https://padlet.com/27jsachkowsky/1n0ihr8dm57btpgz Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 17:57:30 UTC 2021-05-11 15:05:13 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f92a.png 27jmurray1 https://padlet.com/27jsachkowsky/1n0ihr8dm57btpgz/wish/1067450093 I really like the description that you put into your writing it made the writing stand out a lot. I think you should add a title next time ]]> 2021-01-08 15:39:38 UTC https://padlet.com/27jsachkowsky/1n0ihr8dm57btpgz/wish/1067450093 27jmurray1 https://padlet.com/27jsachkowsky/1n0ihr8dm57btpgz/wish/1513722570 hi jay! I love in your essay how you say “people that play more and more in sports they begin to make friendships and when they are done making friendships they feel more comfortable with sports”i love you went so deep into how that sports can help so much people get more into that sport. It was so cool when it said”according to pbs newshour it says study’s show that people that participate in sports have a 2.68 gpa”. I never knew that people play sports have that. I think that you could have done a little better with hooking the reader in the beginning i think you could go in more detail.]]> 2021-05-11 15:02:22 UTC https://padlet.com/27jsachkowsky/1n0ihr8dm57btpgz/wish/1513722570