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      <title>IELTS Writing Task 2 by Hồng Ngọc Hòang</title>
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         <title>Advertising helps business reach potential customera</title>
         <author>iampriss94</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>-The advertising also creates trust for the potential customers<br>-By raising awareness and memory of brands and products, advertising encourages customers to add support to business advertising campaigns<br>-The media will keep track of businesses' advertisements. Reporters will very likely interview businesses. So that we can promote our products to a wider range of ppl<br>-Advertise provides a lot of information and are shown widely in the media -&gt; many ppl know about that, find and buy this product</strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-16 14:19:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cham Anh</title>
         <author>anhltchrttdc</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Advertising helps businesses reach potential customers. In the past, when we would like to buy something, we must look for at the stores and asked owner of the shop about it. All the goods infomation was from seller. Meanwhile, in the modern world, advertisments is shown on the TV, it bring infomation about new products to the audience to help them make purchase decision.</div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The advertising helps business raech potential customers. The advers is a form of commercial communication that tells us what is most suitable for our needs. It provides customers with informaton about products so they can make a decision easly. By constrast, advertisements encouraged people to buy goods and helps the customers know the their products. For example, many people believe that TV commercial is better</div>]]></description>
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         <author>linhtrang182001</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Advertising is the activity of making products or services known about and persuading people to buy them. It&nbsp;helps businesses reach potential customers. The reason is that advertisements on TV and the Internet are a way to attract the audience who don't know too much about brands. Therefore, they will know the company's product and decide to purchase it.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <author>phambinhduong15</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Advertising is supposed to help businesses reach potential customers who are likely to become buyers of the company's products or services. For example, Apple has gained popularity among its target demographic of young people worldwide by providing them with complete information about the company through a series of promotional efforts. We would have a hard time deciding which products and services are best for us without advertising.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Khánh Toàn</title>
         <author>toan28012006</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is easily believed that advertising helps businesses in reaching potential custormers. Advertising is a form of commercial communication that tells us what is most suitable for our needs. The prospective customers don't know too much about products, brands, services, so advertisements give information about it to people who wants purchase or use, encourage them to buy your products or sevices. Therefore, customers can decide to buy or not. For example, Nike becomes more and more popular to people by providing informations in advertising or collabing with influencers like Travis Scott, G-Dragon. In the past, we didn't know how to advertise, so we had difficulty in finding prospective customers; similarly, customers didn't have much informations about businesses to choosing which products or services was the most suitable for us. Meanwhile, in the modern world of advertising, customers are well-informed and easily determine which businesses are fit. If customers don't know the value of advertising, they can buy product which have a bad quality. In fact, there are a lot of kinds of adverts,&nbsp;<br>&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Hoàng Long</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp; It is believed that advertising companies in reaching prospective customers who are capable of becoming purchasers of products or services from an organization.advertising assists potential customers in deciding which product or service to purchase. For example, Nike becomes popular around the world who are the target audiences by keeping them well-informed about it through many advertising campaigns. In the past, we didn’t know how to advertise, many products were unknown,we might buy products . If we do not have advertising, we will have difficulty choosing. Actually, it does not only assist firms in reaching prospective customers but also helps companies gain more customers by word of mouth</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Cham Anh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Advertising greatly contributes to the development of any economy.<br>Advertising is a type of commercial communication that tell us what is good about the products. It help more customers know about the brands, as the results they will buy the good when they need. So the company income will raise then it boost the development of economy.<br>In other hands, advertisement career create a lot of jobs. Therfore, it resloves a significant unemployment. Then,  the development of economy.</div>]]></description>
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         <author>linhtrang182001</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Advertising is the activity of making products or services known and persuading people to buy them. In the past, we could not know too much about brands. Meanwhile, in the modern world of advertising, more customers are able to know different companies's products and services. Therefore, the sales of companies will increase and boost the development of the economy. Nowadays, advertising helps people find job opportunities, and the unemployment rate is also significantly reduced.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-16 14:53:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>quynh trang</title>
