As President of the Gardening Club, I am excited to share how my friends and I made a difference in our community.

I am Nora Osman, the (President) president of the Gardening Club, and I would like to share my experience of helping some workers. I hope this will inspire you to help others.

On 8 August, Raju, Meng and I noticed some workers building a train station under the hot sun. Coincidentally, we had many limes and did not know what to do with them. Meng suggested that we made chilled fresh lime juice for the workers. Raju and I unanimously agreed that it was a great idea as it would thank the workers for their hard work. Besides, we also could use up our limes.

On 12 August 2025, at 2pm, I met Meng and Raju in the canteen to make the chilled lime juice. First, we squeezed the limes, then filled bottles up with the lime juice. Afterwards, we chilled the bottles of lime juice and gave them to the workers.

The workers were very grateful and thanked us profusely. They said that the chilled lime juice provided them with some respite from the hot weather and also quenched their thirst.

Hearing that, I was very happy that I could help these workers. I hope that this article has inspired you to help others. Thank you for your time.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 (8m)

I am Nora Osman, President of the Gardening Club. I am writing to share my experience of helping some construction workers with my friends.

On the 8th of August, my friends, Raju, Meng and I saw some workers helping to build a train station under the hot sun. I could tell they were very tired too. Meng suggested using the extra limes in our garden to squeeze and use to make lime juice for the construction workers. We also wanted to use up the limes in our garden. Raju and I immediately agreed to Meng's great idea as it was a way to thank the workers and to quench their thirst. It not only allowed us to show an act of kindness to the workers but also helped us use up our limes. We decided to meet on 12 August at the canteen where we squeezed the limes' juice and chilled them. We then filled some bottles with the chilled lime juice and gave them to the workers. The workers were very appreciative of our help and thanked us .The workers could work but with their thirst quenched in the hot weather.

I hope this has inspired inspires you to help someone else in need when you can.

Yours sincerely,

Nora (Osman)

President of the Gardening (Club) club

Language - Band 3 (6m)

I am Nora Osman and I would like to share the Gardening Club's (members) experience and inspire schoolmates to make a difference to others.

The (members in the ) club decided to make chilled fresh lime juice for the workers building the train station. We wanted to use up the large number of limes in the school garden and we also wanted to thank the workers for their hard work. The club's members and I met up and worked on it on Tuesday, 12 August 2025, at 2pm, in the school canteen. The chilled fresh lime juice helped the workers quench their thirst and feel refreshed.

I hope that our club's experience have inspired will inspire you to help others more!

Yours faithfully,

Nora Osman

Language - B2 (5m)

I am Nora Osman, the President of the gardening club Gardening Club and I am here to share my club’s (members) experience and inspire you to make a difference to others.

Meng,Raju and I decided to make chilled fresh lime juice for the workers after noticing some workers building the train station under the hot sun. As a result,we arranged to meet at the school canteen on Tuesday, 12 August, at 2 p.m as there were more tables there (to work on). We wanted to make the chilled fresh lime juice to thank the workers for their hard work building the train station. We also had a large number of limes to spare.

The chilled fresh lime juice helped the workers to quench their thirst and helped help them replenished their energy. I hope this article (has ) also (inspired) inspires you too help others and make a difference to our community.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osaman (Osman)

Language - Band 3 (6m)

As President of the Gardening Club , I am writing to inspire you to make a difference to others by sharing how my friends and I made a difference in our community.

We made chilled fresh lime juice for the workers building the train station on Tuesday,12 August, at 2 p.m, in the school canteen .We made it as we had many limes and we wanted to thank the workers for their hard work. It helped the workers by quenching their thirst.

