https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr Leave feedback! en-us 2022-01-31 16:58:34 UTC 2022-04-11 16:58:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2023825979 I think that in your hook you were very relatable to most people’s experiences.
You did a great job with the formatting and the G.U.M.S

Maybe don’t use the same line multiple times throughout the paragraph (Our prized town of scotch plains/fanwood should consider opening or creating a community dog breeding kennel, this would improve the community by cute puppies getting nice homes and families getting companions for life.)]]> 2022-02-01 17:11:09 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2023825979 https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2023937262 Star 1. I found your introduction really interesting and it made me really hooked and it had me wanting to reading.

Star 2. I also found your body paragraph one really informational and convincing it also had me very hooked wanting to read even more.

Wish 3. I don't really understand the point of when you said “A high-end breeder may have just four litters a year, but sell their dogs for $2,500 each. If each litter had six dogs, the business would have an annual revenue of $40,000”. This had me as a reader not wanting to a dog this expensive and kind of had me turned the wrong way. ]]> 2022-02-01 17:59:01 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2023937262 27mwashington https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2088437742 Star 1: I liked how you really explained what your product was in your slide.

Star 2: I like how your product is for dogs because I haven’t seen a product that’s for animals.

Wish 3 :i wish you could’ve added more options to what your product is like can it warm up the water or cool it down but overall i loved your product.]]> 2022-03-10 14:26:18 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2088437742 27tdreyer https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2088549695 Star I really liked how you used the thought of a dog getting sick it made me feel like I need it for my dogs
Star I like the idea because I have not seen a lot of dog products like this before
Wish you could have maybe told us more about what you want to do in the future like make it so it cools water on a hot day or there are different sizes]]> 2022-03-10 15:16:21 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2088549695 27ahagopian https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2088856574 Star I really enjoyed all the photos you used during your slide show it was definitely a good use of pathos data I also found the idea of doggo’s getting sick because of water really sad.
Star I also liked how much information you gave about for product I felt like by the end I knew exactly what the product was and how it worked.
With Finally, the one thing I felt like you could improve on was how much information you put on the slides because I felt like your product description would only take 3 minutes to read which is below the 4 minute mark. But other than that it was a really good product design to help the doggie’s.


]]> 2022-03-10 17:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2088856574 27hrohman https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2139453847 I love the images and the background, it is very appropriate and eye-catching for the article while still not taking away from  the writing. I loved how the piece definitely succeeded at it’s goal of teaching about lions and misconceptions about them, I definitely learned a lot.
The only problem I noticed was that there was no glossary to explain the words that were harder to understand.]]> 2022-04-11 16:26:07 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2139453847 https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2139505422 Star I really enjoyed the images of the lions and how well they fit in with the article.

Star The article was definitely informative I definitely learned a lot about lions. I also liked how you talked about different subjects than normal informative books.

Wish I didn’t see a glossary in your article so add one now :)]]> 2022-04-11 16:58:21 UTC https://padlet.com/27kpeterson/1hhhbh97kgzwa0zr/wish/2139505422