Narrative Leads by Emily Gigliotti

Sample Narrative Lead

gigliottie1 — 2024-10-11 11:46:29 UTC

Milo poked his head into the classroom of Abandon Elementary School and saw a teacher sleeping behind her desk. She had knotted blonde hair all poofed on top of her head, pink and green speckled pajama pants, and kids assignments scattered across her desk. The dusty name plate on her desk read, "Mrs.Castaside". Milo wondered what kind of school he happened to walk into.

Jackson B narrative lead

jacksonbla26 — 2024-10-11 14:12:58 UTC

Milo poked his head into the classroom of Abandon Elementary School and saw Gale with his hair all curly, his white shirt, and red shorts in a rocking chair reading half a sentence while getting cheeto dust on the book he turns around and then.... Milo? is that you?

Amelia's lead

ameliadol26 — 2024-10-11 14:13:54 UTC

From a window of a classroom Milo could see a teacher with her feet up on her desk with wavy black hair,short white dress which seemed to have mud splatters all over it and dirty white heels. As she was reading her book she glanced up at Milo and stood up. " Who are you young man?"she asked " I am Milo and this is Tock" Milo answers "Well hi Milo and Tock I am Victoria Vacate. Call me Ms. Vacate."

Alsear Narrative Lead

alsearwil26 — 2024-10-11 14:13:56 UTC

Milo poked his head into the classroom of Abandon Elementary school and saw a tall man with a black suit on and a red half tied tie.He was at his desk sleeping with a book on his face plotted down in his seat. half red half black hair. Milo carefully dusted his off name tag, and it said MR. Terminate

''GET OUT OF MY CLASSROOM NOW'' the name plate said.

narrative lead

2024-10-11 14:15:14 UTC

Milo, poked his head into the classroom of Abandon Elementary School and saw a class full of kids some looking out the window and some making paper air planes and a teacher her feet up sleeping but Milo noticed one kid with a sign on her desk that read "Quinn Quitterson" she had her feet up with brown messy hair that looked as if it had never been brushed, and ripped jeans a black hat covering her face and a yellow shirt with orange stitching on it sleeping soundly like it was normal to sleep in class.

Kai's lead

kaifra26 — 2024-10-11 14:15:35 UTC

As Milo walks through the hall he notices an old man with a mop right next to him Milo bends to look at the name of the name tag says Mr.Jetterson on it. Milo notices that Mr.Jetterson is starting to wake but Mr.Jetterson didn't even notice that Milo is next to him until he was fully awake Mr.Jetterson started to get mad as he doesn't know who Milo is and tells him to leave right know Mr.Jetterson keeps on saying that this job sucks.

Madison Battista Narrative Leads

madisonbat26 — 2024-10-11 14:17:17 UTC

Milo poked his head into a classroom of Abandon Elementary School and saw a girl sleeping, who had blonde hair with blue tips. All over her desk were a bunch of past homwork she didn't do and sharpie stains.

Hanging off her desk was a name tag that said "Quinn Quittermon." Then, she woke up! From the window of the classroom at Abandon Elementary School, a voice called out to Milo, " Milo is that you?"

Christian's narrative lead

christianbat26 — 2024-10-11 14:17:48 UTC

From a small window Milo could see a grumpy old man in a dirt covered shirt and food all over him serving the most disgusting food Milo had ever seen. Milo dashed into the school and into the lunch room and exclaimed '' Sir what is your name! Mr. Expire. Well Mr. Expire this food you are serving to the kid's is disgusting.

Allie capri's narrative lead

alexandracap26 — 2024-10-11 14:18:19 UTC

Milo poked is into the weird looking classroom of Abandon Elementary school and saw old black and white tangled hair sticking out. With a broken sign that says Mrs. Freya Forsake, under her desk there was an old moldy apple,kids test scattered everywhere. On the unpolished chair there was Mrs. Freya Forsake dozing of to sleep ,with her untied raggy black shoes on her desk. Milo did not know what he was getting in too.

Liliana Native Leads

2024-10-11 14:18:19 UTC

When Milo entered the old abandoned building he heard a person snoring then when he poked his head in the classroom he saw A teacher with a dirty fall dress on with red,orange,and yellow colors sleeping on her desk,then suddenly she woke up alarmed from my approach I asked''What is your name?"she replied"Mrs.Freya Foresake"then I asked my self"What kinda school am I in?