I hope that this newsletter has inspired you to make a difference to others. Thank you for taking the time to read this newsletter.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

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Language - Band 2 (5m)

I am Nora Osman and I am writing this article to share my experience of helping some workers that were building the train station nearby our school (not needed as you have explained in the next para), and to inspire students to be more helpful and kind. (Para too long - shorten)

On 8 August, my friends, Raju and Meng, and I noticed a few workers building the train station near our school under the hot sun from the school garden. Since we had too many limes in the school garden, Meng proposed making chilled fresh lime juice for the workers. Raju and I thought it was a good idea as we could not only thank the workers for their hard work, we could also get rid (wrong word usage) of many limes without having to waste them.

So, we decided to meet at the canteen on Tuesday, 12 August, at 2 p.m. to make some chilled fresh lime juice. I think that the workers really appreciated our chilled fresh lime juice that we gave them as under the hot sun, they must have been extremely thirsty and tired. After drinking the juice, it would help them feel (they felt) refreshed and less tired.

Thank you for reading (my article), and I hope that you will feel inspired to help someone else (next time). out after you read this!

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

My name is Nora Osman and I am the (President) president of the Gardening Club. I am writing this article to share my club members 's experience in helping others and hopefully to inspire more people to lend a helping hand.

A few days ago, my friends, Raju and Meng, and I were in the school garden to check our harvest of limes. While we were there, we saw some workers building a train station under the hot sun. Since we had an abundance of limes, Meng suggested that we make chilled fresh lime juice for the workers. After agreeing, I decided that we would meet on Tuesday, 12 August 2025, at 2 p.m. in the canteen after hearing Meng's suggestion. I was glad that we could thank the workers for their hard work and we also managed to find a way to utilize the large amount of limes. The workers could also get a break from toiling under the blazing sun.

I hope this article can convince you to be a helpful and kind person, especially to those who need it.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 (7m)

I am Nora Osman, and I would like to share with you my experience of helping some workers.

On the eighth of August, Raju, Meng and I noticed some workers working under the hot sun building the train station. We thought that they would feel tired and thirsty from the work. and then Raju (then) remembered that we had a lot of limes. (We) we then decided to squeeze some limes and make chilled fresh lime juice for them.

We decided to meet up at the canteen, on Tuesday, 12 August at 2pm. (We) we wanted to do this as it was a good opportunity to thank them for their hard work, and we hoped that our efforts (would) could

inspire more schoolmates to help others too.

Like that, we helped the hard-working workers to quench their thirst, and they also thanked us for the chilled lime juice. Hearing that, I was very happy (as) I was able to help someone. I hope this article has inspired you to help other people. Thank you for your time.

Yours sincerely,

Nora,

President of the Gardening Club.

Language - Band 2 (5m)

My name is Nora Osman, and I’m (I am) the President of the Gardening Club. I’d (I would) like to share a small but meaningful experience that I hope will inspire you to take simple steps to make a difference.

On Tuesday, 12 August 2025, at 2 p.m., my friends Raju, Meng, and I prepared fresh, chilled lime juice for the workers constructing the new train station nearby. We used the school canteen to make the drinks—it had plenty of space and made the process easy and enjoyable.

It was a scorching afternoon, and the workers were hard at work under the blazing sun. We wanted to show our appreciation for their efforts, and hoped that the refreshing drinks would give them a moment of relief and encouragement.

Though the gesture was simple—just lime juice and a bit of our time—it brought smiles to their faces. Their gratitude reminded us that small acts of kindness can have a big impact.

I hope this story encourages you to look for chances to help others. You don’t need to do something grand—sometimes, all it takes is a thoughtful action to brighten someone’s day.

Regards,
Yours faithfully,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 (8m) Well done!

I am Nora Osman, the P president of the (Gardening Club) gardening club. I would like to share my experience of helping some workers and (hope to inspire you to) how we can play a part in helping our community.

