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]]> 2021-02-22 02:04:36 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/1224533671 R2 before https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/2057907661 Refurbishment work is the quickest method to fix a leaky house.(Giacomo et al .,2012)
 The results showed that the renovations reduced the infifiltration rates of the leaky houses by 46-66%. (Giacomo et al .,2012)
This method only can extend the house life, but can not eliminate moisture and rot in wood structure.(Giacomo et al .,2012)
Those leaky buildings in New Zealand were built in the mid-1980s(Bev et al., 2017), refurbishment work can save on construction costs and labor force(Giacomo et al .,2012). This solution should be effective on New Zealand.

]]> 2022-02-21 02:31:05 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/2057907661 R2 after https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/2057907983 1. Refurbishment a house is the quickest method to fix a leaky house.(Giacomo et al .,2012)

2. The results showed that the renovations reduced the infiltration rates of the leaky houses by 46-66%. (Giacomo et al .,2012)

3. This method can only extend the house life, but it can not eliminate moisture and rot in the wood structure.(Giacomo et al .,2012)

4.Those leaky buildings in New Zealand were built in the mid-1980s(Bev et al., 2017), refurbishment a house can save on construction costs and labor force(Giacomo et al .,2012). This solution could be effective in New Zealand.

]]> 2022-02-21 02:31:21 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/2057907983 r3 https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/2057922604 In Tauranga, the average household earn $52,000 less than what they’d need(Mitchell, 2021).

In Tauranga, the average household earns $52,000 less than what they’d need(Mitchell, 2021).]]> 2022-02-21 02:44:18 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/2057922604 R1:before https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/2057934353 In the above section, three possible solutions are suggested to resolve the stated problems. Firstly, housing cost can be cheaper through tax reduction. The government of the Czech Republic reduce a VAT rate of 15 percent to building (Hromada and Cermakova, 2021). That is advantage for people who want to build a new home because of lower construction cost. In the same way, the federal government in USA subsidizes tax credit though a low-income housing tax credit (LIHTC) programme. The LIHTC subsidizes the acquisition, construction, and rehabilitation of affordable rental housing for low- and moderate-income tenants. Thus, VAT reduction and tax credit are benefit for housing affordability of low-income household. However, the government spends a lot of budgets for tax solution]]> 2022-02-21 02:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/2057934353 R1:after https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/2057935210 In the above section, three possible solutions are suggested to resolve the stated problems. Firstly, housing cost can be cheaper through tax reduction. The government of the Czech Republic reduce a VAT rate of 15 percent to building (Hromada and Cermakova, 2021). That is advantage for people who want to build a new home because of lower construction cost. In the same way, the federal government in USA subsidizes tax credit though a low-income housing tax credit (LIHTC) programme. The LIHTC subsidizes the acquisition, construction, and rehabilitation of affordable rental housing for low- and moderate-income tenants. Thus, VAT reduction and tax credit are benefit for housing affordability of low-income household. However, the government spends some budgets for tax solution. ]]> 2022-02-21 02:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/patrick_coleman2/1i9glo8kqp4fj0gx/wish/2057935210