

Excellent Job Lola!

Ms Falls

jfalls3 — 2021-11-23 04:08:58 UTC

What specifically are you doing for this issue yourself?

Charlotte

2021-11-24 22:28:37 UTC

Hi Lola, I really liked your weebly website. It was a good topic to choose. I think your website looked really nice in general:) Good job!
Charlotte F xxx

Charlotte F

2021-11-24 22:33:11 UTC

Also your call to action page was really good 😊

Chelsea Sumich

2021-11-24 22:45:24 UTC

This is an amazing presentation Lola! I can definitely see how passionate you are about this topic and I love this idea. I’ve never heard of anything like this and I love the fact that if you need something you can take it but you’ll never run out because someone always has to put something in aswell. Amazing.

2021-11-25 22:31:43 UTC

great website! some feedback is I think you should at more information and go in more depth/

Grace

2021-11-25 22:32:35 UTC

Lola, I think this is such an amazing idea. Something you could work on or add is going into more depth about the idea. You could also explore more facts about clothing wastage. Also try not to fidget so much. Overall great idea!

Imogen Wa

2021-11-25 22:43:02 UTC

Hi Lola,
I really liked what you are doing about it and i loved the poster! There were a few spelling mistakes here and there but other than that, perfect!