On 8 August 2025, Raju, Meng and I noticed there were a few workers building a train station under the hot scorching sun. We had also noticed that we had far too many limes and had no clue on what to do with them. So, we decided to make chilled fresh lime (juice) for the workers. This (had) could not only (shown them) show our appreciation (for their hard work) to them, but also allowed us to could use up the extra limes (and not let them go to waste). On 12 August 2025 at 2p.m., Meng, Raju and I met up at the canteen to squeeze some limes and poured them it into the bottles. Afterwards, we handed out the bottles of chilled lime juice to the workers.

They were really thankful and grateful that we gave them the chilled lime juice. They were feeling refreshed after drinking it as the sun was scorching hot.\

I was very happy that (I )i could help these workers and hoped that this article (has inspired) could inspire more of you to help others. Thank you for your time.

Yous sincerely,

Nora Osman

I am the President of the Gardening Club , Nora Osman, and I am excited to share with you how my friends and I helped the workers building the train station..

On 12 August 2025 at 2 pm, Meng, Raju and I met in the canteen to make the chilled fresh lime juice to thank the hardworking workers building the train station. Another reason why we decided to make the chilled fresh lime juice is because we wanted to use up the large number of limes that the Gardening Club has. By doing all this, we can help the workers cool down and feel more refreshed as they are working under the hot sun.

Thank you for your time and I hoped it inspired you to help others as well.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 - 6m

I am Nora Osman, President of the Gardening Club. and I would like to share with you about our club’s members experience thanking the workers that are helping to build the train station outside of our school.

We decided to make chilled fresh lime juice to thank the workers working under the sun(.)( We made the juice on) on Tuesday y, 12 August, at 2pm in the school canteen as we had many limes in the school garden and did not know what to do with them. My friends club mates in the gardening club were all very excited to make the lime juice. We would squeeze (squeezed) the limes and (chilled) chill the juice in bottles before giving the juice to the workers. After the workers received the juice and drank it, they felt more energetic as the juice helped cool them down.

I hope that after reading (my article) (a my sharing you would be inspired to thank people for helping us.

(Yours faithfully,)

(Nora Osman)

Language Band 2 - 5m

I am Nora Osman. I am excited to share what me and my friends (and I) have done to make a difference in our community.

On 8 August, Meng, Raju and I noticed that we had too many limes Limes. We thought about it for a while and Meng came up with an idea. He wanted to make chilled fresh lime juice. We thought it was a great idea and agreed to meet on 12 August to prepare the juices.

Therefore, on 12 August, we met up at the school canteen and squeezed the limes into the bottles. We (wanted) had the mindset to thank the workers for their hard work building the train station. In addition, we also wanted to inspire other students to make a difference to (the lives of) others.

I hope this article will inspire you to lend a helping hand!

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language (Band 3) 6 marks

I am Nora Osman, President of the Gardening Club. I am writing this article to share my experience of help some construction workers.

On 8 August, Raju, Meng and I saw that there were was some workers building a train station. It was very hot that day, and we had a lot of limes lemons. Meng suggested that we make made chilled fresh lime (juice) for the workers. We all agreed to his idea as it would allow them to feel more refreshed to continue doing their work.

On 12 August, at 2 pm. (I) i met Meng and Nora at our canteen to make squeeze the limes and chill the juice in bottles before we gave it to the workers. We decided to give them the juice as it helped us to use the extra limes that we did not need and also to help the workers feel more refreshed to do their job. After we gave the juices to them, they were very thankful as it made them feel more refreshed.

I hope sharing this experience with your will encourage you to help others out.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

President of the Gardening Club

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Language - band 2 (5m)

I am Nora Osman, the (President) president of the (Gardening Club) gardening club, and . I will be sharing with you my experience of helping others. (Run on sentences)

On 8 August, Raju, Meng and I noticed that there was a large quantity of limes in the school garden. We decided to squeeze the limes and chill the juice in bottles (.) (We wanted to and give them to the workers as we wanted to thank them (for) working hard in building the new train station.

On Tuesday, 12 August, at 2 p.m., we met at the canteen to start our juice process as there are tables at the canteen. (Another) The reason why we wanted to do this as not only were (that) there (were) plenty of limes but we also wanted to thank the workers.

