Chained Short Poem by aina zulaikha

Instruction and Examples

ainaaazulaikha — 2021-07-09 15:11:19 UTC

Write a poem using any conditional sentence type you had learnt. Write at least 5-6 sentences.

Reminder: The sentences in chained poem should be connected to each other. Good luck :)

Example:
If I drink coffee,

I’ll stay awake tonight.

If I stay awake tonight,

I’ll fall asleep in the morning.

And if I fall asleep in the morning,

My teacher will be very angry.

name 1, name 2, name 3

ainaaazulaikha — 2021-07-12 03:58:31 UTC

poem

NUR AIN BINTI KAMARUL ADLI 4SAGA

m6932611 — 2021-07-12 04:15:15 UTC

If I feel sad,
I'll cry a lot.
If I cry a lot,
I'll get very hungry.
If I get very hungry,
I'll eat so much food.
And if I eat so much food,
my weight will increase!

Teacher's comment: Good job, Ain! This is so relatable especially on the hungry part hahaha

Irdina Nursafiyah Bt Mohd Aiyob 4SAGA

2021-07-12 04:58:35 UTC

If I watch drama,
I'll feel like the heroin.
If I am the heroin,
The hero will save me.
If the hero save me,
I'll feel like a Queen.
If I am the Queen,
It will be only a dream.

Teacher's comment: Wow, Irdina well done :) this is exactly how I feel when I read books to be honest.

NOOR AIN SYUHADA BINTI MUSTAPHA 4SAGA

2021-07-12 06:35:01 UTC

If i goes to the cinema this evening,
I'll meet him.
If i meet him,
I'll tell him that i love him.
If i tell him that i love him,
he will talk about it to his friends.

Teacher's comment: Awe I was hoping for a good ending but you left me hanging >n< but good job, Ain!

Song Li Xuan 4PNG 1

2021-07-12 07:09:45 UTC

If I don’t do homework,
My teacher will angry.
If my teacher angry,
she will call my parents.
If my parents knew,
they will scold me.
If they scold me,
I will feel sad.

Teacher's comment: In conclusion, finish your homework = no sad sad. Just kidding. Good job, Li Xuan :)

2021-07-12 09:47:19 UTC

Nur Alya Syafiqah Binti Mohd Azri 4SAGA

If we don't know each other,
I won't be in this pain.
If I'm not in this pain,
I will study hard.
If I study hard,
I will get excellent results.
If I get excellent results,
I will make both of my parents proud.

Teacher's comment: Good one, Alya! Study hard first okay then can focus on other things hehe

Nureen Aisyah Maisarah 4 Saga

2021-07-13 14:12:03 UTC

If i stay up late
I will sleep a lot at the noon
If i sleep a lot at the noon
I will get headache
If i get headache
I won’t do any house chores
If I won’t do any house chores
My mother will nag at me

Teacher's comment: Good one, Nureen! Take care ya don't stay up late too much :<

Nur Amalina Binti Abd Halim 4 SAGA

nuramalinaabdhalim — 2021-07-14 01:11:54 UTC

If I eat a lot, I will gain a weight.
If I gain a weight, I will be a lazy person.
If I be a lazy person, i will be missed the lesson.
If I missed the lesson, i will not be able to pass the exam.
If I am not be able to pass the exam, i will regret.

Teacher's comment: Moral of the story is to fight our laziness and eat a lot still hehe :D relatable poem, well done, Amalina!

Nithia Roobiny A/P Yogeswaran

ypnithiaroobiny — 2021-07-14 07:58:45 UTC

If I met a person,
I will get along with.
If I get along with them,
I will be one of their friends.
If I become one of their friend,
I get to know them.
If I get to know them,
i become a trustful person.
If I become a trustful person,
My friends will share me their secret and personal issues to get better.
If my friends shared me their secret or personal issues,
I will keep it as a secret and won't tell to anyone.

Teacher's comment: Fantastic, Nithia! Seems like you're a keeper to your friends ^^

Muhammad Muzaffar 4PNG1

kamalipadmuhd — 2021-07-14 08:06:00 UTC

If i hadn"t played Mobile legend,
I wouldn"t meet my friends.
If i hadnt" meet my friends,
My life wouldn"t been this exciting.
If my life wouldn"t be this exciting,
I wouldn"t know what is like to have a friend.

Teacher's comment: Good work, Muzaffar :) it's so much fun to have internet friends right?

Fasiha Safeerah binti Faudzi 4 PNG 1

fasihafdzi8 — 2021-07-14 08:11:14 UTC

If I don't move from my old school,
I won't get seperated from my bestfriends.
If i don't seperated with them,
I will not have new friends.
If i have new friends,
I will make a lot of new friends.
If I make a lot of new friends,
I will not forget the old ones.

Teacher's comment: Well done, Fasiha! I just love it how you're talking about friendships hehe, true friendships never die despite the distance :D

Shahrul Azan Bin Shahrul Azmi 4PNG1

shahrulazan1306 — 2021-07-14 08:15:41 UTC

if I play in studys,
I'll get bad marks.
if i get bad marks,
i will be scold.
if i been scold,
i will be deppressed.
if i been deppressed,
i've will got mental issue.

Teacher's comment: Such a serious mood and topic here ._. good job, Azan :)

AMIR ASYRAF 4 SAGA

2021-07-14 09:03:46 UTC

If i bored,
I will play mobile games,
If i play mobile games,
I will play non-stop,
If i play non-stop,
I will be lazy for school work,
If i be lazy for school work,
I will be scolded by teacher

Teacher's comment: So, don't be too addicted to mobile games ya, balance your life hehe :) well done, Amir!

Atiqah Putri Riezqi,Nur Natasha Umairah,Nur Fatihah Farhanah 4 SAGA

2021-07-14 10:04:34 UTC

If you study,you pass!
If you pass,you get happy!
If you get happy,you play!
If you play,you get tired!
If you get tired,you get sick!
If you get sick,you go to hospital!
Then the first person to worry about your condition is your parents.

Teacher's comment: Hi girls, thank you for such a great poem <3 good work!

Nur syazwani,Adriana nabiella<3

adrianabiellaaa — 2021-07-14 10:38:59 UTC

If I had money,I would go to Dubai,
If I went to Dubai,I would buy an ice cream,
If I bought an ice cream,I would be ill
If i were ill,I would go to the hospital,
If I went to the hospital,I would eat the disappointing food :(

Teacher's comment: Do you not like hospital food? They're so tasty (to me) hahah but great poem, girls! Well done, you two!

JUNI DAMIA 4SAGA

2021-07-14 12:04:01 UTC

If they were a bit understanding,
I will not be this sad.
If I am not this sad,
I will be a little bit motivated.
If I am a little bit motivated,
Everything will be much easier.

Teacher's comment: Awe this is sad and hits home :( fantastic work, Juni! But hopefully all is good <3