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      <title>Lesson 23 by Mai Thị Thanh Tâm</title>
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      <description>IELTS Writing</description>
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      <pubDate>2022-01-13 13:09:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>nhóm 3</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>online:<br>- no distance<br>- flexibility of time<br>- save money&nbsp;<br>- huge amount of information<br>- many kind of teaching&nbsp;<br>offline<br>- contact and communicate with others -&gt; develop soft skills<br>- airy environment<br>- avoid of physical health like headache, backache<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 13:14:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Nhóm 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Intro:<br>I believe advertising influences to our lives&nbsp;<br>Body 1:<br>- Our behaviors are effected by famous people<br>- A perfect tool for companies to advertise<br>&nbsp;their brand.<br>Body 2:<br>Besides, people imitate luxury lifestyle&nbsp;<br>Conclusion<br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 13:24:10 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>N1</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Effect of media, pop culture and friends<br>- improve children's soft skills, knowledge<br>- enhance their ability<br>Besides that:<br>- have an adverse effect children's mental health&nbsp;<br>Uncontrollable information sources from the media can also result in improper beliefs, harmful impacts or even depressions<br>- addition --&gt; sedentary lifestyle, waste time<br>Family:<br>-some parents impose their own thoughts on children<br>- the latter group focuses family as the key influential factor behind a child’s development because they believe that no other factor other than family members can recognize and supervise a child in a better<br>&nbsp;way.&nbsp;<br>- the emotional attachment a child has to the family members is superior to any other external factor.&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 13:26:47 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Thu Hà (topic 2)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>These days, advertising is gaining more popularity for brand promotion. It is common believed that our choices and lifestyle are affected by advertising as clients. In my viewpoint, I think that is true. However, advertising has both pros and cons so I will discuss two sides in my essay<br>What stands out is that advertising often presented by famous people who have a certain influence. That leads to almost lifestyle which are beautiful, standard and mostly positive. Besides, it is obvious that advertising makes people have more choices and easier access to consumer trends. That is reason why marketing becomes more and more popular, gives citizens a colorful consumption environment&nbsp;<br>Turning to the other hand of the situation, when people have trends to imitate famous people's life will lead to many bad effects. One of them is the rich's luxury lifestyle and that is not suitable for everyone's condition.&nbsp;<br>In conclusion, marketing is essential in a technological society and affected many people. Choosing a suitable way for the life is the best and smartest choice for consumers <br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 13:44:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Thảo</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In the novel world, there are several factors that affect children's development. It would be argued that media, pop culture, and friends are the primary effects on the development of their children. In my opinion, the family plays the most important role in teaching children.<br><br>On the one hand, there are many reasons why people believe that children are significantly affected by media, pop culture, and friends. Firstly, These factors help improve children's soft skills and useful knowledge. Thanks to social networking sites such as Facebook and Instagram, children can search for more information about various fields in life. Therefore, they can detect their ability and passion. Besides that, children would develop their skills such as leadership and communication via their friends' thanks to outdoor activities and connections with peers. Moreover, these factors have an adverse on children's mental health such as eyes strain or eyes diseases. To be more specific, sitting a long time in front of the electronic screen to browsing media or pop culture would lead to a sedentary lifestyle and waste time for children.&nbsp;<br><br>On the other hand, I would argue that the family is the most significant factor affecting the development of children. The first reason is that some parents impose their own thoughts on their offspring. They restrict the children's time to play, children's decisions in their life, or even their passion. As the results, these restrain the later development of children. Secondly, children have the tendency to follow their parent step</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 13:48:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Hà Phương (topic 1)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Some people think media, pop culture and friends that influnce children growth. Some people argue that, family has an important role. However, both have main roles in a child's developmet. I believe that family plays an important role to creat the growth of children.<br>First of all, children live with family all the time so the action of family affect directly to the behaviour of children. Many&nbsp; children start developing the skills and attributes of their parents.&nbsp;</div><div>Also, the bonding that the children create will be more strong and the&nbsp;</div><div>child will&nbsp; also be loved by their family members a lot. Moreover, parents also help children to setting their boundaries.</div><div><br>Media, pop culture and friends still have the key role. The positive side of&nbsp;</div><div>this is child able learn new technology, different languages and many more things. They can learn and practice easily in network platform. But on the other side child at young age is very&nbsp;</div><div>malleable so easy attracted towards&nbsp;</div><div>bad side of media and all. The&nbsp;</div><div>childs can also demand for the expensive&nbsp; dresses, toys which they use to observe in tv .</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 13:50:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Thủy Trúc</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>It is often argued that children's behavior is affected by media, pop culture and friends while others believed that the dedicated upbringing of parents plays a vital role in children progression. In my opinion, although technology is more and more popular , it cannot replace the role of the parent in children.<br>On the one hand, it is obvious that technology is widely used by the young. Children' behavior can rely on the content which they watch on media. In other words they copy the behaviour and catchphrases of their favourite personalities, for instance, when children see super hero then they start imitating. Moreover, music ignites all areas of child’s development including intellectually, social-emotional and language. In contrast, Uncontrollable information sources from the media can also result in improper beliefs, harmful impacts or even depressions. In condition, using Internet too much can make them addicted&nbsp; and harm their health.