https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34 This contains feedback from my target audience surrounding the 2nd draft of my front cover. en-us 2018-02-08 12:31:58 UTC 2025-11-06 02:17:43 UTC hello@padlet.com lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230544735 In order to better determine what my target audience likes and dislikes, I have decided to gather opinions and feedback on each stage of my products drafts. This will enable me to make changes to my products that will make them more appropriate and enticing for my target audience.]]> 2018-02-12 12:21:39 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230544735 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230553734 * "I like the dominant image"
* "I like the font of the main sell line"
- " I don't like the position of the sub-lines""]]> 2018-02-12 12:54:03 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230553734 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230553876 * "I like the style and position of the masthead "
* "I like the smoke detail in the corner"
- "The main sell line could have a sub-head"]]> 2018-02-12 12:54:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230553876 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230553942 * "I like the background of the front cover"
* "I like the dominant image"
- "I don't like the layout of the features/sell line" ]]> 2018-02-12 12:54:46 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230553942 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230554092 * "I like the fonts used on the page"
* "I like the style of the magazine"
- " The dominant image could fill more of the page"]]> 2018-02-12 12:55:12 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230554092 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230554878 2018-02-12 12:57:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230554878 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230560169 * "I like the logo of the magazine"
* "I like the smoke addition"
- "I don't like how the right side is rather bare"]]> 2018-02-12 13:11:23 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230560169 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230561098 * "I like the colour scheme of the cover"
* "I like the placement of the masthead/slogan"
- "I don't like font of the slogan"]]> 2018-02-12 13:14:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230561098 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230562178 * "I like the style and placement of the dominant image"
* "I like the colour scheme used"
- "I think more shadow could be added to the cover"]]> 2018-02-12 13:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230562178 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230563537 * "I like the smoke effect used to like the story"
* "I like main sell line"
- "I think logo could be more visible" ]]> 2018-02-12 13:21:05 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230563537 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230565277 * "I like the spacing of the sell lines"
* "I like the colouring of he dominant image"
- "I don't like how there's no clear price" ]]> 2018-02-12 13:25:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230565277 lholyoak15 https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230566161 The overall feedback that I received from my target audience was useful as now I know what changes I need to make to improve my front cover. The main changes I am going to focus on are: changing the sub-lines to make the page have a more even layout, adding a subheading to my sub-heading, changing certain fonts on the page and making the magazine logo more visible. The aspects of my cover that works for my target audience are: the colour scheme, my dominant image, the masthead and the background. ]]> 2018-02-12 13:27:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lholyoak15/13ju6qs1ji34/wish/230566161