https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7 Using theatrical terminology, please leave the group some feedback on their performance. Please leave your name next to your comments. It goes without saying, that you need to be respectful towards each other. en-us 2017-03-01 14:46:50 UTC 2017-03-03 13:45:07 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157186408 The use of the ensemble made the piece very nightmarish. There were a wide range of vocals from high pitch to fast paced, however sometimes it was hard to understand what was being said because it was too fast. I think to improve, sometimes Halona had her back to the audience and sometimes you could see that you all didn't know what to do next. Overall the piece worked out really well, I just think a little more practice would have stopped this.]]> 2017-03-01 21:37:59 UTC https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157186408 14carrie_algart https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157294747 I felt that the change in voices was good even though some, like Nick's, voice could have been fit better to his character because it made him sound like he was the old lady.
 The characterisation of all the characters was good especially Abby because her voice was different and the pce change from how it is normally.
I felt that the characterisation could have been improved but everyone but it did feel nightmarish.]]> 2017-03-02 12:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157294747 14walkden_mcgradyi https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157294829 The ensemble was used quite a lot in this piece such as in the beginning with the scenery. The gait for the characters were fantastically over exaggerated but didn't always fit the characters. However, stage space could have been better during Erin's death (which could have been centre stage). The voices didn't always fit the characters either, like with Nick's police officer having a squeaky voice.]]> 2017-03-02 12:41:45 UTC https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157294829 https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157295714 Good use of ensemble and stage space very nightmarish and enjoyable, I still think that gestures could be improved but a great performance on the whole.]]> 2017-03-02 12:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157295714 https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157297543 I really liked the different use of thier voices and all of the different uses of pitch and I think the start captured the nightmareish way that Berkoff uses.]]> 2017-03-02 12:54:34 UTC https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157297543 https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157297630 I found this piece interesting and loved watching it and it was nightmarish but you could of maybe practised more so you didn't get lost in the sections

]]> 2017-03-02 12:55:01 UTC https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157297630 https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157297783 I really liked the way that Nicks voice was different to everyone else's and that all of their voices were different either in pitch or volume.]]> 2017-03-02 12:55:43 UTC https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157297783 https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157378339 I think that your performance was great. The use of gait was amazing and abbi's part was great as it was very tense when the scene of the murder came I also like the creativity of the piece as you had a twist at the end which revealed that Halona's character actually killed her own father. However I think you could've improved on not hesitating and the voices suited to people's characters like Nicks]]> 2017-03-02 16:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157378339 https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157593514 Your ensemble work was very effective I also liked your use of sound effects at the beginning there was some drifting in and out of performing but besides that it was a really good piece]]> 2017-03-03 13:05:05 UTC https://padlet.com/spatchett/1m25t8dz32d7/wish/157593514