https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8 en-us 2023-02-27 05:19:35 UTC 2023-03-06 01:46:33 UTC hello@padlet.com yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497279251 2023-02-28 02:07:01 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497279251 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497279947 Young people will see climate change from a different perspective than older generation because they will live on this earth, or this environment, longer than old generation. Young people are the main core of population maybe 30-50 years later, and if we continue to damage the earth, we will live on a earth with no resource. ]]> 2023-02-28 02:07:57 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497279947 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497284268 The preposition for "perspective" should be "from" instead of "in". And "on" will be better preposition for the word "earth".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/category/prepositions/]]> 2023-02-28 02:13:00 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497284268 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497287814 2023-02-28 02:17:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497287814 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497288843 Compared to older generation, we are fighting for ourselves, instead of fighting for next generation. As a young person, I don't want my future life to be living in a place without resource. I think this is the reason why young people show more cared to climate change than old people do. ]]> 2023-02-28 02:18:29 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497288843 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497290110 Change "Comparing" to "Compared" because the verb tense is wrong. 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/category/verb-tense/]]> 2023-02-28 02:20:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497290110 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497299461 2023-02-28 02:31:46 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497299461 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497299668 There are many kinds of "extreme weather events" in my home country, but the one that stood out the most to me is typhoon. When I was in the elementary school, school will often stop class in the summer because of the typhoon. I remembered there is a typhoon, but I forgot its name, that was one of the biggest in the history. ]]> 2023-02-28 02:32:04 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497299668 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497300745 Since I put "many kinds of extreme weather events", then I should use "are" instead of "is" because there is more than one weather events. 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/category/verbs/]]> 2023-02-28 02:33:19 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497300745 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497306048 2023-02-28 02:40:26 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497306048 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497306457 I stayed at home because the school had stop the class. I can feel the home was shaking because of the wind, and there is flood everywhere. When I opened television, I saw people dying because the wind blow them away, even the rock on the mountain started falling. It took almost half a year to recover for the country. That was the scariest extreme weather events that I have ever witnessed with my own eyes. ]]> 2023-02-28 02:40:58 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497306457 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497307220 Change "most scary" to "scariest" because most scary is a incorrect form of superlative. 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/18/sentence-structure-13/]]> 2023-02-28 02:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497307220 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497310856 2023-02-28 02:46:01 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497310856 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497311324 How is global warming growing faster than ever? Military leaders warn that because of conflicts and migration, the global warming is accelerating that it can threats the world. Maj Gen Munir Muniruzzamen, president of Bangladesh, reported that the world is going to see the refugee problems cause by climate change, what he calls as "the greatest security threat of the 21st century".]]> 2023-02-28 02:46:40 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497311324 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497312406 Change accelerate to accelerating because global warming is accelerating right now. 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/category/verb-tense/]]> 2023-02-28 02:48:06 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497312406 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497315645 2023-02-28 02:52:01 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497315645 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497316123 Why is the jays laying their eggs earlier? In his experiment, biologist Jerram Brown reported that the jays are laying their eggs earlier each season from 1971 to 1998. Brown claims that it is because of the climate change. Minimum temperature has grown higher. Due to the cold weather, jays need more energy just to keep them warm. According to Brown, not only the jays, but the other kinds of organisms are also breeding earlier than before because of the climate change]]> 2023-02-28 02:52:21 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497316123 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497317629 Add a "but" to form a format of "not only...... , but also....". This format can let the reader see the parallelism between the top sentence and next sentence. 
https://www.britannica.com/dictionary/eb/qa/not-only-but-also#:~:text=Answer-,The%20construction%20not%20only....but%20(also),more%20surprising%20than%20the%20first.]]> 2023-02-28 02:54:22 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497317629 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497322910 2023-02-28 02:59:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497322910 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497323692 When I go to the ocean in United States, it will remind me of my home and my family. Taiwan is a small country with ocean around. Everytime my grandma will take me to the beach and just sit there whole day. And I got a lot of good memories of beach and ocean. That's why everytime I went to the beach in other countries, I can stay there all day.]]> 2023-02-28 03:00:59 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497323692 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497324682 The preposition about is inappropriate here. Instead of about, of is a better preposition for good memories. 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/category/prepositions/

