What Makes a Memoir? by Meredith Holtmann https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6 Add a comment telling what you noticed in the piece of writing that makes it a memoir! en-us 2019-10-14 15:03:04 UTC 2019-10-15 19:11:54 UTC hello@padlet.com meredithholtmann https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/397463107 2019-10-14 15:05:43 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/397463107 meredithholtmann https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/397463774 2019-10-14 15:06:55 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/397463774 meredithholtmann https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/397463999 2019-10-14 15:07:16 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/397463999 meredithholtmann https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/397464088 2019-10-14 15:07:25 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/397464088 meredithholtmann https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/397464277 2019-10-14 15:07:47 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/397464277 https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398118158 home was about the moments the person moved to go to the person new home and it makes it a memoir because the person is telling and moment in the persons live that changed the live forever and that is a memoir ok bye 
  
 ]]> 2019-10-15 18:54:32 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398118158 I notice that he remembers this moment very well, and added a lot of detail https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398118187 2019-10-15 18:54:34 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398118187 she described all of the nonhuman objects with great detail 27briannakyle https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398118503 2019-10-15 18:55:09 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398118503 Evan 27evanmiller https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398118973 I noticed he said every one thing abut the park the name the coaster and that he felt butterflies in his stomach]]> 2019-10-15 18:55:47 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398118973 https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398119733 She try's
 to speak up]]> 2019-10-15 18:56:59 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398119733 27peytonsmith https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120158 i noticed ]]> 2019-10-15 18:57:43 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120158 I think that Kelly going to the circus scared her. https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120182

]]> 2019-10-15 18:57:46 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120182 she had a big moment were she relised somthing was wrong and that wasnt her 27briannakyle https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120430 2019-10-15 18:58:08 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120430 Joanna 27joannazheng https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120593 I notice that she put a lot of detail in her story

   ]]> 2019-10-15 18:58:22 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120593 27lilaellsworth https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120620 2019-10-15 18:58:25 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120620 I noticed: 27marydestinyrussell https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120875 A memoir is about a part of your life that was important and Kelly had a really good example]]> 2019-10-15 18:58:51 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120875 27benjaminrothe https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120978 I noticed that she added a lot of dialogue. ]]> 2019-10-15 18:59:02 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398120978 Lila 27lilaellsworth https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398121050 She realited her problem to a book]]> 2019-10-15 18:59:10 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398121050 Eva 27evaseher https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398121779 I noticed she had a lot of detail and had some dialogue

]]> 2019-10-15 19:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398121779 she never gave up on talking https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398121786 2019-10-15 19:00:25 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398121786 https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398121949 I]]> 2019-10-15 19:00:42 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398121949 Evan 27evanmiller https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122036 I noticed that he stretched out a part into a paragraph]]> 2019-10-15 19:00:51 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122036 she used many good reasons 27isabellaansell https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122111 2019-10-15 19:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122111 https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122140 I really showed his feelings ]]> 2019-10-15 19:01:02 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122140 I noticed that there was a lot of inner thinking in the story, which made it more detailed https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122223 2019-10-15 19:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122223 their was a lot of details on the big moment 27briannakyle https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122383 2019-10-15 19:01:29 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122383 she went on a on a cruise and she felt more cozily when overbidding others https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122392 2019-10-15 19:01:30 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122392 27lilaellsworth https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122407 he talked about all his memories of his old house


]]> 2019-10-15 19:01:34 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122407 she thought that she wanted to be older but the she noticed that she didn't want to grow up yet https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122551 2019-10-15 19:01:49 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122551 https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122599 the person was telling a small moment that change the live forever and what is making a memoir a memoir ]]> 2019-10-15 19:01:55 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122599 Adis 27adisletic https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122650 their Memoir had a lot of detail and they listed a lot of reasons for their Memoir and they gave a lot of detail in each of their paragraphs.]]> 2019-10-15 19:02:00 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122650 N 27nolafrank https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122864 she had a big moment where she didn't speak up for herself. ]]> 2019-10-15 19:02:26 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398122864 he was good at explaining everything that happens 27isabellaansell https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398123510

]]> 2019-10-15 19:03:45 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398123510 https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398123627 paragraphs were on point

]]> 2019-10-15 19:03:59 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398123627 27benjaminrothe https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398123689 I noticed that he really stretched out that small moment.]]> 2019-10-15 19:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398123689 he shared his sadness with his own feelings https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398124203 2019-10-15 19:05:03 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398124203 27evaseher https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398124333 very detailed and it showed how he felt and how that day was .]]> 2019-10-15 19:05:20 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398124333 Dest, I noticed: 27marydestinyrussell https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398124458 Emily wanted to grow up but she also noticed later that she didn't  want to grow up! I noticed a memoir is like a story that is real and changed your life !]]> 2019-10-15 19:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398124458 she thought she would be like her sister if she dressed up and said some thing but then she noticed she was better to be herself 27kaybreejordan https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398124524 2019-10-15 19:05:42 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398124524 Adis 27adisletic https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398125175 they put a lot of detail for all of the moments of playing with his or hers brothers they had a great time at that house but then they will make even better memories at their new house.]]> 2019-10-15 19:06:57 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398125175 https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398125344 All paragraphs showed lot's of detail about his life

]]> 2019-10-15 19:07:20 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398125344 27joannazheng https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398125569 I notice there was a lot of dialogue ]]> 2019-10-15 19:07:46 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398125569 27peytonsmith https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398125595 they gave a lot of detail ]]> 2019-10-15 19:07:49 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398125595 27nolafrank https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398126460 she thought that her sister would still play with her... until she went to middle school her sister changed ]]> 2019-10-15 19:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398126460 She made a lot of details and examples to prove her point. https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398127026 2019-10-15 19:10:56 UTC https://padlet.com/meredithholtmann/1l7qf2c2x3n6/wish/398127026