https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m Please post in each column then heart of your peer's comments en-us 2020-10-06 17:28:49 UTC 2020-10-06 18:57:34 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/807996764 - The rubric helped ]]> 2020-10-06 18:38:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/807996764 abigail262197 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/807997558 "In Greed We Trust" can be applied to economic, cultural and social, as well as ethical. Shumaker exemplifies the effects of greed towards the consumer economy and how it changes our culture in terms of financial gain and intentions. He also provided claims about its effect on children as well as how it can change mindsets towards a more irrational or stressed attitude.]]> 2020-10-06 18:38:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/807997558 nicole2451944 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/807998802 Economic, ethical, environmental, historical, cultural, and futuristic lenses can be applied to "In Greed We Trust." ]]> 2020-10-06 18:38:37 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/807998802 briana264687 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/807999242 - allowed me to completely understand how to incorporate specific details in my writing ]]> 2020-10-06 18:38:44 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/807999242 shonn1620639 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808000811 I just reviewed the samples and made sure to include all parts of it.

]]> 2020-10-06 18:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808000811 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808001051 2020-10-06 18:39:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808001051 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808001637 It was a good guide of what we should have done, and helped me understand how I could make my writing more comprehensive ]]> 2020-10-06 18:39:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808001637 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808002176 2020-10-06 18:39:28 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808002176 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808003779 I used the guidelines to guide my writing because it was very helpful. The guidelines told me to add more description and what to do to be successful.]]> 2020-10-06 18:39:54 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808003779 nicole2451944 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808004631 The samples gave me a good idea of how long and profuse the response should have been. The rubric helped me find areas where I could improve.]]> 2020-10-06 18:40:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808004631 steven_266230 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808005575 The samples and rubric let me know what elements I had to include in my answers.]]> 2020-10-06 18:40:22 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808005575 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808008498 It gave me a good idea on how detailed my responses should be. 
I was able to be more concise and to the point in my responses.

]]> 2020-10-06 18:40:50 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808008498 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808008994 Ethical, environmental, economic, historical, cultural and futuristic lenses can all be applied to "In Greed We Trust".]]> 2020-10-06 18:40:59 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808008994 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808009460 We can apply the economic, social, ethical, and philosophical because he makes us really think about the world and how money is affecting us as hunans.]]> 2020-10-06 18:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808009460 nicole2451944 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808010457 To be more successful, I have to learn to write and gather my thoughts more quickly. I also need to become a bit more fluent with the requirements on the rubric.]]> 2020-10-06 18:41:19 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808010457 briana264687 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808010507 ethical and economic ]]> 2020-10-06 18:41:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808010507 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808012056 2020-10-06 18:41:28 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808012056 grace1902538 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808012349 - historical (decrease in happiness from 1970s to 1990s)
- ethical (greed causes decrease in happiness ~> is it really worth the increase in the economy caused by greed? )
- social (public health crisis in children)
- futuristic (increasing obesity epidemic in children; how will long-term unhappiness affect personal health, productivity, etc.?)
- scientific (psychology of greed and how it affects mental/physical health)
- environmental (increase in manufacturing  ~> pollution ~> bad for the environment b/c of greenhouse gases and loss of nonrenewable resources) 
 ]]> 2020-10-06 18:41:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808012349 abigail262197 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808013119 In order to be more successful with Part A, I need to expand my vocabulary and work on connecting two different thoughts together.]]> 2020-10-06 18:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808013119 katrina323711 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808013208 The samples and rubric guide helped me get a clear understanding of what was expected in my responses.]]> 2020-10-06 18:41:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808013208 briana264687 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808013923 In order to be more successful, I need to be able to manage my time better and use direct quotes (evidence) from the text]]> 2020-10-06 18:41:57 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808013923 abigail262197 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808015234 The samples and rubric guide helped give me insight about what the exam itself is looking for in our responses. Knowing what is acceptable and what isn't is important in formulating an answer to a question.]]> 2020-10-06 18:42:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808015234 kayla252363 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808015557 I think moving forward, I need to incorporate more of the vocabulary used in the rubric and be able to think quicker when I'm forming my responses. 

]]> 2020-10-06 18:42:23 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808015557 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808015732 To be more successful, I need to incorporate evidence because I struggle with that the most. 

]]> 2020-10-06 18:42:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808015732 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808017177 I need to learn how to combine my thoughts better and how to stay relevant to the subject. 

]]> 2020-10-06 18:42:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808017177 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808017191 To be more successful, I need to work on my wording and not use casual language. In addition, I need to incorporate my thoughts on the logic behind the arguments presented without including my own personal morals and ideals. ]]> 2020-10-06 18:42:47 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808017191 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808018502 To be more successful, I need to become less wordy when writing responses and to more closely analyze the passage so that I can describe everything that is discussed in the stimulus in my response.]]> 2020-10-06 18:43:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808018502 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808018887 In order to be more successful in my answers, I need to be able to comprehend and analyze all aspects of an excerpt quicker. Identifying the most accurate argument and thorough lines of reasoning and evidence are essential when answering these questions, and I may need more practice.]]> 2020-10-06 18:43:13 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808018887 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808019146 social, ethics, economics 

]]> 2020-10-06 18:43:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808019146 shonn1620639 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808023057 I need to write my responses with more evidence.

]]> 2020-10-06 18:44:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808023057 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808023126 Moving forward, to be more successful with Part A, I need to analyze the passage more. I rushed through the passage at first which is what caused me to make errors. I now know that I need to carefully analyze the passage.]]> 2020-10-06 18:44:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808023126 katrina323711 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808023520 cultural and social, ethical, economic, historical]]> 2020-10-06 18:44:25 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808023520 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808024836 2020-10-06 18:44:46 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808024836 grace1902538 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808027941 2020-10-06 18:45:35 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808027941 steven_266230 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808029028 Cultural, ethical, and economic lenses can be applied to "In Greed We Trust" through how modern day society and economics is based off greed.]]> 2020-10-06 18:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808029028 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808031942 At first glance, "In Greed We Trust" can be looked at through an economic, social, and ethical lense.]]> 2020-10-06 18:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808031942 steven_266230 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808038535 I need to be able to make a more concise answer in order to be more successful with Part A to avoid rambling. ]]> 2020-10-06 18:48:26 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808038535 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808040281 The samples and rubric guided my revisions by letting me compare my previous work with a sample confirmed to be correct. It helped me recognize what my potential score would be and identify what aspects of the rubric I could improve on in the future.]]> 2020-10-06 18:48:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808040281 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808044335 2020-10-06 18:50:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808044335 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808044417 Although you can argue that almost any lense can fit with "In Greed We Trust", I feel that the ethical lense fits the best with a passage that focuses mainly on the emotion of Greed.]]> 2020-10-06 18:50:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808044417 shonn1620639 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808044445 Economic, Social, and ethical

]]> 2020-10-06 18:50:07 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808044445 katrina323711 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808047316 I need to get better with adding textual evidence. I also need to learn better vocabulary.]]> 2020-10-06 18:50:51 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808047316 https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808049431 2020-10-06 18:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/nebeae/1idbj41bml0mj01m/wish/808049431