https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c You must log in using your student account to receive credit for this assignment. Create a post for each artwork critiqued. Title each post using the seat number for the artwork. Each post should contain one STRENGTH about the artwork and one SUGGESTION for the artist. Use criteria from the rubric and be SPECIFIC. en-us 2017-03-02 13:15:53 UTC 2017-03-02 18:44:46 UTC hello@padlet.com 00033322 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157429709 One strength would be your proportions your eyes seem to be an equal distance, one suggestion would be more detail, and more use of continuous contour ]]> 2017-03-02 18:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157429709 lilredgirl11 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157429747 The neck looks good but one suggestion would be to proportion your portrait better. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:17:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157429747 10018639 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157429868 I like the background. Great drawing very accurate ]]> 2017-03-02 18:17:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157429868 10028304 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157429877 You have added a good amount of details.
You could improve on your proportions.]]> 2017-03-02 18:17:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157429877 00059330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157429926 You should work on using more details and portion your facial features. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:18:02 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157429926 10009722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430019 its a great drawing but it doesnt show as much continous line . a strength it shows your good drawing skills . a suggestion i recommend is detail to the background]]> 2017-03-02 18:18:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430019 10020452 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430045 Strength: You used proportions very well, as well as craftsmanship and  the details put into the drawing 
Suggestion: I suggest that you make every thing continuous, and add more symbols to represent you in the background. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:18:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430045 00026702 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430063 The background is plain but it is really good. You also have good details.]]> 2017-03-02 18:18:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430063 10019159 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430096 Creative background. Strength: Great lines very close to flawless, lines are continuous and proportions are accurate. Weakness: Couldn't find any. Keep up the great work.]]> 2017-03-02 18:18:29 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430096 carly9172 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430130 You have nice proportions, and the hair is nice. the way you through you clothes is really good. my suggestion is that you draw a background, and make it look like you did a continuous line. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:18:34 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430130 00030727 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430161 He did well with the continuous contour, his attention to detail was also noticed with his wrinkles and eye details. His background was lack luster with only half of it being filled ]]> 2017-03-02 18:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430161 00052894 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430285 1 Strengh is that the lines are very smooth 

Weakness: i feel like your continuous contour could have been show alittle better]]> 2017-03-02 18:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430285 10017427 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430334 Your background is plain, but I like how you drew everything using a continuous line. You have really good details.  ]]> 2017-03-02 18:19:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430334 00010988 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430458 She have a lot of details and back ground fills the paper and she don't pick up her pencil.]]> 2017-03-02 18:19:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430458 00011318 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430558 There's not many details , but there are some great proportions and continuous contour , you may have to work on getting more details in.

]]> 2017-03-02 18:19:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430558 00033895 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430647 Strength - The proportions were good you took up a lot of space and the parts of the face were accurately sized. Weakness - Not much details in the eyes and nose area but overall good job.]]> 2017-03-02 18:19:56 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430647 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430700 Lots of details. You kept continuous line and the background is really creative.

]]> 2017-03-02 18:20:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430700 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430704 strength did a overall great job with the drawing and did great job with the background.
weakness put more stuff on your shirt 
 ]]> 2017-03-02 18:20:04 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430704 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430863 Very nice and creat]]> 2017-03-02 18:20:30 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157430863 00010988 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431394 he had a lot of details and have a little bit details.
 ]]> 2017-03-02 18:21:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431394 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431616 his details are pretty good and display a nice touch to his features 

]]> 2017-03-02 18:22:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431616 10009722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431690 A strength i see is a that the artist took his time through it . a weakness i pointed out is that the artist did not use his background much. i suggest the artist makes better use of there time.]]> 2017-03-02 18:22:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431690 10019159 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431739 Strengths: Everything is accurate and proportioned well. Nice background. Weakness You could do more with the background. But its very nice.]]> 2017-03-02 18:22:45 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431739 00033322 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431764 One strength would be your use of contentious contour , one suggestion would be proportions ]]> 2017-03-02 18:22:49 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431764 10028304 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431785 You have a lot of details, but your proportions don't look accurate]]> 2017-03-02 18:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431785 10018639 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431824 Perfect drawing no weakness keep up with the good work :) ]]> 2017-03-02 18:22:58 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431824 carly9172 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431845 your drawing is nice, and the outline of your hair is good. your proportions are very nice. my suggestion is that you draw a background, and finish drawing your body. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:23:03 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431845 lilredgirl11 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431893 The portrait detailed.
Try adding a background to the portrait. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:23:10 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431893 00033895 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431956 Strength - Proportions and Details were very good especially with the hair and The Symbolism and Iconography. Weakness - Detail the neck and shirt a little more.]]> 2017-03-02 18:23:24 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431956 10020452 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431969 Strength: you incorporated proportions, craftsmanship, symbolism, and detail very well. I can see them clearly and nicely in your portrait
Suggestion: The portrait is not a continuous line and you should go back over your lines to make it so. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:23:27 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157431969 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432018 looks really nice

