https://padlet.com/19950007/writing Type your name and submit your paragraph here en-us 2021-10-25 06:12:24 UTC 2021-11-21 08:08:50 UTC hello@padlet.com 19950007 https://padlet.com/19950007/writing/wish/1840815797 I am a new student here. I wake up at 6 every morning. I go to my new school by bike. I have many new friends. I usually read books in the library during break time. I always finish my homework after school. I have dinner with my family at 6 p.m. I watch TV and then go to sleep at 10 at night.]]> 2021-10-25 06:34:49 UTC https://padlet.com/19950007/writing/wish/1840815797 19950007 https://padlet.com/19950007/writing/wish/1898801278 1)  What time do you wake up?
2)  How do you go to school?
3)  What do you do at break time?

4)  What do you do after school?

5)  What do you do in the evening?

6)  What time do you go to bed?”

]]> 2021-11-18 06:28:49 UTC https://padlet.com/19950007/writing/wish/1898801278 https://padlet.com/19950007/writing/wish/1901807207  I am a new student at HCM university of Technology and Education. But now i have to study online (Câu này hay hơn sẽ là " However, due to the Covid 19 pandemic, I have to study online at home"). I usually start a new day at 6:00 am. I wake up and have breakfast with my family. (Câu này nên tách ra là "I wake up at 6:00 am and I have breakfast with my family at 6:30" vì hành động dậy và ăn sáng không xảy ra liên tiếp và đồng thời được, nó cách nhau 1 khoảng time và hành động bắt đầu ngày mới và thức dậy nó giống nhau nên ghi 1 cái thui )Then I start the online lesson. Although I don't want , I have to finish homework after school. (Câu này hay hơn sẽ là "I feel very tired with a lot of homework after school", chứ đừng nói tui không muốn nhưng vẫn phải làm) At 5:00 pm I usually join activity sport -> (play sport) with my friends , examples -> such as: soccer, badminton... I sometimes have dinner with my family at 6:30pm but it's not often (đổi cụm này thành sometimes). I go to bed at 11:00 pm. I really love my life.
Le Thanh Tung
Tùng rất tốt ngữ pháp, bài khá tốt, mình nên coi lại cách dùng từ của một số chổ nheeee :))) Good job!!]]> 2021-11-19 10:38:32 UTC https://padlet.com/19950007/writing/wish/1901807207 kietquocdinh https://padlet.com/19950007/writing/wish/1902023158 I am Kiet. I get up at 6:30 am everyday. I go to school by motorcycle. I have many a lot of new friends and teachers on at the university. I sometimes have breakfast at break time. I go home after school. I play badminton at 5:00 pm and after that, I have dinner with my family at 7:20 pm. I go to bed at 11:30 pm.
Nhìn chung bài Kiệt ổn, chỉ sai 1 vài lỗi nhỏ, lần sau cố gắng viết nhiều hơn nhe]]> 2021-11-19 13:16:07 UTC https://padlet.com/19950007/writing/wish/1902023158 https://padlet.com/19950007/writing/wish/1903307563 Hello everyone, I am Nhat. I'm a new student of Ho Chi Minh City University of Technology and Education. Today I will speak topic talk about my work daily. Start To start a new day I often get up early about 3 a.m to study vocabulary and practice skill listening to English listening skills. Until 6 a.m, I prepare myself like a book, laptop, calculator and carry it go to school. My house is quite far from school, so I go to school by bus. I learn in class until 9 hours 40 minutes a.m 9:40 am is the break time. During this time period, I take a rest for a little and study programming about python and javascript. Câu này khá lủng củng, em nên nói là Tôi nghỉ ngơi và học lập trình Python lúc 9:40 đó là lúc giờ nghỉ lao. "I take a short rest and study programming about Python and Javascript at 9:40 during the break time". Until the afternoon the end after a lesson At the end of the lesson at school I often return my home, sometimes I playing game with my friend. In the evening, I prepare a lesson for the next day. and I run deadline my homework(Deadline to me is very tired) Deadlines make me very tired so I try to deal with them, continue I practice skill and continue practicing to make a web page. Until 10 hours is time I go to bed at 10:00 pm, before sleeping I listen to English songs (thêm chữ songs vô cho hay) for about 15 minutes. That's my day job daily routines. Thank you interested for enjoying my article. Have you a good day. 
Author: Vo Thanh Minh Nhat
Nhật có idea, nhưng cách mình xây dựng idea còn hơi lủng củng và các dùng từ chưa hay, trong writing mình nên viết câu đơn, hạn chế viết câu phức tạp ở level còn thấp nhé. Good jobs! ]]> 2021-11-20 06:50:07 UTC https://padlet.com/19950007/writing/wish/1903307563