         <author>iampriss94</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>*definition: advertising is a form of commercial communication that tells us what is most suitable for our needs<br>*reason and result:<br>-customers know about the products, more the sales of the company increase&nbsp;<br>-reduce the unemployment rate<br>-adverstising not only stopped in showing people what images you want to transmit but also promote people to make action<br>-To contribute to promoting traffic and consuming goods in the market, indirectly promoting business production, improving competitiveness and motivating development. The power of development is economical for the economy.<br>*Ex: for example, </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-16 14:57:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hằng</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Advertising greatly contributes to the divelopment of any economy. When the advers become public. It create more job opportunities so the rate of unemployment go down. If many people know the advers, it will help the sales of the companies increse. Therefore, advertisements boost the development of the economy. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-16 14:57:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>phambinhduong15</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The large-scale expansion of advertising in most types of mass media and nearly all media in this area is economically beneficial. One advantage is that advertising can allow messages related to products and services to reach potential customers, thereby increasing sales for the business. In addition, only through advertisements can customers be specifically informed about new product launches. Besides, it offers careers for artists, illustrators or in the design and preparation of logos and content for advertising.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-16 14:57:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Khánh Toàn</title>
         <author>toan28012006</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is believied that advertising greatly contributes to the development of any economy. Advertising is a form of commercial communication that tells us what is most suitable for our needs. Advertisements on TV, in flyers, banners or billboards helps us in giving information about the products, brands which industries, businesses want to spread. This is a popular and basic form of marketing that we need to know. Therefore, more and more prospective customers can see it and decide to buy. For example, a branded clothing store advertises the products in website, in Facebook, on TV or in online shopping apps, so viewers can see it and choose or visit the store, which helps to increase sales. In the past, we could not know anything about what we were going to buy and were more likely to make bad decisions. In the modern world, advertising helps businesses in reaching prospective customers and rising sales, the businesses will becoming a multibullion-dollar industry. With the development of advertising, marketing are become popular and it will have job opportunities for people. If businesses don't have advertising support, it will level off or significantly drop.&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-16 14:58:02 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hoàng Long</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nowadays, life is becoming more and more modernized, so advertising is also a big part of everyone's business now. Advertising appears everywhere. But it also has a bad side and a good side. In my opinion, This phenomenon can be both positive and negative.On the one hand, advertising has brought a number of benefits to not only consumers but also businesses. Certainly, ads provide detailed information about newly launched products, which is very important for consumers who are still unaware of those products. The bad side is that it appears&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-16 15:02:39 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cham Anh- Taking a gap year</title>
         <author>anhltchrttdc</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nowaday, in several countries, when finishing high school and before starting university, young people tend to choose to have a gap year to relax or work. In this essay, I will analyse both the advantages and disadvantages of this problem in my opinion.</div><div><br></div><div>Advantages</div><ul><li>When people go to work for a year, they can study and understand themself. They can know exactly what they admire in their life and decide their career.&nbsp;</li><li>If they travel, they can extend their knowledge&nbsp; about the different cultures in the world or in their country. Base on that their social comprehension.</li></ul><div>Disadvantages</div><ul><li>With some giddy person, it may bring bad consequences. After a gap year, they still do not know what they want and continue travel with allowance from government or their parents.</li><li>It may unintentionally lead to migration from developed countries to developing countries because in developing countries it will be easier to find good jobs.</li></ul>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-30 13:06:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Khánh Toàn - TAKING A GAP YEAR</title>
         <author>toan28012006</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>- Nowadays, in some places in the world, adolescences decide to word or go vacation in the time gap between the completion of high school and the finishing of university life. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages.<br>- Advantages:<br>+ Through the trip, students will be able to expand their worldwide horizons. (Access to many different cultures around the world, understanding of the world around them)<br>+ Help them understand the value of each trip, the value of money.<br>- Disadvantages:<br>+ Traveling could have a negative impact on their emotional, mental health and their studies. (far away from their family and close friends for so long)<br>+ May not want to return to their studies (Relaxing)<br>+ They can be indepedent and leave school </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-30 13:09:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hằng - Taking a gap year</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>There are many benefits for students who spend a year working or travelling before starting University. In my opinion,this has both advantages and disadvantages.&nbsp;<br>Advantages&nbsp;<br>_reduce stress and relax<br>_learn new skills, develop social skills<br>_meet new people<br>_think carefully before making a decision.