This (refreshed) encouraged the workers and quenched their thirst.

Thank you , I hope you would be inspired to help others (too)

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language Band 2 (4 m)

Be concise, do not keep repeating the same idea

        I am Nora Osman the President of the Gardening Club.I am writing for the  school news article to share with you how my friends and I made a difference in our community.

        On 8 August, my friends and I went to the school garden and realised that our garden (had) has many limes. My friends and I came up with a brilliant idea to make chilled lime juice for the construction workers who were building the train station nearby.

        On 12 August at 2p.m. we went to the canteen to make the chilled lime juice as there were tables and chairs there. We made this chilled lime juice for the workers because we wanted to thank the workers for their hard work and as mentioned just now, we had too many limes. We did this to help the workers feel more (refreshed) cooled in (because of) the hot weather in Singapore.

        I hope that you enjoyed my story of how I made a difference in our community. I hope that you learnt something and I also hope that I inspired many of you to help others.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 (6m)

I am Nora Osman, President of the Gardening Club. I would like to share with you my members club’s experience on (in) helping others. I also hope this article would encourage you to make a difference in our community.

On the 8th of August, my friends and I saw a few workers building the train station under the hot sun. We also had many limes in our garden. So, we decided to make the chilled lime juice for the workers to thank them for their hard work. At the same time, we hoped that the fresh lime juice would be refreshing and would allow them to take a break.

On Tuesday, 12 August, at 2pm, we gathered at the school canteen to make the chilled lime (juice) on the tables there. To make the lime juice, we squeezed the limes before chilling the juice in bottles to give to the workers.

The chilled lime juice helped the workers to quench their thirst. My friends and I were glad that we were able to use up our limes and, at the same time, lend a helping hand to the workers. I hope this article would inspire you to help others when they are in times of need.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Oshman (Osman)

Language - Band 3 (7m)

I am Nora Osman and as President of the Gardening Club, I am excited to share how my friends and I made a difference in our community.

On 8 August 2025, Raju, Meng and I noticed some workers building a train station under the hot sun. On the same day we noticed that we had so many limes and did not know what to do with them. Meng suggested that we could make fresh lime juice for the workers. Raju and I agreed that it was a great idea as it was a good opportunity to thank them for their hard work. As a result, (on) 12 August 2025 at 2pm I met Meng and Raju at the canteen to make the chilled lime juice. It helped the workers by making them feel refreshed and helped us by giving us an idea for our school newsletter.

Where is the concluding paragraph? You wrote so well but then there is no ending and proper closure

Language - Band 3 (6m)

I am Nora Osman, as (P)resident of the Gardening club, I am excited to share how my friends and I made a difference in our community.

On Tuesday, 8 August at 2p.m., my friends and I were was in the garden and saw that we had grown many limes and did not know what to do with (them) it. At (that) this moment (,) I remembered there were workers next to our school, building a new train station. To thank them for their hard work, we decided to make chilled fresh lime juice for them in the school canteen.

We decided to make chilled fresh lime juice to let them quench their thirst and reward them after working countless hours under the hot sun. I hope that our efforts can inspire more schoolmates to help others.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 2 - 5m

Dear fellow schoolmates, (Fellow Schoolmates)

I am Nora Osman, the (President) president of the Gardening Club and I am writing to share my club members experience of making a difference to others.

A few weeks ago on 8 August 2025, my classmates and I found out that we had many leftover limes and were not sure what we could do with them. Immediately, Meng suggested that we (could) can make chilled fresh lime juice for the workers who were building the train station under the hot sun. Upon hearing this, Raju and I agreed and decided to meet up on Tuesday, 12 August at the canteen to make the lime juice. Firstly, we squeezed the limes before filling them in bottles. Finally, we chilled them and gave them to the workers.

