https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor en-us 2023-01-27 05:09:39 UTC 2023-02-04 01:37:00 UTC hello@padlet.com qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458559771






]]> 2023-01-27 05:16:46 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458559771 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458560051 In the article ‘Growing up near green space is good for your mental health as an adult’, Johny Wood provided the readers with a survey made by Aarhus University in Denmark that shows the importance green space for adult's mental health condition. The survey studied 1 million Danes and calculate the vegetation density around their dwelling far back to 1980. ]]> 2023-01-27 05:17:24 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458560051 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458562809


]]> 2023-01-27 05:23:22 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458562809 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458565542 The conclusion, according to Wood, According to Wood, the conclusion was that green space during childhood affect affects people's mental conditions. ]]> 2023-01-27 05:28:28 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458565542 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458574943


]]> 2023-01-27 05:47:03 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458574943 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458575611 Wood admitted that the researchers did have difficulties distinguishing the data types and considering the external factors. ]]> 2023-01-27 05:48:31 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458575611 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458576023



]]> 2023-01-27 05:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458576023 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458577177 And while the reasons of researching result for researching results were yet to be provided, said Woods, the researchers claimed that their results were consistent to with other similar investigations on this field. ]]> 2023-01-27 05:51:52 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458577177 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458583279 I put "According to Wood" in front of "the conclusion" so that the sentence is clear. I add an "s" behind "affect" since "green space" is third person singular.]]> 2023-01-27 06:02:57 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458583279 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458587079 I change "of" into "for", "to" into "with" because these are the correct way to use prepositional phrases. ]]> 2023-01-27 06:10:26 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458587079 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458590229

]]> 2023-01-27 06:16:29 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458590229 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458590449 Before my college career in Unite States, I lived in a Chinese megacity called Guangzhou. ]]> 2023-01-27 06:16:52 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458590449 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458590908


]]> 2023-01-27 06:17:50 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458590908 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458591804 As a city that has with more than l0 million population in residence residents, the city is crowded everywhere, especially for the city center that where I lived nearby. ]]> 2023-01-27 06:19:41 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458591804 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458596152 I rewrite the first part of the sentence to avoid miscellaneous. I use "where" to replace "that" because it is about the place I live.]]> 2023-01-27 06:28:04 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458596152 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458596290









]]> 2023-01-27 06:28:21 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458596290 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458596590 At about nine o'clock on weekdays, if you take a look at the subway station, you can see people pouring out of the station and into the buildings. The design and location of those skyscrapers are also interesting. On the map, all the skyscrapers are built around a canoe-shape park. The park is like the Central Park but just smaller. It is filled with trees, benches, bike lane. artificial lake, and music fountain, There is even a large shopping mall underneath. On weekdays, even if the city center is crowded and noisy, this park is always quiet and peaceful. ]]> 2023-01-27 06:28:54 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458596590 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458597082


]]> 2023-01-27 06:29:45 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458597082 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458597929 Whenever I felt a little bit stress out stress-out, I would came come downstairs and took a walk in the park. ]]> 2023-01-27 06:31:20 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458597929 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458600503 I use "stress-out" instead of "stress out" because stress-out is a special phrase. I replace "came" with "come" because would is a modal verb followed by a verb prototype.]]> 2023-01-27 06:36:30 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458600503 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458600624





]]> 2023-01-27 06:36:51 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458600624 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458600933 I could smell the fresh air, listen to birds' singing, and take a look of the fountain show. Normally, after a round trip, all the bad mood and pressure in my head are gone. That is the magic of this park, that in a fast-living city center, there is still a quiet place for people to take a deep breath and relax. ]]> 2023-01-27 06:37:36 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458600933 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458603682

]]> 2023-01-27 06:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458603682 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458605485 When I took a trip to Chicago to see my friend this winter, he showed me around the city and took me to well-known scenic spots such as the financial district, Willis Tower, and Cloud Gate.]]> 2023-01-27 06:47:15 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458605485 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458607578 I rewrite it because the first sentence in my original context is not a complete sentence, replace "show" with "showed" because it is past tense, and get rid of "and so on" since it is informal in essay.]]> 2023-01-27 06:51:02 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458607578 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458607835



]]> 2023-01-27 06:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458607835 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458608085 While enjoying the view, I was very curious to find out that the design style of urban areas among U.S cites are quite different from Chinese ones. In big cities like New York or Chicago, you won’t see a single tree on the street. Instead, you can find a park which takes about ten-minutes on foot whenever you are. ]]> 2023-01-27 06:52:01 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458608085 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458615634

