https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021 Feedback about domestic violence en-us 2021-11-14 22:32:29 UTC 2021-11-25 22:50:50 UTC hello@padlet.com knarang1 https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1889729619 2021-11-14 22:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1889729619 choward109 https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1903848667 Kyra, this is looking really good. I would suggest in your Photo Essay including at least one or two photos of a positive outcome to stopping domestic violence. Could you include a loving family shot or a group therapy shot, or a man going to jail. I guess many of your photo s are similar so I want to see more of a narrative in your photo choices. 

On another note, I sincerely hope you get a response from the minister. That would be very exciting!]]> 2021-11-20 21:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1903848667 https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1905205851 It was really good and I liked how u showed evidence of the petition but maybe have more hand gestures and speak more clearly.]]> 2021-11-22 03:40:25 UTC https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1905205851 https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1907523445 Hi Kyra! I really like your topic about domestic violence, as I agree that it is a very big problem in Australia, and the world.

What I like most about yours is how you used a lot of images and statistics in your infographic. It is very informative in a visual way, and helps the viewer put themselves in the women’s shoes. 

One point, is that maybe have a few more words that describes the first infographic. I think that it might make it a bit more decorative and powerful. 

It is a great idea how you emailed the minister of women affairs! It is amazing how you came up with that! 

One more thing with the bibliography, is that it is quite hard to tell if there are more than two sites, since they are all clumped together in one paragraph, rather than in dot points. 

Overall, this is an amazing topic!

]]> 2021-11-23 03:53:20 UTC https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1907523445 https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1907524473 Great showcase; I really like the format of the information, and I think your photo selection for the photo essay involved lots of meaning and photos that suited your topic well.

Your facts in the showcase are interesting and engaging.

 Overall your showcase was fantastic.
-Niamh Canadas]]> 2021-11-23 03:54:08 UTC https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1907524473 https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1909713404 Well done on explaining this topic and it definitely showed how passionate you were.

I really liked how you displayed the statistics and spoke through the Infograph.

One thing I would say is if you speak slower we could enjoy the page for a bit longer- was full of interesting content !

Overall good work
- Baneesha 

]]> 2021-11-24 03:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1909713404 https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1909724279 Welldone Kyra , you researched the topic very well and gathered some interesting facts about the topic.
I loved the way you presented the complete presentation by breaking them down in different categories .
Informative and pictorial presentation.
Kindly let us know when the minister responds to your request .
Good luck ]]> 2021-11-24 03:13:40 UTC https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1909724279 https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1911397988 Domestic violence is a major issue in Australia, thank you for taking action. I hope the Women Affairs minister replies to your e-mail!

- Meena]]> 2021-11-24 22:42:33 UTC https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1911397988 https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1913292847 Hi Kyra,

Well done on your website, good topic also. Domestic violence is a big issue and I want to thank you for being an agent of change. Some things I think you could work on is in your presentation try not to talk that fast, I thought you sort of rushed it a bit. ]]> 2021-11-25 22:38:13 UTC https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1913292847 https://padlet.com/knarang1/Showcase2021/wish/1913300490 Hi Kyra,
This website is amazing, during todays speech you did some improv which was really good. I also like how your inphographic was short and sharp however, one thing you could work on was your photo essay, you could include a little more joy instead of gloom, overall well don.
:)

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