The workers were very grateful and really enjoyed the lime juice we had made. They thanked us for making the delicious drink and my friends and I were very proud of ourselves. I do hope that you will be inspired by my experience and make a difference to others.

Yours faithfully,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 - 6m

As President of the Gardening (Club) club, I am excited to share how my friends and I made a difference in our community.

My friends and I decided to make fresh chilled lime juice on 12 August, Tuesday, 2pm in the canteen as there are tables there. We (wanted) want to make fresh chilled lime juice for the workers because they (were) are working very hard to build the new train station and (we felt) feel like they (needed) need a (refreshing drink) refresh,. (This) also allowed us it would great to use our extra limes for a good cause like helping other people.It would also be a good topic to shar all (I hope that all) students (will be inspired) to inspire them to do the same as us and help others. I was sure that after the workers drank the fresh chilled lime juice, it would make them feel (refreshed) refresh, (and) replenish (ed) their energy to have more energy to build the new train station.

I hope you have been inspired to help people and learnt something from my experience.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language Band 2 (3m)

I am Nora Osman, (the) your president of the Gardening Club. I am writing to share with you my experience helping some workers.

(My friends and) I decided to make (chilled) fresh lime juice for the workers under the hot sun (who were) building a

train station together with my friends - Raju and Meng. We met in the canteen on Tuesday, 12 August at 2pm to start making the juice. We made the juice and gave it to them as it was a good opportunity to thank them for their hard work. Another reason was that we had a lot of extra limes and wanted to make use of them. The juice refreshed the workers and it helped give them more energy.

I am glad that we were able to show appreciation to those hardworking workers and do something fun at the same time.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 2 (5m)

I am Nora Osman, President of the Gardening Club. I am writing this article to share my club's members experience and inspire you to make a difference to others.

On 8 August 2025, Meng Tan, Raju Lim and I noticed that we had many limes in our school garden. We decided to use those limes to make chilled fresh lime juice for the workers building the train station. We made the chilled lime juice at the canteen, on Tuesday, 12 August, 2p.m.

We made the chilled lime juice to thank the workers for their hard work. We also (had many limes that could have gone to waste so we wanted to make the drink) wanted to use our large number of limes. Giving (the workers) them the chilled lime juice (allowed them)allows the workers to cool down after working under the hot sun.

I hope this article (has inspired) can inspire you to help others and make a difference to others.

Written by,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 2 - 5M

I am Nora Osman, President of the Gardening Club, and I would like to share my experience (of) on helping others and I hope to inspire you to make a difference to others too.

On 8 August 2025, my friends and I noticed that we had many limes and did not know what to do with them. At the(that) moment, we also noticed some workers building a train station under the hot sun. That was when my friend had an idea to make chilled fresh lime juice for them to thank them for their hard work while also using the extra limes. We made the chilled fresh lime juice on Tuesday, 12 August 2025 in the school canteen.

Knowing that my friends and I had quenched the workers' thirsts and made them feel more refreshed, I felt extremely happy. Thank you for your time and I hope my experience inspires you to help someone else in need whenever you can!

Written by,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 - 7m

As President of the Gardening Club, I am excited to share how my friends and I made a difference in our community.

On 8 August 2025, the members of the school’s Gardening Club, Raju, Meng and me, were at the school garden, and noticed that the workers were under the hot sun building the train station. As we coincidentally had a lot of limes, we all unanimously decided to make chilled fresh lime juice for the workers to thank them, and agreed to meet on Tuesday, 12 August 2025, at 2p.m. at the canteen to make the lime juice and chill them in bottles before handing them out to the workers. We hope the bottles of chilled fresh lime juice helped cool the workers down and gave them more energy to continue working!

Thank you for reading this article, and I hope that you will be inspired by the Gardening Club’s experience to make a difference to others too!

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 - 7M

I am Nora Osman, President president of our school’s Gardening Club gardening club. I am writing this article to share my experience helping our construction workers, and inspire you to make a difference to our community.