&nbsp;<br>Disadvantages&nbsp;<br>_lose time<br>_expensive<br>_it is Hard to keep in touch with friends. <br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-30 13:13:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gap Year:</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>•Introduction: In some countries, young ppl who finish highschool, are encouraged to work or travel for a year before starting university also known as Gap Year. In this essay, i will discuss the advantages and disavantages for young ppl who decide to do this.&nbsp;<br>•Body:&nbsp;<br>+Advantages: First, one benefit of working before going to university is that they can earn money to spend on their own life without having to rely on parents, learn the value of money. Second, travelling for young ppl is advantageous because it can discover everything from different countries such as culture, ppl, language,... They even make friends with everyone all around the world. If they travel or work, they will get experience amd skills which are important for their future. Gap Year isn't just a break time, but also the opportunity to try and explore yourself, you will step out of the safe area, face-to-face more new things, do things you've done</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-30 13:18:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Criteria:</title>
         <author>pinkangel1610</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Task response<br>Coherence and cohesion<br>+ structure<br>+ connective<br>Lexical resources<br>Grammatical range and accuracy</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-30 13:22:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Quynh Trang (Cont. Gap year)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>+Disavantages: On the contrary, there are some disavantages when young ppl decide it. One problem is that travelling might lead to run out of money. In life not sth also favorable, Gap Year can potentially some unisenable risks: injured, sick, lost money or indentity paper,... In other words, if you aren't orient, plan for G.Y to anything, you will waste of valuable time and money. For example, there are many young ppl who haven't planned clearly for G.Y and they spent a lot of money not getting the results they wanted.<br>•Conclusion: Although, G.Y has a lot of advantages but it still hides the disavantages. For me, anything in this world also exists good and bad sides, G.Y too. If you prepare enough, you will be avoided the risks of G.Y</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-30 13:42:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Structure</title>
         <author>pinkangel1610</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Intro (2-3 sens):<br>- Paraphrase đề<br>- Trả lời câu hỏi vắn tắt<br><br>Body:<br>1. Body 1:<br>Ý thứ 1<br>- Main idea<br>- Explanation&nbsp;<br>- Example<br><br>2. Body 2:<br>Tương tự<br><br>Conclusion:<br>- Summarise quan điểm</div>]]></description>
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         <title> In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.</title>
         <author>pinkangel1610</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is common in some nations that students take a gap year between high school and university to work or travel. In this essay, I will explain both the benefits and drawbacks of this trend.<br><br>Advantages:<br>- After years of studying, students will have time to relax and recharge their energy for later higher education =&gt; better academic results in the future.<br>- Students can spend their gap year working to earn extra money and gain more experience =&gt; students will be better prepared for their study or future working life.<br>- Taking a gap year will help students to be equipped with soft skills =&gt; ready for future career.<br><br>Disadvantages:<br>- Students may be unwilling to return to their study =&gt; may delay their university.<br>- Young people can be exploited when working (low pay, work for long hours)</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-30 13:54:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Today, parents spend little free time with their children.Why is this the case?Who are more affected: parents or children?</title>
         <author>pinkangel1610</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Conclusion: In conclusion, I restate my position that there are two main causes why parents have less time with their kids, and this affects children more. In my opinion, parents should balance between work and life and take care of their children more.</div>]]></description>
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         <title>Khánh Toàn - Thu Hằng: Parent - children</title>
         <author>toan28012006</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nowadays, more and more parents consume =&gt; spend time in work or hobby and less take care =&gt; take care of their offsprings =&gt; less. In my opinion, there are some reasons about =&gt; for this problem and children will have a negative effect =&gt; this will have a negative effect on the children.<br>Body1: Why is this the case?<br>- People tend to work overtime to get the done on time =&gt; to finish their tasks/ meet the deadline because they want to enhance standard of living.&nbsp;<br>Parents want to spend time to relaxing, exercising and personal hobbies.&nbsp;<br>For families with kids , the cries of children make them streesful. =&gt; logical?<br>- Parents use smartphone excessively and do not spend time taking care of their children.<br>Body 2: Children are more affected.<br>- When their parents spend little free time with them, it is their children who suffer the most =&gt; Children will feel neglected, lonely, depressed =&gt; This causes several mental health and behavioral problems&nbsp;<br>- Seriously, the relationship between parents and children is worse. =&gt; Falling into the path of dangerous crime ( anti social behaviors, use illegal drug, rape,…).<br>- With a modern technology, this lack of parental presence will harm children (children will access inappropriate channel,…).<br><br></div><div><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-30 14:33:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Today, parents spend little free time with their children.Why is this the case?Who are more affected: parents or children?</title>
