https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz Write 1-2 sentences answering the ff. questions: (a) Among the three traits (ideas, organization and word choice), which trait do I need to improve on? (b) How can the 6+1 Writing Traits help me become a better writer? en-us 2016-09-26 03:40:10 UTC 2025-10-05 23:43:27 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768071 2016-10-03 01:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768071 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768072 a. I need to work on my word choice because I need to properly know the meaning of the word

b. The 6+1 Traits can help me in being a better writer by making my words more meaningful and more stories that have sense in it.]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:28 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768072 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768078 Organization because I do not organize well on my ideas.It gives me ideas on how I improve on writing and helps me understand the tired word]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:30 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768078 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768079 Word Choice is the trait I need to improve on because I always use Tired words and even sometimes I don't even like my paragraph because I use too much tired words and it looks like a grade 2 boys work.b) 6+1 writing traits can help me become a better writer because 6+1 writing traits teach you how to improve your work like word choice it helps you improve your words instead of you always using tired words.]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:31 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768079 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768080 A: Among the 3 traits I need to improve on word choice because most readers like enthusiasms in what they read in a certain text instead of reading the same word like for example reading the word big over and over again in a text instead of reading the word huge.  
B: the 6+1 writing traits can help me to be a better writer by being organized in what I write  so that the readers will not be confused in what I'm writing about and know exactly what I'm writing ]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:32 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768080 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768084 Among the three traits (ideas,organization and word choice,the trait I need to improve on is voice because sometimes I forget how to express my feelings in the text I am reading.The 6+1 traits can help me become a better writer by helping me to express my feelings in the text I am reading.

]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:34 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768084 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768087 Ideas because I have a difficult time brainstorming for ideas. The 6 plus 1 traits of writing can help me by writing with more feeli]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:36 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768087 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768088 2016-10-03 01:56:36 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768088 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768089 I need to improve on my "organization" because in the activity a scrambled up some sentences]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:36 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768089 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768090 I need to improve on ideas because,all of my ideas are not interesting and in my ideas,when ever I convert it into a story there are tired words. By showing me how to make better stories and phrases and to become a writer one day and to help me in my tests.]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:36 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768090 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768094 Ryul]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:38 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768094 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768095 The 6+1 writing traits can help me become a better writer by mastering it to make a better and more organized sentences.]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:38 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768095 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768097 2016-10-03 01:56:39 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768097 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768100 A) Among the 3 writing 
traits I need to improve on ideas because for me I think slow or I can't think of anything so I think I need to Improve on it.

B) The 6+1 writing traits can help me becoming a better writer by teaching me the base of it and how to make it interesting.

-Ethan Chiang 5H]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:40 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768100 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768102 I need to improve on my ideas.6+1writting traits helps me by not using the same words over and over again.]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:41 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768102 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768105 2016-10-03 01:56:41 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768105 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768106 (]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:42 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768106 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768110 A.I need to improve on my word choice because sometimes I use tired wordsB.It can help me bynot  using tired w]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768110 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768111 (A)The writing trait I need to improve on is organization.
(B)The 6+1 writing traits can make me a better writer by helping me to use words that are not tired
-Joaquin Anton]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768111 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768112 2016-10-03 01:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768112 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768113 2016-10-03 01:56:45 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768113 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768114 (A)word choice because I always use tired words
(B)They help because I remember them and do every trait

]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:45 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768114 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768116 The trait you need to improveon is ideas so you can be a good writer if you have a lot of ideas for your poem

]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:46 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768116 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768117 2016-10-03 01:56:48 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768117 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768120 I need to improve on ideas because some of my ideas are not that interesting and organization when I write my essay

]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:48 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768120 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768122 Ideas because most of the time when I write essays I lack ideas to make my essay better.      B It can help me because when I grow up my job will sometimes might have essay so I can write the essay properly.

]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:50 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768122 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768123 The trait]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:50 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768123 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768124 2016-10-03 01:56:50 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768124 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768126 2016-10-03 01:56:54 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768126 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768135 Because i always answer with tired words.