]]> 2017-03-02 18:23:35 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432018 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432030 Good but needs to work on details and continuous line

]]> 2017-03-02 18:23:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432030 00026702 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432051 You did a very good job on the nose and details. You have a cool background too.]]> 2017-03-02 18:23:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432051 10017427 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432055 You have really good proportions and very good details. I would suggest you add more to your background. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:23:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432055 00059330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432070 Very detailed. You should work on neatness. Try drawing light so if you make a mistake it can easily erase. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:23:41 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432070 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432088 Good job on talking about culture ]]> 2017-03-02 18:23:44 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432088 00011318 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432230 2017-03-02 18:24:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432230 00030727 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432310 This drawing did poorly with continuous contour and the detail found was poorly executed. Also it's kind of hard to understand what the pineapple in the background is supposed to represent. In whole, I feel that you should restart the drawing over and maybe try to choose a different thing to represent yourself. If you turned this in it would automatically be a 75 because of your lack of continuous contour. Please restart this drawing so that you can make a great grade.]]> 2017-03-02 18:24:17 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432310 00011318 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432380 Great job with the continuous contour but have to work on your details and getting more proportions and there's no craftsmanship or symbolism]]> 2017-03-02 18:24:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432380 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432438 creative background ]]> 2017-03-02 18:24:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432438 00010988 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432441 Have very good details and fill the background of his paper.

]]> 2017-03-02 18:24:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432441 00033322 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432452 one strength would be you attention to detail and use of contour, one suggestion would be better use of proportions ]]> 2017-03-02 18:24:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432452 10020086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432512 The drawing is very nice, but in the background could've been more bigger .

]]> 2017-03-02 18:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432512 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432651 strength- did a great job with the drawing 
weakness- put a little bit more work on the shirt ]]> 2017-03-02 18:25:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432651 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432695 Your strength is everything ]]> 2017-03-02 18:25:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432695 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432723 Good but need more iconography and deta]]> 2017-03-02 18:25:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432723 00052894 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432739 One strength : is that you have good details 

Weakness : your proportions do  not look accurate like they schould 

]]> 2017-03-02 18:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432739 10018639 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432820 There's no background, continuous drawing but the drawing look pretty okay ]]> 2017-03-02 18:25:29 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432820 00010988 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432945 She have good details and good contour drawing and she fill the back ground of her page.

]]> 2017-03-02 18:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432945 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432960 lots of details really nice looks like you took your time.]]> 2017-03-02 18:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157432960 10019159 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433050 Strengths: looks just like you!! Everything is accurate. Weakness: You forgot your background]]> 2017-03-02 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433050 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433546 You did good on the background ]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433546 10020452 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433591 Strength: Nice proportions, details, symbolism, and craftsmanship. Your drawing looks similar to yourself.
Suggestion: Making your drawing a continuous line, and if it is to darken the lines used. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:20 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433591 10020086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433627 The drawing is very nice. 

]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433627 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433637 Good but need to work on being neat and needs more detail]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433637 00030727 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433719 This drawing has no continuous contour and lacks detail. There was also no body. This drawing would fail mainly because only half of it is not complete and you have no continuous contour represented. Please restart this drawing so that you will have a passing grade.]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:38 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433719 00011318 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433725 Great job with details but you need to work or the proportions and continuous contour.]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433725 lilredgirl11 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433733 I like the background and how it expresses your personality. 
You could work on some of the proportions on your face like nose and eyes. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:40 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433733 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433752 real nice, took your time, you were focused in your drawing. Lots of details and effort in this art work]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:44 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433752 00059330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433754 Your details and portions are very good. I can tell your background is Mario. One side of your lip is a little to far. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:44 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433754 10028304 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433785 You have very good proportions.  However, I think you should work on your continuous line]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433785 10017427 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433790 Your proportions and the details in your face are good. I think you should add more to your background and work on your nose. Great job with using a continuous line. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433790 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433795 His shape covers his facial features pretty nicely ]]> 2017-03-02 18:27:51 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433795 10036293 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433878 You really took your time and did good]]> 2017-03-02 18:28:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433878 10019159 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433888 Strengths: Continuous lines, Like the detail to the beard
Weakness: Your background is kinda dull (besides the basketball and football)]]> 2017-03-02 18:28:08 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433888 10020086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433928 excellent work. Everything seem to look in place.