         <author>anhltchrttdc</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nowadays, it is common that parents spend less time with their children. In my opinion, there are some reasons for this and Children are more affected.<br><br>Reasons<br>- In developing economy, it causes burdens on them. =&gt; <em>People work hard for their living =&gt;</em> when they come back home, they spend time doing housework and relax.<br>Bring their work home with them =&gt; They are too busy with earning money.<br>- They spend too much time with electronic devices =&gt; they give their kids mobile phones too.<br>Effects<br>- Children may feel lonely and do not want to interact with other people.<br>- They may become spoiled, and grow <em>up in </em>the<em>&nbsp;</em>wrong direction.<br>- They can learn bad habit on social network without <em>parents' control.</em><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-06-30 14:35:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Quynh Trang _ HW: Today, parents spend little free time with their children. why is this the case? who are more affected: parents or children?</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp;    Nowadays, it is common that parents spend less time with their children. In my opinion, there are some reasons for this and children are more affected. This essay, i will explore why this is.<br>&nbsp;    To begin, the country was getting more and more developed. For taht reason that causes burden on them so people have to work hard for their living and when they come back home, they will spend time relaxing, doing housework or even spend too much time with electronic devices and give their kids mobile phones.<br>&nbsp;    Next, it is important to consider if children are more affected than parents. If parents are too busy with earning money and spend little freetime with their child, youngster will feel lonely and don't want to interact with anybody. They may become sopiled and grow up in the wrong direction. Without proper mentoring, young children and teenager can learn bad habit on social network or from bad people. To be honest, they risk falling into of mental illness without parental attention.<br>     In conclusion, i restate my position that are 2 main causes why parents have less time with their kids and these affects children more. In my view, parents should balance between life and work and take care of their child more.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-04 05:56:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Parent do not spend much time for their children</title>
         <author>anhltchrttdc</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nowadays, it is more popular that parents do not spend much time with their children. In my opinion, there are some reasons for this and children are more affected.</div><div>In the modern world, living cost is more and more expensive, people work really hard for their living<em>. </em>So, when they come back home, they spend time doing housework and relax. In some cases, they also work at home to meet the deadline. They are too busy with earning money. Therefore, they do not have time with their children. Almost all childhood, kids stay with home maid or their grand parents.</div><div>20th century break out after technology thread into life. People spend too much time with electronic devices such as TV, computers and especially mobile phones. It is so handy to bring along all day, and also user-friendly with the majority of people. Parents give their kids mobile phones too. It is easy to contact, or convenient for their study.<br>Because of two reasons, it is significant effect on kids. They may feel lonely and do not want to interact with other people. it is a essentical cause of autism. Because they can not communicate with anyone, noone listent to them for a long time. Others may become spoiled, and <em>grow up in </em>the<em> </em>wrong direction. Since, they can learn bad habit on social network without <em>parents' control</em>, their friends at school, some bad people surround them, even from&nbsp; their own parent.&nbsp;<br>In conclusion, i restate my opinion that it have two causes why parent spend less time with their children and they are more affacted. Some research indicated that kids will be more smart&nbsp; if their dad spend more time with them. So, Despite of busy working day, parent shoud spend more time to play with children.</div><div><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-05 03:08:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Khánh Toàn - Task 1:visitors</title>
         <author>toan28012006</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The line graph provides information about the number of foreign visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.</div><div>Overall, there was a substantial increase in the number of overseas travelers to the coast, the mountains and the lakes in European. Besides, people who visited the lakes had a dramatic change in 20 years and the coast was the most popular choice of visitors.</div><div>In 1987, the number of travelers to the lakes in European countries was 10000, and it increased dramatically in 15 years. Between 2002 and 2007, the number of visitors to the lakes fell slightly. The number of overseas travelers to the coast had a fluctuation in 5 years, then it grew significantly. The number of foreign visitors to the coast in European was the highest in three types of areas.</div><div>Looking at the graph in more detail, it is clear that the number of travelers to the mountains rose gradually. Between 1987 and 2007, it climbed more than 15000 visitors. But, after 20 years, the number of overseas visitors to the mountains in European countries was the lowest.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 12:33:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cham Anh- Task 1</title>
         <author>anhltchrttdc</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The graph describer the number of foregin visitors to three different areas in a Eropean country between 1987 and 2007.<br>Overall, it can be seen people come to this country increase from 1987 to 2007 at all areas the coast, the mountains and the lakes.&nbsp; Further, the number of people visiting the lake was strongest raise.<br>At the first year of preriod, the number of people visiting the coast was highest, four times higher than that of the lake. Then , in 1992, it experienced a steadily fall to 35 thousands. Meanwhile, the number of visitor come to the lake recorded a significant rise to 75 thousands in 2002. Then, there was a substantial fall to 50 thousands in the last year of preriod. Incomarision with, the number of peope visiting the coast move up drammatically from 1992 and it was 75 thousands in 2007.&nbsp;<br>Look at the graph in more detail, the number of people visiting the mountain was 20 thousands, twice higher than that to the lake. Then, it experienced a slight increase to 35 thousands in 2007. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 12:38:02 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>linh trang - task 1</title>
