6E07_ Found 2 _ Writing Exam skill by Vinschool Metropolis

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 06:31:53 UTC

These questions may help you:
- What was he doing?
- Where was he? Why did the place look like that?

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 06:31:53 UTC

- Work individually.
- Write some sentences to describe what happened in the 2 pictures in your own words. Use the given questions as a guide.
- Timing: 6’

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 06:31:53 UTC

These questions may help you:
- What is the animal?
- Where was it? What was it doing?
- What could happen next?

Instruction

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 06:31:53 UTC

●Choose two writings

●Give comments for your friends’ writings

●Use the table to check

●Eg:

You have an interesting title. Use linking words and adverbs. But you didn’t describe all three pictures

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 06:31:53 UTC

Work individually
Go to Padlet.
Choose a set of pictures then write a story based on the given 3 pictures. You must write 50 words or more. Use the writing checklist.
Timing: 15’

No note on padlet = absence
Challenging corner: Write one more story for another set.

Writing check list for part 7

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 06:31:53 UTC

Model answer and questions

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 06:31:53 UTC

MODEL ANSWER
A sunny day

Mark got up and looked outside. He was happy because it was a sunny day. He decided to play football. He then found his football and hurried outside. Next, he called his friends to ask them to come to his house. Later, his friends arrived, and they played together. They had a wonderful time!

Questions
1/ What is the title of the story?
2/ What is the name of the character?
3/ How many sentences are there? Is it >= 50 words?
4/ Does the story describe all 3 pictures?
5/ What tense is used?
6/ List some linking words (time expressions) that are used.
7/ List some adjectives and adverbs that are used.

Monitor

Vinh084841 — 2021-11-23 06:49:44 UTC

+I think he is jumping into some trash
+He is in garbage disposal area
+ Because people are litter

Trí describer

tri025476 — 2021-11-23 06:50:41 UTC

He is parkour or jumping.
I think he is at slum or landfills. I think peoples drop trash so beautiful place became dirty place. Wait 1 minute, please protect our EARTH !!!!!!

Thụy Anh

anh027058 — 2021-11-23 06:51:12 UTC

1 ) is an elephant
2 ) i think he/she is in a city and he/she destroy thing
3 ) they could accident kill people. People have to retenstion the elephant

P.M.Hoàng

hoang003173 — 2021-11-23 06:51:34 UTC

- There is an elephant in the picture
- It was in the street and the elephant walk in it
- The elephant will destroy and scare peoples.

Lam

2021-11-23 06:51:34 UTC

- he jump into some trash
- he is on the mountain of garbage , because it's the waste that people throw about every years

Phạm Bảo Hân

han024991 — 2021-11-23 06:51:44 UTC

He is jumping

khoi nguyen

2021-11-23 06:51:51 UTC

- elephant
- the elephant is outside, i thing the elephant is scard

Trang

trang070078 — 2021-11-23 06:52:27 UTC

+ The elephant was angry and destructive things of the people there.
+Here is a slum, an elephant will scream out of anger.

DUY THANH

thanh026136 — 2021-11-23 06:52:36 UTC

-Elephant
-I think that place is being disturbed by someone releasing elephants.
-I think that place will be destroyed

Hoàng Việt

2021-11-23 06:52:44 UTC

In this picture, I see a elephant. I think the elephant is in the town and the elephant is walking. I think officer will coming and put the elephant in to a zoo.

Trọng

2021-11-23 06:52:49 UTC

- is an elephant
- the elephant it's in a small neighborhood and he destroy everything .
- the elephant will be caught

Minh Sa

2021-11-23 06:52:53 UTC

1.is an elephant
2. i think the elephant is in a city and he/she destroy everything
3. they could accident kill people. People have to retenstion the elephant

Vy

Vyphanle — 2021-11-23 06:53:05 UTC

1, is a biggg elephant
2, he is in the city and đập phá people house
3, Elephant can kill people

yen :I

yen027324 — 2021-11-23 06:53:07 UTC

1, is an elephant
2. the elephant in the city, the elephant is walking and destroy the city.
3,the people will scared

tung

2021-11-23 06:53:08 UTC

the elephant is outside, i thing the elephant is scard and destroying the town :>

Trí describer

tri025476 — 2021-11-23 06:53:10 UTC

An elephant.
I think at islamic country. The elephant is destroying the traffic. I think everyone will hurt.