On 8 August 2025, my friends, Raju and Meng, and I saw some construction workers building a new train station when we were helping to harvest the fruits and vegetables in the school garden. We happened to notice that we had harvested a lot of limes, and that most of it were leftovers. Just then, we had a the brilliant idea of making chilled fresh lime juice for the construction workers. Not only did it solve our lime issue, but it will also help to show appreciation to our construction workers who were building the new train station. We unanimously decided that on Tuesday, 12 August 2025 at 2pm, we would squeeze the limes and chill the juice in our school canteen. When we eventually distributed the chilled lime juice, the construction workers seemed to be very grateful. I believe that the chilled lime juice helped to cool them down on a hot day and make the construction workers feel more energised.

I hope this article (has shown) shows that small actions can make a big difference in the lives of others, and that it (has inspired) inspires you to make a difference to others. Thank you.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 - 8m

Last week, Me, Meng and Raju (and I) had an idea to use the many limes we had harvested from our school garden. Instead of letting them go to waste, we decided to make chilled lime juice for the workers who were building the new train station nearby.On Tuesday, 12 August, at 2 p.m., our members gathered in the school canteen. As as there were tables for us to work on. We made the lime juice and handed it over to the workers.We chose to do this for two reasons. First, we wanted to thank the workers for their hard work in the hot sun, we We hoped to show our appreciation by giving them something refreshing to drink. When the workers received the chilled juice, they were grateful and happy. It helped them cool down. Their smiles made us realise that small acts of kindness can make a big difference.Through this activity, our (members in the ) Gardening Club not only put our harvest to good use but also learnt the joy of giving. We hope our efforts (will) inspire our schoolmates to help others.

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Language - Band 3 (6m)

As President of the Gardening Club, I am excited to share how my friends and I made a difference in our community.

On on 8 august, my friends and I i were was at the school garden. There there were a lot of limes and we did not know what to do with them it. (Later, )that is why, we decided to make chilled fresh lime juice. We we will make it (made the drink) on (Tuesday) tuesday, 12 August august at 12pm at the canteen. The the scorching weather that the workers had to work under made us pity them and (we) wanted to show how much we are grateful for their work. (This) this boosted their (moral ) morel and allowed them to push forward.

I i hope this sharing (has) inspired you to show your (gratitude) gratitiue to people. i hope i can see you helping people! I hope to see you helping out others in the future!

Yours yours sincerely,

N nora O osman

Language - Band 2 (4m)

I am Nora Osman, and I would like to share my experience of helping others.

On 8 August, Raju, Meng , and I spotted some workers working to build a train station under the hot sun . Noticing the many limes we had no use of,Meng made the brilliant idea to make fresh chilled lime juice to thank the workers them for their hard work.

On 12 August 2025, at 2 pm, I met Meng at the canteen to make the fresh chilled lime juice to give it to the workers.

The workers were very grateful and thanked us profusely.

I hope you will be inspired to help others .Thank you for your time.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 2 (4m)

I am Nora Osman, President of the Gardening Club. I am writing to share with you about my club's experience with helping others and to inspire yo to help others too.

On the 8th of August my fellow club members, Raju Meng, and I were at the school garden deciding on what to do with the limes we planted as there were too many. Just then I thought about the workers building the train station when an idea struck me. I suggested making chilled fresh lime juice for the workers. My members were all agreeable and we met up on Tuesday, 12 August 2.p.m at the canteen to make the juice. Our goal was to thank the workers while using up our limes. When we gave the juice to the workers they were able to cool down and replenish their energy.

I hope after reading this article you too will feel inspired to help others. Thank you for taking the time to read this article and remember to help others whenever possible. Thank you again and have a nice day ahead!

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 (7m)

I am Nora Osman the (President) president of the Gardening Club I would like to tell you about how my friends and i made a difference in our community.