<br>On the other hand, family is the root to children’s moral behaviour.A child's personality is malleable at a very young age, and parents are always present in their life at this stage.  </div><div><br><br></div><div>&nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 13:52:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Chung</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Advertisements are considered as one of the keys to the success of products or services. People see them on TV, the Internet, billboards, or hear them through broadcasts. I believe that advertisements have significant impacts on our choices and lifestyles. Besides, they also have pros and cons.<br>There are numerous reason why commercials affect to our choices. Firstly, we always want the latest products. To begin, we are always on the lookout for cutting-edge manufacturing. As a result, whenever businesses create products, they showcase them on satellite channels and in printed medias in order to attract customers. Additionally, they sometimes promise and guarantee our benefits. As a consequence, we trust their pledges and purchase their products. <br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 13:55:29 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Nguyễn Đức Minh( topic 3)</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;These days, there is an increase trend of online education. While there are some people who believe that the benefits of this method will replace classroom learning, others think that the traditional method is irreplaceable. As far as i know, each of these methods has its own benefits and this essay will discuss both of them.<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Looking at the first method, it can not be denied that e-learning has many advantages. First of all, online learning is time saving and cost efficent for students. Students can learn everywhere, in anytime they want. It is so convenient and flexible. Moreover, learning via internet helps pupils have open access to large knowledge sources across the world. For example, youngers in Vietnam can have opportunities to learn some online course of any schools in any countries. Finally, e-learning for teachers as well, they can use images, sounds and many interesting sources to their lesson, attract student's interest<br>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 13:56:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Thu Uyên_Topic 2</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>These days, it is considered that advertising plays a crucial role to spread product information to customers. Advertising affects our lives in many aspects such as our purchasing choices, trends, and behaviors. In this essay, I will show you how advertisements influence and discuss their harm to consumers.<br>Firstly, there are numerous of effects of advertising on our life. The main opportunity is that we can face up with the fashionable and technology all over the world since advertisers give us the widespread and popular products information. Therefore, we have a chance to approach good quality products that can help our lives. On the other hand, the drawback can be that individuals have the&nbsp;</div><div><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 14:08:28 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Dương topic 1</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>In these days, children’s personality are often dependent on the living environment around them. Children can copy the behaviour or action of people so I think media, pop culture, friends or family can affect them a lot.&nbsp;<br><br></div><div>On the one hand, media or pop culture are common with children nowadays. They can learn from the Internet, they can find their dreams on media. Besides it, friends can teach them many things, good friends are helping with the improvement of children. For instance, a child who learns on the Internet, can find many good people and try to catch them and they can find the passion. Unfortunately, not every things on media, pop culture or friends are good. If the children learn from that, the effect will be really bad. They can learn obscene culture on the Internet or addicted to stimulants. The worst is they can be criminal.<br><br></div><div>On the other hand, children can learn from their parents who have many experience and skills to live. If a child has a great dad who is police, they can try to study to be a great police some day.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 14:11:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>dkhanh</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>in recent years, advertisement has gained in popularity in many way. it has a great impact on the living satndard, they affect your choice toward the selecting of product. i agree with this opinion but not completely.<br>there is an opinion that ad are the driving force of modern consumer society. these day, people are told what to eat, wear or even what to do. with several stunning billboards, tv ads or some famous people imageson internet, it is often difficult to tell if we really want somethng or have just been made to want it.<br>on the other hand, although advertisements play a important role to determine our nessesities, it brings some disadvantageous affects on our lifestyles.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 14:31:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>thuy ha</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>People often have different perspectives in choosing the way of studying. Some people say that online education has many advantages and can replace traditional education whereas others consider that it is imposible to replace face-to-face education. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion about this problem.<br>On the one side of argument, many people consider that digital learning has many benifits, which can replace conventional system owning to various factors. Firstly, people can access and study many things with the huge amount of information through the Internet.(many free courses in youtube). Secondly, the flexibility of time is one of the biggest advantages that learners can enjoy. In other words, students can learn at their own time without following a tight schedule. Thirdly, online learning can help students save money from commuting from home to schools, hotels and even extra cost of courses.<br>On the other hand, face-to-face education can be replaced easily, others consider that and I agree with this. Original learning with the guide is essential for weak students, which computer can identify. Moveover, learners can develop soft skills through the activities occured in the class. For instance, students have to contact with classmates when they are in a team and this can improve their communication skills.&nbsp;<br>In conclusion, both methods in teaching have their own pros and cons. I think people should combine them to improve and diversify the forms of teaching.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-01-13 14:34:19 UTC</pubDate>
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