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  • "Well", "You know", "I think" ✓语气自然，发音较为清晰

  • 关于Paul George的描述有细节，包含很多感想，描述逻辑通顺✓

  • 句式结构的变换和时态基本正确✓ "When I saw him..." "If I..."

  • 有尝试用多样的词汇✓，比如"afford that pain", "scary"。


    • 中间描述细节时会有卡壳，对于Paul的描述要更加熟悉、自然，需要再充分准备

    • 有些单词发音不够清晰，存在错误，"experience"不要念错

    • 语法错误要注意，"If I was him, I cannot..." -> "If I were him, I could not..."，骨折fracture, “he had an almost 90-degree fracture“，"he really turned me up"-> he really inspired and motivated me.

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  • discourse markers运用正确, 如"even","but"√

  • 语法有进步，错误较少√

  • 例子较为丰富


    • 句式都较为简单，有意识用上从句，如I love basketball which is almost a part of my life。

    • 语言重复，词汇多样性不够

      太多"also"，换成besides, apart from that；太多"important"，换成essential, part of my life

    • 例子缺乏细节，内容显得比较单薄简单。可以联系到你的role model，再丰富内容。

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