https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx en-us 2016-07-19 23:38:37 UTC 2025-05-17 16:09:25 UTC hello@padlet.com davidespinel7 https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx/wish/117013328 2016-07-26 17:28:03 UTC https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx/wish/117013328 davidespinel7 https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx/wish/117014965 2016-07-26 18:01:58 UTC https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx/wish/117014965 diana_cbc https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx/wish/117083519 Comments about the Cover letter:
Great job and you completed the task. Just remember to put " For additional information about my capabilities please view my attached resume" at the end of the letter the same with sincerely that was in last last paragraph.
CV's comments
In the personal profile try to avoid repeated information and summarize the paragraph.
That's the only observation because on the rest of the document you've done a really nice work.


]]> 2016-07-27 17:33:51 UTC https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx/wish/117083519 https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx/wish/117306953 Hi David. It's an impressive CV. Even though you don't have a lot of working experience you managed to include a lot of information that will appeal to any company or organization. Nice work! Nevertheless, I recommend that you change the wording to make it sound more personal. At some points, it sounds like a little "cliche". As well, be careful with the chart related to your use of languages. Make sure to change the template accordingly. I would also say that you can simplify the profile so that you avoid repetition of the information that you have later in the document. The paragraph you wrote sounds more appropriate for the Cover Letter. The section in which you used the connector "likewise" is not clear. Please, feel free to ask any questions you may have. Keep up the hard work.]]> 2016-08-01 16:45:00 UTC https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx/wish/117306953 https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx/wish/117307344 Hi David. I think it's a very good Cover letter that makes a good complement for the CV. You're highlighting not only your strengths, but also the company's quality. I can see you find team work very important because you're emphasizing that a lot. I'll bet companies will find that very positive. Just make sure to use language in the letter that you'll be able to support in the case of a job interview in English. ;-) Keep up the hard work.]]> 2016-08-01 16:54:32 UTC https://padlet.com/davidespinel7/1m992q667fyx/wish/117307344