https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9 1. Excels... 2. Needs improvement... 3. Question I have... en-us 2019-03-06 04:06:13 UTC 2025-10-28 14:25:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338465579 Your work was descriptive by mentioning the characters well. Only thing is that is confusing on the setting, try making it more organized. By the way where did Anja gave birth?]]> 2019-03-06 16:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338465579 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338465796 You did a good job. But the only think that was confusing was the setting. Next time try to fix it and make it more in order or organized so we could understand a bit more.]]> 2019-03-06 16:27:43 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338465796 aldanmic000 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338465926 You did a superior job in implementing quotations into your writing but i think that next time you should better organize your writing. Also answer questions like who is Vladek when did he get to the hospital why was he arrested]]> 2019-03-06 16:27:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338465926 ocegugio0001 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338466448 Great work citing the pages, however you could improve on pacing and grammar. ]]> 2019-03-06 16:28:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338466448 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338466589 when I was reading your paragraph i was confused based on how you plan it all out. you got a good thing going on but you need to be a bit more descriptive and put your settings and background information a little more clear. also you are missing some words at the end which throws off many readers and myself makes them question about it ]]> 2019-03-06 16:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338466589 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338466752 You did a good job citing the pages, however you can improve on organizing your writing better. Also you can answer questions like where did Anja give birth?]]> 2019-03-06 16:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338466752 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338466842 Your ]]> 2019-03-06 16:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338466842 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338467261 he did good but messed up his sentences with grammatical errors]]> 2019-03-06 16:29:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338467261 melerils0001 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338467429 You have your settings all over the place so you need to improve on staying in one place while writing, but you did a good job citing your sources.]]> 2019-03-06 16:30:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338467429 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338467696 When reading the words come off weird, sounds rushed.]]> 2019-03-06 16:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338467696 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338467955 it was good it just needs better grammar. ]]> 2019-03-06 16:30:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338467955 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338469050 He gives good info.]]> 2019-03-06 16:32:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338469050 delamig003 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338469090 Your summary was good, but your grammar and organization needs improvement. And where did Anja give birth?
 ]]> 2019-03-06 16:32:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338469090 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338469688 it was good just needs better grammar ]]> 2019-03-06 16:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338469688 munozmay0021 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338469760 when I was reading your paragraph i was confused based on how you plan it all out. you got a good thing going on but you need to be a bit more descriptive and put your settings and background information a little more clear. also you are missing some words at the end which throws off many readers and myself makes them question about it. ]]> 2019-03-06 16:33:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338469760 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338470340 Jerry Roman
Improve your grammar , you did a good job citing the pages.]]> 2019-03-06 16:34:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338470340 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338470504 Paragraph was good but needs better grammar ]]> 2019-03-06 16:35:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338470504 gaytalis000 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338470970 needs more better grammar and more organized 

]]> 2019-03-06 16:35:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338470970 https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338470982 It was a good paragraph but the grammar needs to be improved.]]> 2019-03-06 16:35:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mrsdaly202/12jc496ghdk9/wish/338470982