https://padlet.com/27dlassman/17osyh9p3r5x63aa Leave me feed back on my writing en-us 2022-01-31 14:55:31 UTC 2025-12-24 02:21:39 UTC hello@padlet.com 27lkoehler https://padlet.com/27dlassman/17osyh9p3r5x63aa/wish/2088515615 -Star: I love the way your slide is formatted
-Star: I love how packed the slide was it had a lot of info spread out
-Wish: I wish your prototype could be more interactive ]]> 2022-03-10 15:00:35 UTC https://padlet.com/27dlassman/17osyh9p3r5x63aa/wish/2088515615 https://padlet.com/27dlassman/17osyh9p3r5x63aa/wish/2088878457 Hello, I really liked your Buy My Product Slideshow!  By the end I was very intrigued about the Life Box. One star I found was how your slides were organized. From the formatting to the images, all the slides were pleasing to look at; the light brown background adds a calm, cafe like ambience. Also, the way you set up the text meant I could easily understand what was being said and where to read next. Another star I found was how you added pictures of each box to accompany the description. This allowed me to read the about contents of each box then see it for myself. My only wish would be about the order which you shared the slides. This is the order I think would be best 
1- Title Slide(S1)
2- Makers Slide(S2)
3- Intro Slide(S4)
4- Background Slide(S9)
5- Box Types Slide(S3)
6- Family Box(S5)
7- Men’s Box(S6)
8- Woman’s Box(S8)
9- Kids Box(S7)
10- Our Products(S13)
11- Why We Created Life Box(S10)
12- What makes us better(S11)
13- What we offer(S12)
14- End Slide(S14)
Btw- You said each of the supplies individually costs $20 yet you are selling them for $10 each. How are you making profit?]]> 2022-03-10 18:01:29 UTC https://padlet.com/27dlassman/17osyh9p3r5x63aa/wish/2088878457 https://padlet.com/27dlassman/17osyh9p3r5x63aa/wish/2088898176 My first star for the life box is for the clear way you explained the product. I understood your business model and exactly what your company offered consumers. My second star is for your organization. Each slide had a clear purpose I could follow along with. My wish is that you made your slides stand out more. They felt a bit uninteresting. Other than that, your presentation is good.]]> 2022-03-10 18:12:06 UTC https://padlet.com/27dlassman/17osyh9p3r5x63aa/wish/2088898176