]]> 2017-03-02 18:28:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433928 00052894 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433967 Strength:some deatils 

Weakness : you could add more details also you could make your lines alot smoother than they are   also you could  make your proportions better because they dont match you at all also trying using anothing paper because your is bent up

]]> 2017-03-02 18:28:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433967 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433993 Strength- Did i really great job with the drawing.
Weakness- Could put something creative on your shirt

]]> 2017-03-02 18:28:26 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157433993 00033895 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434131 Strength - good job with the Continuous lines. Weakness - Head was too big for the face.]]> 2017-03-02 18:28:50 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434131 10018639 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434145 There no background seems like you're not finished with the drawing ]]> 2017-03-02 18:28:52 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434145 00026702 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434167 Your biggest strength is your neck. I think you should make your face look more like yourself instead of just drawing a face. You can work on that by using your time wisely. I don't know what that circle is at the top right corner.]]> 2017-03-02 18:28:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434167 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434185 Good icono]]> 2017-03-02 18:28:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434185 10009722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434229 i see goo detail in the zipper, a weakness i see is that the artist needs to proportion better i suggest the artist to use the porportioons]]> 2017-03-02 18:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434229 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434273 her details and background are amazing ]]> 2017-03-02 18:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434273 00011318 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434275 Good job with the continuous contour and the details. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434275 00033322 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434294 One strength would be your attention to detail, continuous contour, and proportions, one suggestion would be more details in your background.]]> 2017-03-02 18:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434294 lilredgirl11 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434344 You did a great job on the details but you could work on proportioning. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:29:25 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434344 10020086 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434387 amazing artwork. 

]]> 2017-03-02 18:29:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434387 00030727 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434409 This drawing has a great continuous contour and has decent detail. Also your background does well of telling something about yourself with you writing in french. This drawing is well done but you should definitely try to add more detail and maybe if you wanted to, you could even add more to the background. Well Done!]]> 2017-03-02 18:29:37 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434409 10017427 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434578 I think you should have a more meaningful background but I like the details of your ears and your lips. Great job with using the continuous line. 

]]> 2017-03-02 18:30:07 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434578 10020452 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434716 Strength: Proportions, symbolism, details, and craftsmanship, and using a continuous were all drawn out. Making your drawing fit the rubric.
Suggestion: You could darken the lines in the background so that it looks continuous as well.]]> 2017-03-02 18:30:19 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434716 10019159 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434767 Strengths the back ground is great and I like the choice words and flags. You had put a lot of effort into your eyes. Weakness: You could've don more details on your shirt. but besides that your drawing is flawless]]> 2017-03-02 18:30:32 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157434767 10009722 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435007 i see great detail . i dont see a weakness i suggest that the artist darkens the image]]> 2017-03-02 18:31:15 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435007 10018639 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435012 Need more background very accurate & drawing looks very good ]]> 2017-03-02 18:31:16 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435012 10028304 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435155 You have a lot of good details, but i think you should improve on your proportions]]> 2017-03-02 18:31:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435155 00032089 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435190 Strength did a pretty good job. 
Weakness- just draw your shirt and background and you will be good  ]]> 2017-03-02 18:31:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435190 carly9172 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435192 your details are nice, and you have somewhat of a nice background. my suggestion is to draw a little bit more objects in your background and it would be great. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:31:55 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435192 00033895 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435399 Strength - Proportions and detail were very good. Weakness - Symbolism and Iconography was confusing.]]> 2017-03-02 18:32:28 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435399 00027474 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435410 His background is nice and his details are good ]]> 2017-03-02 18:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435410 10018639 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435437 Drawing looks very good I like how you did with the rose very accurate ]]> 2017-03-02 18:32:36 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435437 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435484 Good on your details ]]> 2017-03-02 18:32:46 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435484 carly9172 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435488 your details are really good, the picture kind of look a like you. my suggestion isn't to draw a background and you would be good. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435488 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435813 2017-03-02 18:33:44 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435813 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435926 2017-03-02 18:34:05 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157435926 lilredgirl11 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157436030 You did good for drawing your hair. 
You could work on proportioning and adding a background. ]]> 2017-03-02 18:34:22 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157436030 00026702 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157436202 Very good details.Overall good drawing.]]> 2017-03-02 18:34:54 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157436202 00059330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157436224 2017-03-02 18:34:57 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157436224 00059330 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157436377 Your drawing is very detailed. I can see your lines are connected. Next time draw light just in case you need to erase. 
Keep the good work.

]]> 2017-03-02 18:35:23 UTC https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157436377 00052894 https://padlet.com/llaney1/1fla36hxsp7c/wish/157437106 Strengths: you proportions look accurate 

There are no continuous contour and hardly any details 

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