Avery's Narritive Lead

averydon26 — 2024-10-11 14:18:34 UTC

Mil poked his head into the office of Abandon Elementary School and saw an officer with pink, halfly brushed hair. His legs were kicked up on the desk and a news paper covered his head so Milo couldn't see him. On a moldy, dusty, rusty name plate, he saw the name Officer Surrender. This man was large and not what Milo expected from a school Officer!

David's narrative lead

davidlin26 — 2024-10-11 14:18:59 UTC

as Milo approached the abandoned ground he sall a boy he had a black shirt that said Balout Ben he ran over and said you want to pla- and then he ran off.

logan. Keenan

logankee26 — 2024-10-11 14:19:44 UTC

Milo poked his head into the office of abandon elementary and saw Bailout Ben sitting there on the floor. As Milo approached the abandon elementary school playground he noticed there were bolts missing. From the window of a classroom at Abandon Elementary school a voice called out to Milo please help me I have been in here for so long

Lily's Narrative Lead

lilybia26 — 2024-10-11 14:21:57 UTC

Milo poked his head into the office and saw a superintendent sleeping under her desk with blonde hair in a bun,with Christmas pj pants on. There were surrender papers every where.From the window of a classroom at Abandon Elementary school a voice called out to Milo "Hey you little boy you came in my office if you say anything about me sleeping I will black mail you in saying something you never did".

Weston's lead

2024-10-11 14:22:51 UTC

As Milo turned the corner of the hall way he bumped into the janitor and read his name tag and said sorry leave it Larry and leave it Larry poured water on the ground and left to go play games on the school computer and pulled his hat off and he had crazy hair.

Brielles Narrative Lead. 🙂

brielleros26 — 2024-10-11 14:24:44 UTC

Milo poked his head into the Abandon School library Milo only saw one kid a girl sitting on a chair in front of the fiction section sleeping. She had a nametag that read Quinn Quitterlyn schools library helper. Quinn had one pigtail on her right side of her hair and her hair down on the left. Her shoelaces of her Nike shoes were untied and she wore shorts with one stocking on the left leg she also had a ripped dirty pink palm puff sweatshirt. She woke up and said "Oh sorry sometimes i fall asleep while sorting books what were you saying?"

"Nothing.'' Said Milo.

"Im Quinn." She said. Quinn looks outgoing but-

"Whats your name?" She said.

"Milo."

Milo had thoughts going through his head quick but this one thing stook out. What did i walk into?

Austin R. Lesson #14 Narrative Lead

austinric26 — 2024-10-11 14:24:54 UTC

Milo poked his head into the classroom of Abandon Elementary School and saw a wooden, messy desk covered with papers of homework and schedules piled as high as five Chromebooks! An eye catcher Milo did see, a teacher as sleepy as a giant, wearing pajamas as green as evergreen trees, slippers like roses of red, the final touch of a sign that wrote "Mrs. McGetaway".

madelyndid26 — 2024-10-11 14:24:55 UTC

Milo poked his head in to the office of Abandon Elementary school and saw a girl with long thick black hair with her arms and legs crossed tapping her foot and looks really mad and Milo asked "Whats your name?" she answed "Sami Stormout" Milo then asked " why are you here" and Sami said " why are you here." Milo answerd "I was looking around." Sami said "I stormed out of my classroom without asking and I don't know why I'm here now" Milo nodded.

Emmalyn Erdman's Narrative Leads

emmalynerd26 — 2024-10-11 14:25:24 UTC

From the window of a classroom at The Abandon Elementary School, a voice calls out to Milo "Get out of my way cakesniffer!" and pushed Milo into a giant puddle full of mud " who are you?" says Milo, while Tock starts to growl at this girl " I am Veronica Vacate! And just who are you people to be doing here!"

Grant Adams

grantada26 — 2024-10-11 15:14:09 UTC

Milo poked his head into the office of Abandon Elementary School and saw the principal Mr. Opt-out on the sign that had a big crack on it he saw that his hair was not brushed it was puffed up and there were scared school projects all around his desk and there was a poster that said "if you don't get it just quit".