]]> 2023-02-28 03:02:07 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497324682 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497327111 2023-02-28 03:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497327111 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497327632 The wind from ocean and the smell of it is completely same as the one in my home. Ocean is one of the reason I chose to come to Santa Barbara, because it remind me of my home and my family.  I don't usually get homesick, but ocean is a place that can break my heart and really get emotional about missing family and home. ]]> 2023-02-28 03:05:54 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497327632 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497330397 Since I make the decision before, I should use past tense instead of present tense. 
https://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/grammar/verbtenses]]> 2023-02-28 03:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497330397 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497335309 2023-02-28 03:14:25 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497335309 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497335519 What are the major factors of carbon footprint? According to Karlamangla, average emission will increase when the home is bigger and the residents drive longer. This is mainly because people who lives in suburb need to drive longer to buy what they need. And the house is way cheaper than suburb area. So driving and housing is the major factors of carbon footprint. ]]> 2023-02-28 03:14:40 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497335519 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497337439 Add a interrogative word to make sure that the information in the previous sentence link to the next sentence. 
https://wpmudev.com/blog/a-simple-sure-fire-way-to-create-great-content-the-5-w-the-h/]]> 2023-02-28 03:17:08 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497337439 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497346779 2023-02-28 03:28:16 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497346779 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497347074
How can we reduce emissions by managing household patterns? The data provided by Karlamangla suggest that the walkable areas, build denser housing with good transit can lower the climate footprints. Change the structure of the community in suburbs is important too. For example, building restaurant and store next to housing, which will reduce the emissions cause by automobile. And this kind of patterns can effectively bring the emission down. ]]> 2023-02-28 03:28:27 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497347074 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497351021 Since there are only two information, instead of using "," to separate information, "and" will be more appropriate. 
https://www.cuyamaca.edu/student-support/tutoring-center/files/student-resources/coordinating-conjunctions-guide.pdf]]> 2023-02-28 03:32:59 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497351021 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497353266 2023-02-28 03:35:39 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497353266 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497353450 As Thunberg mentioned in his journal, what is the earth we want for the next generation to live on? Thunberg says that it is time we have to make some changes. Similar to the idea of Thunberg, Mary claims that it’s time for humans to reach a new level of consciousness for higher moral ground as Wangari Maathai said. ]]> 2023-02-28 03:35:54 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497353450 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497359316 Use "?" instead "." because it is a question sentence. 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/category/punctuation/]]> 2023-02-28 03:43:45 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497359316 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497364390 2023-02-28 03:49:53 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497364390 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497364664 people should start finding the change in the place they live in, this could help them understand what the refugees are going through. According to Francis, one major step for the United States to help the refugees is to train immigration officers that migrate because of the climate because they can be more related to the refugees. ]]> 2023-02-28 03:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497364664 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497365161 Since the information provided says "one major step", so we should use is instead of are.
https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/vs/when-to-use-is-vs-are-in-sentences.html

]]> 2023-02-28 03:51:01 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497365161 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497371555 2023-02-28 03:59:14 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497371555 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497371684 I remembered there is a typhoon, but I forgot its name, that was one of the biggest in the history. I stayed at home because the school had to stop the class.]]> 2023-02-28 03:59:28 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497371684 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497372790 Add to because the school stop the class because of the typhoon, not on it own. 
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/verb-forms-4/]]> 2023-02-28 04:01:10 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497372790 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497374324 2023-02-28 04:03:25 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497374324 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497374764 That was the most scary extreme weather events that I have ever witnessed with my own eyes, and I believed you would have think the same if you had been in the same situation.]]> 2023-02-28 04:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497374764 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497375236 This sentence put the reader in the same circumstance, this can makes the reader more relatable to the story. 
https://www.indeed.com/career-advice/career-development/narrative-techniques-for-writers]]> 2023-02-28 04:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497375236 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497376939 2023-02-28 04:07:24 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497376939 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497377464 Due to the cold weather, jays need more energy just to keep themselves warm. According to Brown, not only the jays, but the other kinds of organisms are also breeding earlier than before because of the climate change. ]]> 2023-02-28 04:08:05 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497377464 yuche1 https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497378165 Change them to themselves because jays need more energy to warm themselves instead of other groups. 
https://www.american.edu/ocl/cdi/upload/pronouns-explained.pdf

]]> 2023-02-28 04:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2497378165 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500491747 2023-03-02 03:23:44 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500491747 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500492982 https://wp.me/p25bxK-1x]]> 2023-03-02 03:25:05 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500492982 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500493995 2023-03-02 03:26:14 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500493995 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500494352 2023-03-02 03:26:43 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500494352 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500497211 You're linking to a blog page that explains how to express future time. You're not actually using information on this blog, and so it does not support your rationale.]]> 2023-03-02 03:30:05 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500497211 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500497816 2023-03-02 03:30:40 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500497816 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500498663 The blog post that you are posting here discusses how you could collect evidence to support your claim.]]> 2023-03-02 03:31:43 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500498663 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500499248 2023-03-02 03:32:25 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500499248 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500499915 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/05/clauses-and-clause-connectors-18/

or
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2017/12/03/try-reducing-a-dependent-clause-to-reduce-wordiness/]]> 2023-03-02 03:33:15 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500499915 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500504554 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/using-sources-quoting-paraphrasing-and-citing-3/

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and
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/28/synonyms-for-text/

]]> 2023-03-02 03:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500505862 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500506515 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/using-sources-quoting-paraphrasing-and-citing-3/

]]> 2023-03-02 03:41:11 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500506515 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500507895 You haven't referred to any facts about grammar.
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/11/subject-verb-agreement/

]]> 2023-03-02 03:43:05 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500507895 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500509650 Wrong word choice here.]]> 2023-03-02 03:45:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500509650 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500510843 http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/verb-tenses-and-time-meanings-2/

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]]> 2023-03-02 03:47:17 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500511515 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500512392 When you outline this paper, remember that your story should come at the beginning.]]> 2023-03-02 03:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500512392 randyrightmire https://padlet.com/yuche1/1ajt7xwdijxruop8/wish/2500513257 https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/28/make-your-topic-sentences-reflect-your-thesis-statement/

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