         <author>linhtrang182001</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br>&nbsp; &nbsp;The line graph provides information about the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; Overall, it is clear that the number of overseas visitors who went to three areas increased sharply over the years. Further, the number of guests to the lakes experienced a fast increase from 1987 to 2002.&nbsp;<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;In 1992, there was a slight decrease to reach 37,000 visitors to the coast from 40,000 in 1987. However, the number of guests who went to the coast rose sharply and reached a peak of 70,000 people. Mean while, the figure of people who went to the mountain gained slightly from 20,000 in 1987 to 35,000 in 2007.&nbsp;<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; In contrast, only 10,000 foreigners visited the mountain in 1987 - only one in four compared to the number of people who visited the coast. This trend increased significantly in the next 15 years and reached a peak at 75,000 in 2002. However, it fell gradually to 50,000 in 2007.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 12:47:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Bình Dương Task 1</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>The graph below shows, between 1987 and 2007, which areas in a European nation foreign tourists preferred among three different ones.<br>With 40,000 visitors from abroad, the coast received the most in 1987, followed by visitors to mountains and lakes. Although there are only about 35,000 people watching the coast, 5,000 fewer than in 1987, it is noteworthy that the number has eventually increased steadily to more than 70 thousand. The number of tourists visiting the lake steadily increased until it peaked in 2002 at 75,000. On the other hand, it plummeted to 50,000 in 2007. In contrast to its two counterparts, the number of climbers fluctuated steadily between 20 and 30 thousand, even after 2002 when it exceeded 30 thousand.<br>Overall, the coast continues to be a top destination for foreign visitors, and trips to the mountains are not always the first choice.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 12:59:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Quynh Trang Task 1 + Task 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>* Task 1:<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; The chart provides data about the number of foreign vistiors to 3 different areas in Europe country between 1987 and 2007<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; Overall, it is clear that there was significant increase in the number of overseas visitors to 3 differents areas. Besides, the coast was the most popular choice over the years&nbsp;<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;Looking at the chart in more detail, there was a shap rise in the choice of coast, from 40% in 1987 to about 75% in 2007. Meanwhile, the number of foreign visitors to the mountains increased gradually from 20% in the first year to nearly 35% in the last year<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; Through the years, the number of overseas travelers to the lakes was just 10% in 1987. Then, this figure climed dramatically to 50% in 2007<br><br>*Task 2:<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; Nowadays, the authorities has an important responsibility to protect the environment, and the individual has to contribute only a small part. In my opinion, i disagree on this issue and i will discuss further the role of these two subjects in protecting the environment<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; It cannot be denied that for global issues like this, it is necessary to require large investors and the government intervention. For instance, Vietnamese law set out the principles of environmental protection<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;On the other hand, everything on this earth is all contributed to the environmental factors. For that reason, environmental protection is also protecting the human life and it is the responsibility of everybody.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 13:06:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>long</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1.<br>the chart illustrates the amount of visitors worldwide visitng three different areas in a European country from 1987 and 2007<br>Overall,there was significant increase in the number of foregin visitors to the coast,the mountains and the lakes in european.<br>To begin,the lakes highly increase from 1987to 2002 and the number of vissitors decrease dramatically to 50,000 in 2007.<br>the proportion of tourists haging out in the mountains increased gradually overtime. It did not fluctuate too much.there was a total of 20,000 to mountains and ending at approximately 35,000 in 2007.visitors coming to the coast and this was the highest rate in 2007.From 1987to 2002,the rate reached a peak nearly 75000 andthen decreased to 50000 .<br>2<br>We humans live on the same earth. The task of protecting the surrounding environment is also the duty of all individuals, according to me, protecting the environment is also cleaning up the place where we live because We live in the same atmosphere. Therefore, we are not only politicians or janitors who must protect the environment. But we also join hands. Maybe we can do little to protect the environment, but it is also responsible for the surrounding community.For example, we see the garbage we pick up in its right place. a small action like this has also helped to protect the environment. Try to imagine if everypeople is responsible like you, the earth and our house will become clean and fresh. In short, protection the environment is everyone's mission. Let's join hands to protect the environment!<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 13:13:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>linh trang - task 2</title>
