Pocessfolio Writing by Pakkad Suksawang https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9 Waranya Suksawang 18421850 (Pat) en-us 2018-04-30 18:22:31 UTC 2025-11-22 15:43:58 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/File.png Feedback from tutor pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/274012544 Task 1
Strengths:
- Evaluative comments included in the task which demonstrate your stance. 
- There are informative summary points included which detail the main ideas in the article. 

- Some tense issues, incorrect word forms and incomplete sentences. More thorough proof-reading is needed
- Keep working on the evaluative comments including adjectives and adverbs from Lesson 2.1 on criticality. 
]]> 2018-08-20 10:40:07 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/274012544 Reflections pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/274012598 Task 2
  • There are a number of area that I need to improve such as I can not paraphrase very well, I need to think about how to avoid using the same word as authors. 
  • I can write the good references. The structure of my quite clear.
]]> 2018-08-20 10:40:36 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/274012598 Task 1 final pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/274012615 2018-08-20 10:40:48 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/274012615 Task 2 final pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/274012628 2018-08-20 10:40:57 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/274012628 Task 3 final pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/274012642 2018-08-20 10:41:05 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/274012642 10 minutes discussion about 3 articles pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/276169180
  • I have been talking with some classmates about my all 3 articles, shared some ideas because i’m Facing a problem in my articles 3. It is rather difficult to understand everything and I can not write the summary of it well.
  • My friends suggested me that it would be great if I can read all of it even I do not understand but i will understand some area and link it in to another article that would be enough.
  • What I have learnt is that I do not have to try to understand everything in the articles. What I have to do is that understand the main ideas of the author and link it. Also if I do not understand something this will relate to the evaluation part.
  • About the articles, all of my articles are about business and innovation so I know more about innovation such as what does it mean, how are they related in the business.
  • In current life, the innovation play more significant role in the big company. The innovation is the driver of improvement in business.
  • Read something similar related to my article er can share some idea.
    • ]]>     2018-08-29 10:51:54 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/276169180     Additional sources to help me >> Stance pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/276171754
    http://www.uefap.com/writing/function/stance.htm

    ]]>     2018-08-29 11:11:30 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/276171754     Peer reviewed from classmate pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/276174535 Task 2]]> 2018-08-29 11:31:43 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/276174535 Peer review from classmate pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/276176191 Task 3 (1)]]> 2018-08-29 11:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/276176191 Tutor comments pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277174515 Task 3]]> 2018-09-02 20:30:32 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277174515 Peer review from classmate pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277175011 Task 3 (2)]]> 2018-09-02 20:37:03 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277175011 Peer review from classmate pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277175074 Task 3 (3)]]> 2018-09-02 20:37:55 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277175074 Additional sources to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277175866 2018-09-02 20:49:12 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277175866 Additional sources to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277266854 I might apply this on task 3]]> 2018-09-03 09:06:07 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277266854 Abstract pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277270227 In this processfolio. I will present task1-3 and show the process of my writing. I have included my reflection in every task after i have done the writing. My reflection analyse and demonstrate the area that i think i need to improve. such as from task 2, I can not paraphrase very well, I need to think about how to avoid using the same word as authors in task 3. 

    ]]>     2018-09-03 09:25:02 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277270227     Note before writing task 3 final pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277271068 After I got some peers review from partner and tutor. I decided to rewrite it a again by taking main ideas, collect some information that link with task 2 ]]> 2018-09-03 09:29:50 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277271068 Additional sources to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277272190 Reporting verb ]]> 2018-09-03 09:36:19 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277272190 Additional sources to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277272347 2018-09-03 09:37:23 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277272347 Additional sources to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277272425 Link]]> 2018-09-03 09:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277272425 Additional sources to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277272515 Link]]> 2018-09-03 09:38:36 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277272515 Additional sources to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277272867 Note about evaluation ]]> 2018-09-03 09:41:16 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277272867 Draft pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277380654 P.2]]> 2018-09-04 00:08:44 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/277380654 Feedback from tutor pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278180535 Task 2
    Strengths:
    - An informative summary of Gassman et al.
    - Excellent referencing and citations. Try to use some non-integral citations next time.

    Areas to improve:
    - Some areas of patchwork plagiarism. Please try to paraphrase more closely.
    - Next time, try to add more synthesis between your articles. use the phrases from the Manchester Phrasebank.]]>     2018-09-05 19:58:28 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278180535     additional source to help mme pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278185094 Being Critical]]> 2018-09-05 20:12:42 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278185094 additional source to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278193484  Quoting, Paraphrasing and Summarising :
    This source can help me to improve the area of plagiarism from task 2.]]>     2018-09-05 20:33:06 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278193484     additional source to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278194661  Sentence Starters, Transitional and Other Useful Words ]]> 2018-09-05 20:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278194661 additional source to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278194950  Descriptive, Analytical, Critical/Evaluative, Reflective Writing Compared ]]> 2018-09-05 20:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278194950 draft pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278196066 P.2]]> 2018-09-05 20:44:28 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278196066 draft pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278196176 P.1]]> 2018-09-05 20:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278196176 draft pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278196659  ]]> 2018-09-05 20:46:51 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278196659 Reflection pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278204025 It quite difficult to think in the critical way. I also need to learn more about the vocabulary that may help in the Evaluation part.]]> 2018-09-05 21:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278204025 Reflection pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278204082 On this task i have seen some area that i improved. i feel more confident with my writing even it might be a large number of area that i need to improve in my future course. Also this time i feel more comfortable on account of there are 400 words count which will be enough for the summary and evaluation.]]> 2018-09-05 21:17:34 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278204082 Draft pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278216018 P.1]]> 2018-09-05 22:29:21 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278216018 additional source to help me pakkad_kkk https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278216306 due to i have a number of grammar area to improve. i used this source to be the model of my writing task 2.]]> 2018-09-05 22:31:17 UTC https://padlet.com/pakkad_kkk/1kr5hmzwnhc9/wish/278216306