2014 P3 EL by Joanne Lau

Mrs Liou

joanne_liou — 2014-09-30 13:22:09 UTC

Please read this short paragraph and add the appropriate phrases to make it even more interesting.

It was the first day of school and I brought my basketball to school. During recess, Tom and I played with the basketball at the basketball court. When we were playing, Tom said, “Why not we eat something?” I said, “Yes!’

When I was home, I told Mom and Dad that I have lost the basketball. I was at loss for words They laughed at me and said, “Your brother is holding it!” From that day onward.I will take care of my things.

Blue Group

joanne_liou — 2014-09-30 14:35:30 UTC

I forgot to take my basketball with me to the canteen. I went back to the basketball court to find it but it was gone! Tom and I went around asking people whether they saw my basketball. Everyone said, “No!” except my brother. I did not ask him because I trusted him as he would not take my stuff. The recess bell rang, everyone went up to the hall. I was late because I went to the green cage and looked for my ball. After a few hours, everyone was packing up ready to go home. In the school bus,Frightening thoughts race through my mind, I was worried. I was in the brink of tears. I was over the moon when I heard the good news. Tears of joy stream down my cheeks. My eyes glittered with tears of joy i was relived and I will never lose my thing again. I will take care of everything from now on I will be responsible for my own belongings

Orange Group

joanne_liou — 2014-09-30 14:46:53 UTC

I forgot to take my basketball with me to the canteen. I went back to the basketball court to find it but it was gone! I was at loss for word. Tom and I went around asking people whether they saw my basketball. Everyone said, “No!” except my brother. I did not ask him because I trusted him as he would not take my stuff. The recess bell rang, everyone went up to the hall. I was late because I went to the green cage and looked for my ball . I was on the brink of tears. After a few hours, everyone was packing up ready to go home. In the school bus, I was very worried and my tears welled up in my eyes and began to cry .I stood rooted to the ground.

Green Group

joanne_liou — 2014-09-30 14:52:23 UTC

I forgot to take my basketball with me to the canteen. I went back to the basketball court to find it but it was gone! Tom and I went around asking people whether they saw my basketball. Everyone said, “No!” except my brother. I did not ask him because I trusted him as he would not take my stuff. The recess bell rang, everyone went up to the hall. I was late because I went to the green cage and looked for my ball. After a few hours, everyone was packing up ready to go home. In the school bus. I was worried.I was very scared that my mother will scold me.I was lost at words.I went home and told my parents that I lost my basketball.My parents told me to search the ball tomorrow angrily.I stood rooted to the ground.The next day,at recess I went to search my ball.I searched everywhere for my ball.But I could not find it.

Red Group

joanne_liou — 2014-09-30 14:53:03 UTC

I forgot to take my basketball with me to the canteen. I went back to the basketball court to find it but it was gone! I was motionless. Tom and I went around asking people whether they saw my basketball. Everyone said, “No!”he was starting to think frightening things except my brother. I did not ask him because I trusted him as he would not take my stuff. The recess bell rang and his mind. everyone went up to the hall. I was late because I went to the green cage and looked for my ball. After a few hours, everyone was packing up ready to go home. In the school bus, I was worried.Frightening thoughts race through my mind.

Yellow Group

joanne_liou — 2014-09-30 14:53:28 UTC

I forgot to take my basketball with me to the canteen. I went back to the basketball court to find it but it was gone! I stood motionless in horror I was so shocked. Tom and I went around asking people whether they saw my basketball. Everyone said, “No!” except my brother. I did not ask him because I trusted him as he would not take my stuff at all. The recess bell rang, everyone went up to the hall. Tom and I were late because I went to the green cage and look for my ball. After a few hours, everyone was packing up ready to go home. In the school bus. I was in a ~~brink of tears~~ .I was so scared because my parents will scold me.When i reach home i told my mom and dad that i lost my basketball then i was loss of words but they laughed at me and said '' your ball is with your brother ''. that day onwards i took care of my things.