https://padlet.com/24ltozlu/1ghqrsdz9upv Please type positive and appropriate comments en-us 2018-12-05 15:52:40 UTC 2018-12-07 16:03:02 UTC hello@padlet.com 24mwilliams1 https://padlet.com/24ltozlu/1ghqrsdz9upv/wish/312278723 I wish instead of saying:("We waited for a while for the sun to vaporize all the water.") You could say: "We waited for what felt like forever for the sun to evaporate all the water off our body's.]]> 2018-12-07 15:47:22 UTC https://padlet.com/24ltozlu/1ghqrsdz9upv/wish/312278723 24mwilliams1 https://padlet.com/24ltozlu/1ghqrsdz9upv/wish/312285423 Overall I really enjoyed your story it was very interesting and detailed. 

]]> 2018-12-07 16:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/24ltozlu/1ghqrsdz9upv/wish/312285423 24mwilliams1 https://padlet.com/24ltozlu/1ghqrsdz9upv/wish/312285994 I liked how much description you added and how everything just flowed!]]> 2018-12-07 16:02:11 UTC https://padlet.com/24ltozlu/1ghqrsdz9upv/wish/312285994