]]> 2023-01-27 07:04:29 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458615634 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458621100 Since there is are no trees beside the road, the layout of the streets are streets' layout is more organized.]]> 2023-01-27 07:13:21 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458621100 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458626188 I replace "is" with "are" because "trees" is plural. I change "layout of the streets" into "streets' layout" since it is more compact and less complicated. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:21:04 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458626188 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458626425

]]> 2023-01-27 07:21:24 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458626425 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458626730 What's more. you have specific regions (parks) for people to relax, which is more quiet and peaceful.]]> 2023-01-27 07:21:50 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458626730 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458630413




]]> 2023-01-27 07:27:03 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458630413 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458630741 The main idea of Tulsa Remote program is to let people that have remote-work jobs come and live in Tulsa. Have you ever thought about that before? What's your choice? Personally, I prefer to have offline work rather than remote-work that based in another city, especially in the States. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:27:27 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458630741 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458631234


]]> 2023-01-27 07:28:10 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458631234 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458631691 To me, the problem is that America has 4 different time zone, and jet lag is going to be an issue. For example, if If I live in LA but have a remote-work job in New York, that means I have to start working at 6 in the morning. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:28:57 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458631691 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458634230 I add this since I am going to write an example I made after that. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:32:06 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458634230 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458634924 2023-01-27 07:33:02 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458634924 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458636139 Another major issue is the efficiency. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:34:28 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458636139 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458636422 Spelling mistake.]]> 2023-01-27 07:34:52 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458636422 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458636573


]]> 2023-01-27 07:35:06 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458636573 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458636733 I always believe that meeting people in-person is the fastest way to solve problems. On the contrary, if I choose remote-work, a lot of time will be wasted on online-communication. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:35:20 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458636733 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458641604

]]> 2023-01-27 07:41:13 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458641604 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458641813 Do you want to live in New York? Why or why not? Personally speaking, I want to live in New York. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:41:26 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458641813 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458642221

]]> 2023-01-27 07:41:55 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458642221 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458643739 Because comparing compared to other cities in the nation and even the world, New York is much more diverse. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:43:00 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458643739 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458647491 I change "comparing" into "compared" because it is a passive voice, and compared as a past participle has a passive meaning.  I replace the period after "in the world" with a comma because the sentence does not end.]]> 2023-01-27 07:47:25 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458647491 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458648633 2023-01-27 07:48:56 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458648633 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458648958 When you walk on the street, you can hear several kinds of different languages. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:49:22 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458648958 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458649274 2023-01-27 07:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458649274 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458650464 When you take a the subway, you can find those street artists performing in the station. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:51:12 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458650464 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458651517 I use the because "the" refers specifically to the New York subway.]]> 2023-01-27 07:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458651517 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458651704



]]> 2023-01-27 07:52:35 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458651704 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458651970 Things like wearing special costumes in subway only happen in New York. If you are hungry. you can find every cuisine you want. from high-end French restaurants all the way to Mexican food trucks. This city is so inclusive that you will find a sense of belonging wherever you come from. ]]> 2023-01-27 07:52:55 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2458651970 qiweiwu1 https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2459441003 2023-01-27 20:22:52 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2459441003 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461825865 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/words-word-form-word-choice-and-word-order-10/ ]]> 2023-01-30 17:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461825865 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461827193 see
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/06/noun-modification/
and
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/cohesion-with-this-these-such-and-so/ ]]> 2023-01-30 17:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461827193 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461827785 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/03/articles-determiners-and-quantifiers-25/ ]]> 2023-01-30 17:47:16 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461827785 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461830702 see
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/73/ 
and
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/27/verb-form/ ]]> 2023-01-30 17:49:02 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461830702 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461832107 You're making too many edits in this assignment. The maximum number of edits is ten.]]> 2023-01-30 17:49:55 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461832107 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461834527 https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/14/a-transitional-idea-is-missing/ ]]> 2023-01-30 17:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461834527 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461835235 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/verb-tenses-and-time-meanings-17/ ]]> 2023-01-30 17:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461835235 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461836186 see
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2017/12/03/try-reducing-a-dependent-clause-to-reduce-wordiness/
and
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/verb-tenses-and-time-meanings-5/ ]]> 2023-01-30 17:52:32 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461836186 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461837700 https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/14/a-transitional-idea-is-missing/


]]> 2023-01-30 17:53:38 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461837700 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461855002 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/conditionals/ ]]> 2023-01-30 18:04:30 UTC https://padlet.com/qiweiwu1/1lrtmn209k87tmor/wish/2461855002