         <author>linhtrang182001</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>    Some people think that politicians should be responsible for protecting the environment, not individuals as individuals can not do this problem. In my opinion, protecting the environment is not only responsible for the politicians, but all citizens also make a worthy contribution.<br>    Firstly, politicians can propose to the government to introduce new laws to combat actions that damage the environment. For example, stricter penalties are introduced, such as long prison sentences and heavy fines, for those who cut down trees illegally. At that time, the rate of deforestation can also decreased.<br>    On the other hand, I believe that every citizen can make a great contribution to environmental protection with small actions. For example, currently in Vietnam, instead of using gasoline-powered vehicles, a number of traffic users have used electric vehicles such as buses, cars, motorbikes to commute every day. day. This has so far helped reduce the amount of CO2 released into the air and improve air quality.<br>    In conclusion, I agree that politicians, along with all citizens, have a responsibility to protect the environment. Because protecting the environment is protecting our own lives.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 13:15:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Cham Anh - Task 2: Enviroment</title>
         <author>anhltchrttdc</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>All of national leaders take responsibility to preserve enviroment. A peson can not do the big change. I strongly agree with this opinion.&nbsp;<br>The Earth was warming with greenhouse effect. It is consequence of human living activity, industrial process... To solve that issue, goverment put forth a lot of action schedule which need all of citizen take part in. For example, administration launched the planing tree program in mountain areas. It was absolutely can not do by individual.&nbsp;<br>In the sea, there was more and more dead animals seeing on the seashore with full of rubbish inside them.  Goverment incited people collecting garbage on the beach. Every year, there were  some team go diving to collect the rubbish  on the bottom of some shallow water.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 13:15:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Bình Dương Task 2</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/pinkangel1610/1grwl6k5kkdc4z21/wish/2238961998</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>According to popular belief, the only entity with sufficient authority to address the serious threats to today's global environment is the government. However, in my opinion, both governmental entities and private citizens are accountable for preserving the environment.<br>It is true that some environmental issues are too large for one person to handle. It takes the efforts and cooperation of politicians and major environmental organizations to effectively address serious issues like global warming, extended droughts, severe storms, or other extreme weather phenomena. This is because specialized tools are needed to solve these issues. The only entity with sufficient funds and resources to do this is the government.<br>However, I think that everyone has a duty to preserve the environment. We can all do our part to reduce greenhouse gas emissions on an individual level by recycling more, investing in more energy-efficient home appliances, and planting more trees in our homes. our yard. Without the support of both individuals and politicians, I believe that environmental problems will never be solved effectively. For example, farmers will never be able to successfully mitigate the effects of climate change if they keep burning forests for their own purposes despite government regulations.&nbsp;<br>In conclusion, I believe that everyone has a responsibility to protect the environment for the reasons mentioned above.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 13:16:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Khánh Toàn - Task 2: Environment</title>
         <author>toan28012006</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/pinkangel1610/1grwl6k5kkdc4z21/wish/2238962619</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Nowadays, environmental conservation is one of the most urgent issues in the world. Many people say that this problems should belong to national leaders, politicians. In my opinion,&nbsp; I don’t disagree because the perfect combination of the government and citizens will solve this issue.</div><div>Environmental pollution can harm everybody in the Earth, so each people have a responsibility to protect their habitat. The authority can add new laws against actions that damage the environment. For instance, the government can have an official ban on every people from using plastic packaging, bottles,.... In addition, the politicians can transmit people to reduce environmental damage through social networks, advertising. However, besides carrying out new laws and adjustment, the authority can set an example for everyone, like doing environmental protection work, helping people in waste treatment,..</div><div>On the other hand, citizens can contribute to protecting the environment, habitat through everyday actions. First, people can sort waste into categories such as plastic waste, metal waste or recyclable waste; community can dispose rubbish in the right place. Second, with rising costs, people can save fuel through cycling, using electric cars, public transport, which can reduce a tremendous amount of CO2. This activities can protect the environment a lot.</div><div>In conclusion, my opinion will remain the same, the politicians, the government can not deal with environment issues, so individuals should combine with the authority in protecting the climate.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 13:17:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>quynh trang cont task 2 environment</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>For example, people should dump their garbage at the prescribed place, shouldn't destroy the forest trees or consumers can replace the bag for plastic bags when shopping to minimize plastic pollution.&nbsp;<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;After all, because of a clean environment, everyone has to be conscious of his responsibility to protect the environment.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-07-07 13:36:47 UTC</pubDate>
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