Thuỳ Anh

anh038975 — 2021-11-23 06:53:17 UTC

1. It is elephant
2. In the town and elephant is walk in it
3. Elephant will destroy the town

lam024735 — 2021-11-23 06:53:19 UTC

1. Is the elephants
2.He/she walk in a city
3.He/she make everyone panic

Phạm Quỳnh Phương

pqp0902 — 2021-11-23 06:54:21 UTC

1. It's an elephant
2. It was on the rubbish./It is walked.
3. I think it will walk more

trọng

2021-11-23 06:55:32 UTC

- he is jump in to the trash
- he is in garbage storage
- because destroy the environment and throw garbage indiscriminately

2021-11-23 06:55:37 UTC

This is an elephant.
It’s in the bicycle park

Minh Thuw

thu006847 — 2021-11-23 06:57:18 UTC

1. It is elephant.
2. He/she is in a city and he/she destroy thing.
3. The people will scared.

Trang

trang070078 — 2021-11-23 06:58:50 UTC

+) He thought that it a cushion, and played with happy feeling.
+) This place environmental pollution because had some people throw the trash.

Hoàng Việt

2021-11-23 06:58:56 UTC

I think he is jumping. He is in the place where have many trashs. I think because people put trash to this place.

Minh Thuw

thu006847 — 2021-11-23 06:59:33 UTC

- I think he is jumping.
- he is at landfills.
- Because people put trash to this place.

L.Hieu

leehieeu15 — 2021-11-23 07:00:58 UTC

He is jumping between two piles of discard clothes
He is at landfillS
Because people throw their trash there

lam024735 — 2021-11-23 07:01:23 UTC

1. He Is jumping
2.He in a landfill. This place look like that bacause so many trash in there.

ngoc

ngoc033147 — 2021-11-23 07:03:57 UTC

1 it is elephant
2 the elephant in the city , smash the house
3 people scary

Nguyên

nguyen033519 — 2021-11-23 07:19:56 UTC

1 it is elephant
2 the elephant in the city it destroy somethings
3 people scary

Trang

trang070078 — 2021-11-23 07:20:46 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7 sentences. It 53 words
4. Yes
5. Past simple
6. Next; Later
7. Adj: happy; wonderful.
Adverb: sunny

Minh Sa

2021-11-23 07:21:57 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7 sentences. It 54 words
4. Yes
5. Past simple
6. Next, Later
7. happy, wonderful.

Phạm Bảo Hân

han024991 — 2021-11-23 07:22:41 UTC

1/ A sunny day
2/ Mark
3/ 7, >50 words
4/ yes
5/ past simple
6/ next, later

Hoàng Việt

2021-11-23 07:22:46 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 54 words
4. yes
5. past simple
6. Next, Later
7. happy, wonderful

Minh Thuw

thu006847 — 2021-11-23 07:22:48 UTC

1. A sunny day .
2. Mark.
3. 7 sentences . 53 words.
4. Yes.
5. Past simple.
6. Next, Later.
7. Adjective: happy, wonderful.
Adverb: sunny.

trí so badddd

tri025476 — 2021-11-23 07:23:26 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark ( Zuckerberg )
3. Only 7, not 50 words.
4. I think yes.
5. look, call, touch ( when he play soccer )
6. I think sunny?
7. got, looked, played.

Nguyên lol

nguyen033519 — 2021-11-23 07:23:58 UTC

A sunny day
Mark
7 sentences. It 53 words
Yes
Past simple
Next; Later
Adject: happy; wonderful.
Adverb: sunny

Hoàng Anh

anh000114 — 2021-11-23 07:24:02 UTC

A sunny day
Mark
7 sentences. It 54 words
Yes
Past simple
Next, Later
Happy, wonderful.

Thuỳ Anh

anh038975 — 2021-11-23 07:24:09 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7 sentences, it 53 words
4. Yes
5. Past simple
6. Next, later
7. happy, wonderful

yen:V

yen027324 — 2021-11-23 07:24:11 UTC

1, a sunny day
2,mark
3, 7 sentences
4, yes
5, past simple
6, next,later
7, wonderful,happy

Phạm Quỳnh Phương

pqp0902 — 2021-11-23 07:24:18 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. There are 7 sentences
4. Yes, it does.
5. Past simple
6.