Macie Thomas's Narrative Leads

macietho26 — 2024-10-11 15:15:05 UTC

As Milo peered through Abandon Elementary School's windows looking at classes while walking outside, a deep but girly voice called out to him riding on a bright orange skateboard that had blue marker written down that said "BAILOUT BELLA" "HEY! You're new! You don't know me- "That's good?" Milo questioned as he cut her off. "Great for me!" Milo had so many questions at the moment. She was wearing black air forces, her hair was tied in knots, while her socks were mismatched, and she had nothing but pajama pants that were gray as well as a blue t-shirt. "Now back to what I was saying, can you do my math homework for me?" she asked politely. "Uhhhh sure, I guess." As Milo finished his sentence with agreement but confusion at the same time. "Nice! K, now I'm leaving." As Bailout Bella skateboarded away on school grounds.

Henry's narrative leads.

henrymru26 — 2024-10-11 15:15:06 UTC

As Milo walked into the welcome lobby there was a name plate that read officer surrender, then someone popped up from under the desk. Milo presumed it was officer surrender and said exuse me are you officer surrender and when he noticed Milo and put his hands up. wow there sere I am not going to hurt you. okay he said slowly backing away I am not lying it's not you it's your dog owe this is Tock he's friendly you just need to scratch his ear, okay.

Rylyn Estilow's Narrative lead.

rylynest26 — 2024-10-11 15:15:09 UTC

As Milo walked down the hallway he heard a pan fall so he peeked his head into the cafeteria. Then he walked in and he saw a woman so old. Her hair was tangled in her hair net and she had mismatching clothes with polka dots and stripes. She was standing in a spilt pile of apple juice,Milo could smell the food burning and so he was plugging his nose. He read her name tag that said Ms. Expire. She said to Milo " what are you doing here twerp go away" Milo said " I heard something fall like a pan and smelt something burning, what are you doing to that food!" "MIND your business said Ms. Expire." Then Milo spied moldy bread and cheese he also saw the expiration date on the milk. There were tables that were dirty and food under the tables. Milo said "I better get out of here."

Ava Sedberry's Narrative Leads.

avased26 — 2024-10-11 15:15:15 UTC

As Milo approached the Abandon Elementary School cafeteria he noticed a lunch lady with a name tag that had ketchup smudged all over it, that stated Ms. Expire. Milo noticed she was burning the food and had her shoes untied, with rotten and expired food beside her. The cafeteria was not clean and all Milo smelt was rotten old food. The lunch tables were clearly not wiped down and Milo could just picture all of the germs that are on all of the lunch tables. Kids even forgot lunchboxes that were left on almost all of the lunch tables. Milo took a look at Ms. Expire again and saw she was wearing a unwashed outfit, it had food all over it and Milo could smell it from far away.

brodyfre26 — 2024-10-11 15:15:24 UTC

Milo peeked through the janitors office and saw someone sleeping on the ground. When Milo walked through the door he saw food left out on the ground. And saw the name tag on him his name was janitor jettison. Then Milo saw a huge bug and decided to stomp on it. And woke up janitor jettison he had grey curly hair ,wrinkeld skin, and blue eyes and then he said "Be quiet I'm trying to sleep!" Then said "can't you see I'm trying to do my job!"

James C school play ground

jamescoy26 — 2024-10-11 15:15:33 UTC

As Milo approached the abandoned Elementary school playground he noticed the playground was half built. When he was walking around the playground, he spotted a man sleeping by the slide. He saw that he had a teacher's badge on that said "Mr. Terminate".

Michaela's Lesson 14 Narrative Lead

michaelalle26 — 2024-10-11 15:16:06 UTC

Milo walked through the school and peeked around the corner to see a playground. The playground was rusty and there were spiders every where. There was also a kid. "Hi I'm leave it Larry!" there were signs everywhere that said, "Leave everything of Leave-it Larry's stuff where it is."

