https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70 Look at these project introductions and add notes to say what you think is good, and what you think they could have done better. en-us 2017-06-19 13:40:56 UTC 2023-04-12 21:49:27 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Planets.png emma_richardson2 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176864176 2017-06-19 13:50:34 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176864176 emma_richardson2 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176864760 2017-06-19 13:54:30 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176864760 emma_richardson2 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176864838 2017-06-19 13:55:05 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176864838 emma_richardson2 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176864898 2017-06-19 13:55:34 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176864898 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955126 That's well 'ard]]> 2017-06-20 08:45:33 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955126 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955185 2017-06-20 08:46:06 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955185 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955190 It's very scientific and detailed but I can't really understand all of the words 👌]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:08 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955190 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955199 There is good]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:11 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955199 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955210 Really good laungage and information ]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:15 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955210 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955217 I really like this because it is very well presented and uses good scientific information. They have used key words and explained their experiment. Maybe include some definitions as I don't know those words]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955217 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955221 Missing commas in some places but clear explanations and language]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:21 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955221 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955235 Vey well are ]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:22 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955235 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955237 Very good knowledge just maybe add some detail like dates and who found out what

]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:22 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955237 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955241 Well fitp]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955241 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955253 H]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:30 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955253 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955272 Good language but very very boring to read. Not v]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955272 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955278 Well presented and very good use of scientific and complicated terms. It should maybe be less wordy

]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:40 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955278 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955279 There is good scientific language. They could improve on the presentation by neatening everything]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:40 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955279 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955283 2017-06-20 08:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955283 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955284 It is very well presented and has good scientific language it could be slightly clearer with pictures or just by being shorter ]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955284 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955287 Very well presented and good scientific language]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955287 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955288 2017-06-20 08:46:42 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955288 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955296 A good start lots of info 👌👌]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955296 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955302 That's one swagalicious paragraph

]]> 2017-06-20 08:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955302 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955336 This is good

]]> 2017-06-20 08:47:05 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955336 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955343 Good language but very very boring to read]]> 2017-06-20 08:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955343 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955347 Well big for an introduction]]> 2017-06-20 08:47:10 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955347 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955349 Not not much exact information but good use of scientific language]]> 2017-06-20 08:47:12 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955349 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955403 Neatly presented and very scienfitic ]]> 2017-06-20 08:47:32 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955403 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955406 Really good information ]]> 2017-06-20 08:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955406 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955408 Great design doesn't really make that much sense]]> 2017-06-20 08:47:34 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955408 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955418 2017-06-20 08:47:38 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955418 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955434 Doe doesn't really ]]> 2017-06-20 08:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955434 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955439 Good info but quite hard to understand as ]]> 2017-06-20 08:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955439 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955457 Good use of scientific language very good use of scientific language and detail ]]> 2017-06-20 08:47:54 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955457 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955476 2017-06-20 08:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955476 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955480 well peng ]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:04 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955480 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955498 Very very good getting info across but not enough detail]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:13 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955498 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955506 Good introduction but doesn't explain enough 

]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955506 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955514 This I this is a good introduction but not as detailed as the previous one. It could include more info about why they are doing this experiment with magnet]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:18 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955514 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955515 2017-06-20 08:48:19 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955515 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955518 Doesn't doesn't really make any sense to me.]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:19 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955518 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955520 Nice]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955520 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955545 Looks really good could be more factual]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:26 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955545 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955547 Hard hard to understand as the laungage is very compli]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:27 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955547 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955551 Good scientific language ]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:29 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955551 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955553 Clear and very informative ]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:29 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955553 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955559 Well presented and very clear ]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:31 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955559 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955564 Use better scientific words and information would be good if more .
Clear explanation of what your experiment will be ]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955564 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955569 Bit complicated for someone like me]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:34 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955569 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955582 Does not put much info and it is not an amazing intro]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:39 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955582 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955589 Describes waht is going to be done inthe project is and what is going to be discussed]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955589 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955613 Too long ]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955613 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955614 Nicely presented]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955614 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955628 Very scientific language added to it]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955628 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955636 Good information but it is quite long and should be clearer]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:54 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955636 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955639 My granny's hampster could do better than that ]]> 2017-06-20 08:48:55 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955639 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955658 A a bit to long 

]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:01 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955658 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955668 2017-06-20 08:49:05 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955668 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955670 2017-06-20 08:49:06 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955670 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955672 Very cliché but still quite good and information providing for and introduction]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:06 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955672 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955674 Good good language but too long and looks plagiarised 

]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:07 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955674 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955681 Some very confusing language but is very clear and detailed]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955681 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955683 Lots of information ]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955683 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955685 More more formal language]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:11 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955685 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955686 2017-06-20 08:49:12 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955686 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955689 Looks a bit bland but a good introduction]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:15 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955689 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955695 Such complicated laungage and rlly hard to understand but overall good info

]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:18 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955695 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955726 2017-06-20 08:49:31 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955726 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955737 Wayyy tooo longggg

]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:37 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955737 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955740 2017-06-20 08:49:37 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955740 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955742 2017-06-20 08:49:38 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955742 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955763 To long.but lots of info maybe to much]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955763 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955764 Specific but ]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955764 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955770 Very well presented doesn't make much sense though]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:48 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955770 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955773 Good language interesting so it doesn't bore you and detailed but not too long]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:49 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955773 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955774 Looks very boring]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:50 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955774 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955775 I don't understand any of the words they are a bit too scientific and complicated]]> 2017-06-20 08:49:50 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955775 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955785 2017-06-20 08:49:55 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955785 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955794 It needs to be clear,a good length,well presented and explain the question you are investigating ]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:01 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955794 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955816 This this is a verylong  and complicated intro and if I was reading it I would get bored and not want to read the whole piece]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:11 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955816 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955827 Short informative and don't blabber on]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:17 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955827 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955834 2017-06-20 08:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955834 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955842 2017-06-20 08:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955842 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955845 2017-06-20 08:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955845 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955867 Clear and clear and instructive info with definitions for key words. You don't want it to drag on and it needs to be sweet and snappy.🍒]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955867 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955872 Extremly good good data however it seams like you put just too much. Your opening paragraph]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:37 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955872 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955878 Is this only the introduction? I didn't understand a thing... Jesus]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:40 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955878 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955879 Really hard to understand]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:40 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955879 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955891 it needs to be eye catching and informative about what is going to happen]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:43 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955891 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955892 Very informative ]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:44 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955892 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955897 Not to short not to long 
Lots of info]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955897 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955905 Needs to be easy and short to read. No plagiarism ]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955905 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955907 Good facts
Original
Interesting
Eye catching
Formal language 
Short]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:49 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955907 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955910 V]]> 2017-06-20 08:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955910 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955960 Good facts and good facts and very interesting but quite short]]> 2017-06-20 08:51:22 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955960 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955969 2017-06-20 08:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955969 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955971 2017-06-20 08:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955971 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955981 Good facts and detail not too much info🌕]]> 2017-06-20 08:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176955981 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176956003 2017-06-20 08:51:42 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176956003 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176956007 Hhhhhhhhhh]]> 2017-06-20 08:51:43 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176956007 https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176957020 Uh]]> 2017-06-20 09:00:34 UTC https://padlet.com/emma_richardson2/70/wish/176957020