6+1 traits in writing can help me become a better writer because it can help me organize,help me to stop putting tired words and ideas]]> 2016-10-03 01:56:58 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768135 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768136 A)Organization
B)It can make my writing better by helping me organize well and always keep my essay well and neat to the eye also by keeping my words not tired words]]> 2016-10-03 01:57:00 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768136 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768147 I need to improve on ideas because it is the main thing without ideas it will make no sense.
2.it could help you become a better writer because ifyou use it properly it would have an effect to the story you are trying to say.]]> 2016-10-03 01:57:04 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768147 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768148 2016-10-03 01:57:05 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768148 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768150 I need to improve on my ideas , 6+1 Writing Traits
can he help me become
a better writer when I keep
brainstorming.]]> 2016-10-03 01:57:06 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768150 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768163 A)I need to improve on word choice.
B)The 6+1 writing traits help me become a better writer by telling me to make my ideas clearer,to avoid tired words and to put sentences in order.
-Gyan]]> 2016-10-03 01:57:13 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768163 juanmiguelbanzuela https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768164 I can improve on word choice because in my paragraphs or sentences I usuall]]> 2016-10-03 01:57:14 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768164 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768186 2016-10-03 01:57:29 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768186 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768196 I need to improve on word choice because I always think of tired words. The 6+1 writing traits can help me by always reviewing them and practicing them.

]]> 2016-10-03 01:57:36 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768196 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768197 2016-10-03 01:57:36 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768197 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768198 I really need to improve on org]]> 2016-10-03 01:57:36 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768198 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768202 2016-10-03 01:57:37 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768202 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768203 2016-10-03 01:57:37 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768203 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768218 2016-10-03 01:57:42 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768218 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768232 I need to improve on word choice because my sentences are not that interesting.6+1 Writing Traits can help me become a better writer because it makes your story so interesting that it will pull and interest people to read your story]]> 2016-10-03 01:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768232 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768299 The trait that I need to improve on is]]> 2016-10-03 01:58:44 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768299 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768301 2016-10-03 01:58:46 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768301 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768314 I can improve on ideas]]> 2016-10-03 01:58:54 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768314 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768316 2016-10-03 01:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768316 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768363 Ideas because I can never get my ideas straight.It can help me by making a more interesting sentence 

]]> 2016-10-03 01:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768363 juanmiguelbanzuela https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768383 I can improve on word choice because in my sentences I usually use tired words 
The6+1 writing traits can help me become a better writer by word ch]]> 2016-10-03 01:59:39 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768383 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768389 Organization because my work is always messy &sometimes  my handwriting in script is bad


]]> 2016-10-03 01:59:44 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768389 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768392 I really need to improve on organization because I can't organize]]> 2016-10-03 01:59:47 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768392 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768395 I]]> 2016-10-03 01:59:48 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768395 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768415 2016-10-03 02:00:16 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768415 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768423 A. The trait that I need to improve on is organization.           B. The 6+1 writing traits are important because we need it to organize and complete our PNE.]]> 2016-10-03 02:00:25 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768423 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768463 The 6+1 writing traits can help me in writing because it's like a guide]]> 2016-10-03 02:00:55 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768463 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768473 the trait I need to improve on is my word choice because I mostly use tired words it can help me become a better writer because it can help me make a better sentence]]> 2016-10-03 02:01:01 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768473 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768478 ORGANIZATION 

]]> 2016-10-03 02:01:05 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768478 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768512 I really need to improve on organization because I can't organize my words properly.It can help me understand what it means]]> 2016-10-03 02:01:35 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768512 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768643 Juaqui]]> 2016-10-03 02:03:20 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768643 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768644 organization
It helps
Sean ramirez]]> 2016-10-03 02:03:22 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127768644 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127782678 2016-10-03 06:04:25 UTC https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/127782678 https://padlet.com/riagalo831/1m37tu9yj2wz/wish/128356592 David 

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