Zoe's Narrative Leads

zoekor26 — 2024-10-11 16:12:57 UTC

From the window of a classroom at Abandon Elementary School, a voice called out to Milo, " Hey you! What are you doing?!" "I'm just um, looking for someone one in the classroom!" Milo says as the sun beams into his eyes. " Ok?" Says the girl, she turns around with her pajamas on and her frizzy hair! " What's your name? " Said Milo, " My name is Brinna Burnout!"

chasegue26 — 2024-10-11 16:48:32 UTC

Milo poked his head into the main office of Abandon Elementry School and saw Principal leftus yelling at kids and making them cry.Mr leftus said to Milo who are you Milo said I am Milo Mr leftus told Milo to go into the office and principal leftus locked him in the classroom Nd said you are going to get yelled at for 600 million years

Maci Bauman

macibau26 — 2024-10-11 16:52:45 UTC

As Milo approached the Abandon Elementary School playground, he noticed a girl sitting at a old wooden bench, then Milo came up to her and lightly taped her shoulder. After Milo tapped her shoulder she woke up with her eyes halfway open. As she was still trying to wake up Milo asked "what's your name" and she replied "my name is leave it marry" and she lade her head back down and sighed. Milo was thinking why she was in her pj's and why her hair was all frizzy.

Chase waldman narrative lead

chasewal26 — 2024-10-11 16:53:33 UTC

Milo poked his head into the office and saw a woman and she was the principal. she was wearing flip flops '' but a saw her yelling at a student for no reason milo was so scared milo was like are you ok and the student was like yeah

Grayson Lloyd

2024-10-11 16:57:31 UTC

From the window of a classroom at abandon elementary school, a voice called out to Milo,'' why are you in abandon elementary.Are you the officer for the school? he asked Millo . As Millo was speaking officer Abandon he ran out of the school

Kriti .G Narrative Lead

kritigun26 — 2024-10-11 16:58:06 UTC

Milo poked his head into the cafeteria of Abandon Elementary school and saw a kid with his head on his lunch tray. Milo rushed to ask, "Are you okay?" The kid responded with, "Yea, I just don't want to eat. And by the way, my name is Danny Ditcherson." As he finished, he flopped his head on his lunch tray, making it splater.

2024-10-11 17:02:26 UTC

Milo poked his head into the office of Abandon Elementary School and saw someone sleeping on the desk, he checked the name tag on her office and saw "Principal Opt-Out sleeping on her desk. She had a long-sleeve shirt that had palm trees on it and the color of the shirt was purple. Also her desk was a mess! She had papers everywhere, books on the floor, her lamp on the floor too! Milo had wondered where he was.

Jordan Narrative Lead

2024-10-11 17:03:51 UTC

Milo poked his head into the classroom of Abandon Elementary School and saw a girl about his age looking very mad and upset, with blonde-looking hair and thousands of dirty knots, looking at the teacher. When he went a little closer to them he could hear them bickering. Then the teacher shouted,"Quin Quitterson I'm sorry but if you keep acting up like this you will fail 5th grade!" NO PLEASE IM SORRY! Shouted Quin. Then the teacher stormed out of the classroom and yelled,"IM CALLING YOUR MOTHER!" Quin cries. Then milo had to think deeply if he should walk in and ask her whats wrong. He did not think he should do it but he did it anway! "Hey are you okay?" Milo askes, she responds as "YEAH NOW GET OUT!" So then milo walked out like she asked.

AUTUMN D.

kassidydig26 — 2024-10-11 17:06:27 UTC

As Milo approached the Abandon Elementary School playground ,he noticed a little girly playing softball and she hit the balls and noticed Milo and then ran off. Then she came back to get her stuffed animal dog and Milo ran after her. He saw her student ID and realized that her name is Leave-it Liv . "You forget your ID and your bat and your glove" Milo shouted. She yells, "I,m going to change because I am wearing pajamas that are pink with green spots.

Teagan's Lesson 14 Narrative Lead

teagankal26 — 2024-10-11 17:06:51 UTC

A woman wearing p.j and high heels. As he walked closer in to the office, you could see that her hair was knotted Milo noticed that she had a name tag that said principal Mcstrand

Aidan's Narrative lead

aidanall26 — 2024-10-11 17:07:42 UTC

As Milo walked through the Abandon elementary lunch room Milo heard a loud grumpy voice. What do you want said the lunch lady hi I am Ms expire I'm Milo. Well your in luck it's lunch time.said Ms expire this is bad said Milo well I don't care. Eat up it's expire that's great. No it's not said Milo make good food.

Jaxson

jaxsonmon26 — 2024-10-11 17:14:56 UTC

Milo peaked into the boys bathroom and saw an old man wearing a black jacket that had a little hole in the shoulder.The name tag on his jacket said Janitor Jettison. He was sleeping in the corner of the bathroom holding a broken mop in his hands.