https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8 Globalization en-us 2019-02-12 20:29:53 UTC 2025-11-04 01:41:20 UTC hello@padlet.com ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/330565119 2019-02-12 20:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/330565119 ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/330565376 Tourism has changed around the world.Identify the reasons and explain what impact globalization has had on tourism]]> 2019-02-12 20:50:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/330565376 ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/330566016 his essay focuses on two contributing factors,  transportation and information technology(IT). The progresses of those two aspects globally have significant impact on tourism, even though there still are some negative effects need to be addressed ,it enhances the comprehensive ability of countries to a great extent and has positive effect on tourism industry. ]]> 2019-02-12 20:52:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/330566016 ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/330577706 2019-02-12 21:24:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/330577706 ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/330578458 2019-02-12 21:26:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/330578458 ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/334647137 2019-02-24 23:44:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/334647137 ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/343309540 Useful for my first aspect: transportation. This article offer a similar idea with my main supporting ideas.]]> 2019-03-20 13:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/343309540 ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/343323009 2019-03-20 13:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/343323009 ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/343326734 2019-03-20 13:52:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/343326734 ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/343327118 2019-03-20 13:52:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/343327118 ml18474 https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/344560623 There are significant improvement in my final essay,compared with first draft.Firstly, in my first draft, the words are insufficient, which can not meet the requirement,even can not have the whole structure, so I add some parts in final one. Furthermore, I have several wrong citations,because I just use other author’s words directly but not paraphrase,which could be viewed as plagiarism.Thus,in final essay,I correct the mistake,use the in-text citation and give some explanation.Meanwhile, I add the reference list in final essay, which is not included in first draft. Those two are obvious progresses for me.According to the feedback that the link between paragraphs is unclear, I think it means that the draft lacks some linking words and linking sentence to explain the relationship between each paragraph,so I complete this part in final one.In my opinion,the feedback from tutor can offer effective suggestions for our final essay, we can revise our article according to it.]]> 2019-03-24 14:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ml18474/1530cyhq7qc8/wish/344560623