P.M.Hoang

hoang003173 — 2021-11-23 07:25:00 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7 sentences. 54 words
4. Yes
5. Past simple
6. Next, later
7. Happy, wonderful

Nguyen Huong Thao

thao047219 — 2021-11-23 07:25:21 UTC

a sunny day
Mark
7 sentences, yes
Yes
Past simple
next, later
Adjective:Happy, wonderful
adverb: sunny

lam024735 — 2021-11-23 07:26:21 UTC

1. a sunny day
2.Mark
3. 52 word.7 sentences
4.Yes
5.past simple
6.next,later
7.happy,wonderful

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 07:59:11 UTC

khanh ngoc

ngoc033147 — 2021-11-23 08:02:46 UTC

1 a sunny day
2 mark
3 7 sentences
4 yes
5 past simple
6 next , later
7 happy , wonderful

yen:V

yen027324 — 2021-11-23 08:06:02 UTC

Johny Sunday
this is Johny a boy with a happy face today is Sunday so he has a nice day with his friend. first, he called his friend and they will meet him at the park to have a race they are running and laugh so much. Then he comes to the garden and plays soccer with his friend. that is a funny Sunday, Johny enjoy his day .

Hoàng Việt- title: sport day

2021-11-23 08:08:29 UTC

Yesterday was sport day, Tom got up early and went to bathroom. First, he brushed teeth and dressed. Next, he ate breakfast. After ate breakfast, Tom called to his friends to played football. Next, his friends arrived and ran with Tom to the playground. Finally, Tom and his played football very fun.

Thụy Anh

anh027058 — 2021-11-23 08:09:24 UTC

mark sunday
he go with his best friend who is jack. When they got to the park they could she the sun is pretty, but when they walk a strong wind come and 100 dollar is next to mark shoes they was so happy and thay buy a cake to eat. Yummy !

P.M.Hoàng

hoang003173 — 2021-11-23 08:09:45 UTC

Today, Nick and his friend have a sports day at school. Nick is very excited about the sports day. First, they have a run completion. Nick is run very fast so he was the first one to finish. Next, they have the soccer game and his team is very good. After the game, they have a rest and enjoy their sports game.

Trang

trang070078 — 2021-11-23 08:10:26 UTC

Goodness?

It was a rainy day, Fa and Ke went to the cafeteria to chit-chat. When they feel a little boring, they went to the ball house because Fa, Ke want to remember their childhood. Then, they picked up the money on the way, they thought to take it because they were poor. In the end, they regretfully returned to the cafeteria and returned it but still pretended to be happy. Anyways Fa and Ke tried to be able to keep a little kind, and it was good.

Trí

tri025476 — 2021-11-23 08:10:51 UTC

Asin's weekend
This is Asin, a boy with yellow hair and his old Nokia. First, he got up, then he called to his friends. Next, they met at a road. They started practice running. In the afternoon, They played soccer at Marry's field. They felt very fun. Asin really enjoyed his weekend.

Nguyên

nguyen033519 — 2021-11-23 08:12:02 UTC

Visit my friend.
Hi,my name is Mark am visiting my friend,My friend is John .We are going to go to a flower shop . We see a money , I and John pick it and save it in wallet :) , after that we go to a flower shop and use it to buy flower .

Minh Sa

2021-11-23 08:12:13 UTC

One afternoon, Mark and John were going for a walk. Then they saw a money falling to the ground. They quickly picked it up without waiting for the person who lost the money or give it to the police. After picking up the money Mark and John went to buy food.

L.Hiếu

leehieeu15 — 2021-11-23 08:12:16 UTC

On the sunday after noon , I woke up and have idea . I came up with a good plan today . I went to my friends house asked them to playground . Then we played together on the field . We had a good sunday afternoon

khoi nguyen

2021-11-23 08:13:31 UTC

1 Sunny day
2 mark
3. 7 sectences
4 yes
5 past simple
6 later
7 happy

Thái Lâm

lam024735 — 2021-11-23 08:13:41 UTC

Tom interesting Day
Tom wake up soon to do exercise and play football.First Tom called friends go to park to do exercise for 10 minute. After 10 minute,he and all he friends go to a football pitches to play football for 1 hour.When all done he feeing so good.

khoi nguyen

2021-11-23 08:14:31 UTC

He is jumping on the trash

Thuỳ Anh

anh038975 — 2021-11-23 08:15:00 UTC

Yesterday is happy, Petter got up and he heard the noice outside. First, he went to the bathroom, washed his face and bushed his teeth. He go to the kitchen to eat. He is ran outside to play with his friend

Minh Thuw - title : a picnic day

thu006847 — 2021-11-23 08:15:58 UTC

On a beautiful morning, a family prepared for a picnic. They carry a lot of things including personal belongings and a private car. after they arrived , they sat in the park enjoying the beautiful scenery and ate the food they had prepared. they still Watch people swimming in the lake.

tùng

2021-11-23 08:16:21 UTC

nam weekend day , nam and friend have a sports day at school. nam is very excited about the sports day. they have a run completion. nam is run so fast he was the first one to finish. Next, they have the basketball game and his team is very good.nam really enjoyed his weekend.

