https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91 Reflecting on peer writing conference en-us 2016-11-17 15:00:01 UTC 2026-02-26 23:56:29 UTC hello@padlet.com janain https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138425482 What do you need to work on as you revise your piece?

]]> 2016-11-17 15:03:14 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138425482 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435144 I need to focus on using better transition words after my quotes]]> 2016-11-17 15:23:29 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435144 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435221 I need to use better word choices and transitions.]]> 2016-11-17 15:23:37 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435221 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435242 I need to learn how to "cut the fat" off of my essay, and use better word choice. ]]> 2016-11-17 15:23:39 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435242 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435248 To revise your piece, you need to choose good quotations that represent your topic.]]> 2016-11-17 15:23:40 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435248 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435261 I need to work on transitioning my sentences and quotes better. ]]> 2016-11-17 15:23:41 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435261 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435322 I need to work on eliminating words that are not needed, and transitions. Also, I need to work on explaining my quotations more. ]]> 2016-11-17 15:23:48 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435322 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435357 2016-11-17 15:23:52 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435357 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435398 I need to use better transition words and try making my paragraphs shorter by focusing on the important information more. ]]> 2016-11-17 15:23:55 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435398 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435414 I will need to choose fewer words while still being able to convey my thoughts.]]> 2016-11-17 15:23:57 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435414 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435500 I need to mostly focus on clarity, introducing my quotes, and making sure my quotes relate to the topic sentence. ]]> 2016-11-17 15:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435500 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435503 I need to revise my word choice after I write]]> 2016-11-17 15:24:07 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435503 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435527 Using better diction because I repeat words 

]]> 2016-11-17 15:24:10 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435527 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435956 I need to introduce my quotes in different ways.

]]> 2016-11-17 15:24:55 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138435956 https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138436951 I need to focus on finding better fitting quotes from the text.]]> 2016-11-17 15:26:50 UTC https://padlet.com/janain/1dnkig207b91/wish/138436951