On 8 August my friends Meng and Raju noticed that there were many limes in the garden. I also noticed that there were workers under the hot sun building the train station and . (We)we decided to make chilled fresh lime juice for the workers (Too long - run on sentence) . We made it on 12 August (missing time and year 2025)at the canteen and we squeezed and chilled the limes in bottles. (We) we made it (them) to thank the workers and to use up the large number of limes we had. The workers were happy as they had a cold drink to cool them down after they worked under the sun.

I hope this article (have inspired) would inspire you to (lend) land a helping hand to others.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman.

Language - Band 2 (5m)

I am Nora Osman and I am writing this article to share my experience of helping some workers that were building the train station nearby our school.

On 8 August, Raju, Meng and I noticed a few workers building a train station near our school under the hot sun from the school garden. Since we had too much limes in the school garden, Meng proposed making chilled fresh lime juice for the workers. Raju and I thought it was a good idea and as we could not only thank the workers for their hard work.

We met on Tuesday, 12 August, at 2 p.m. to squeeze and chill the juice. We met at the canteen to do so. The drink refreshed them and they appreciated my our effort to help them.

I hope this (has inspired) inspires you to also help others.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 (6m)

I am Nora, the President of the Gardening Club, and I would like to share my experience helping some workers.

On the 8th of August, Raju, Meng, and I were at the garden when Raju pointed out that we had too many limes. Meng saw some workers working under the hot sun building the train station. He suggested that we could make chilled lime juice for them. I asked them whether we could meet back in the garden on Tuesday, 12 August, at 2p.m..

Meng said that we should meet in the canteen as there would be tables there to allow us to squeeze the limes and chill the juice in bottles more easily before we (gave) give it to the workers.

The juice we gave to the workers helped them to freshen up and have more energy to carry out their tasks.

I hope that you (have) learnt (from) form this experience (and) to help and care for others (so that you will) and make a difference to the community.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 3 (7m)

As President of the Gardening Club, I am Nora Osman and I am excited to share how my friends and I have made a difference in our community.

On 8 August, (my) My friends I noticed that our (school) scool garden had many limes. Then, one of our members, Meng, suggested that we use the lime to make chilled fresh lime juice (for) to the workers to thank them for their hard work. We decided to meet in the canteen on (Tuesday), 12 August- a tuesday- at 12p.m. to make the lime juice. (The) the lime juice refreshed the workers.

I hope my article (have inspired) will inspire yor (you) to help others in society. Thank you for your time.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman

Language - Band 2 (5 marks)

My name is Nora Osman, the (President) president of the Gardening Club. I am excited to share how my friends and I made a difference to our community.

On 8 Eighth of August, Raju, Meng and I realized that (there were a lot of leftover limes in) the Gardening Club's garden Garden had a lot of limes and we wondered what to do with (them) it. We decided to make chilled fresh lime juice for the workers under the hot sun (who were) building the train station. (We wanted to )are working hard and the drinks are to thank them for their hard work. On Tuesday, 12 August, at 2 p.m. in the canteen, we will make made the chilled fresh lime juice. It helped them quench their thirst.

I hope that this article has inspired you to help others.

Yours sincerely,

Nora Osman.

Language - Band 2 (3m)

I am Nora Osman, the President of the Gardening Club. I want to share my experience of helping some workers and inspire you to make a difference to others.

On August 8th, my friends, Raju, Meng, and I saw some workers building a train station under the hot sun. Since our school garden had many limes and we did not know what to do with them, . we (We) decided to use some of these limes and make chilled fresh lime juice to help the workers to quench their thirst and help them cool down. On Tuesday, 12 August, at 2p.m., we We went to the canteen and made the chilled fresh lime juice and gave them to the workers. The workers thanked us for the drink and thanked us. Hearing this made me happy inside. This action that we did was a good opportunity for us to thank the workers for their hard work.

I hope that this article will convince you to help others if possible.

Yours sincerely,

Nora

Language - (Band 3 ) 6m