DUY THANH

thanh026136 — 2021-11-23 08:16:31 UTC

One day, two people were walking and suddenly saw a bill although they needed to find the lost person, on the contrary, they went to buy two ice cream to eat, so they had a delicious ice cream meal.

Hà Anh

urzbixo — 2021-11-23 08:18:46 UTC

1. He Is jumping on the trash

Phạm Bảo Hân

han024991 — 2021-11-23 08:19:17 UTC

Mark's weekend
Mark got up and in the morning, after he brushed his teeth, washed his face and changed clothes before he went to the park and ran with his friends. Then, they played fooball.

Phạm Quỳnh Phương

pqp0902 — 2021-11-23 08:19:19 UTC

Tony's weekend
In the morning, Tony is get up and prepare for his racing's day. Tony calling his friends to go to the racing. They meeting at the park and start for a racing. After that, Tony and his friends going to the yard to play football, they all have fun!

trọng

2021-11-23 08:19:23 UTC

on the morning tom wake up and and take his phone and calling to his friend , after prepare he go to the park and jogging with his friend . in the afternoon he go to football pitches with his friend and play football together .

khoi nguyen

2021-11-23 08:19:26 UTC

Jonhny day
This is a Jonhny, he is happy because today is sunday, he has a friday his friends. Fist, he and his friends run at the park i thing is a race and jonhny and his friends play football. is funny day.

AN BÌNH 👉👈

2021-11-23 08:24:49 UTC

One fine day, Jack's family decided to have a picnic! After arriving, Jack's family ate delicious food made by Jack's mother.
After eating, jack decided to swim with his sister! It was fun then!

NGHI LAM

2021-11-23 08:26:41 UTC

Alex's Sunday
on the beatiful sunday , alex invited his friend to play ball , they went to the familliar playground when they noticed , there were already a lot of brother and sis playing there and Alex asked : everyone, can i play football with you or give me some yard , so can i play ? bro and sis said :

ok, I will play with you. Alex and his friends played until the evening and had a lot of fun.

Hà Anh

urzbixo — 2021-11-23 08:27:23 UTC

1. Sunny Day
2. Mark
3. 7 Sectences
4. Yes
5. Past simple
6. Later
7. Happy

Vinh

Vinh084841 — 2021-11-23 08:27:26 UTC

On a Wednesday morning, our family was getting ready for a picnic. My mother is putting all the baking accessories and grills in the basket, and my sister is preparing the towels to sit on and my brother is getting dressed and my father is taking his wine, And I am carrying mother helper. Then we got in the car and headed to the park, I started spreading the towel on the ground, my mom put the things on the towel, my sister was carrying the things for her and my little brother was playing and my dad was parking car. We began to sit on towels and enjoy grilled foods: sausages, steaks... It's been a long time since my family had such a fun picnic. After eating, my sister and I changed into swimsuits and went to the lake to swim, our parents were watching us swim. After swimming, we packed up and went home.

Hoàng Anh

anh000114 — 2021-11-23 08:28:19 UTC

On weekend! He goes with his friend is jack. When they got to the park they could see the sun is pretty, but when they walk strong wind come and 100 dollars is next to mark shoes they were so happy and they buy a cake to eat.

Nguyễn Hương Thảo

thao047219 — 2021-11-23 08:28:52 UTC

Holiday with family
Today is Sunday. Tommy and his family decided to go camping. They prepared camping gears. They decided to have camping on the grass, near to the lake. They ate delicious food and enjoy scenery . Later, Tommy and his brother decided to go swimming in the lake. They swam, and his parents watched them swim

khánh ngọc

ngoc033147 — 2021-11-23 08:33:15 UTC

On the morning , mark wake up in the morning . He brushes his teeth , washed his face . He goes out with you at the park . I play soccer with you

Hương Thảo Phạm

thao025288 — 2021-11-23 08:38:18 UTC

On Sunday, Tom and Ron will go to Sam's house to work as a team. As they go, they see some money on the road, It's 50 dollars! They take the money put it in their pocket. They walk to the ice cream shop, the price of ice cream is 16 dollars. They buy 3 ice creams and they still have 2 dollars left. They bring ice cream to Sam's house and they eat it together!

Nhật Quang

2021-11-23 08:46:43 UTC

Last sunday, my family went to the picnic. My family are very funny and my family ate very things. My mom and dad drank alcohol. And I and sister swiming.