https://padlet.com/kawankot/12d8o8z41uh9 author's tones en-us 2018-01-30 14:08:47 UTC 2018-01-31 04:28:26 UTC hello@padlet.com kawankot https://padlet.com/kawankot/12d8o8z41uh9/wish/226161104 "Nothing is more painful to the human mind than, after the feelings have been worked up by a quick succession of events, the dead calmness of inaction and certainly which follows and deprives the soul both of hope and fear " (Shelley 85).]]> 2018-01-30 16:09:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kawankot/12d8o8z41uh9/wish/226161104 kawankot https://padlet.com/kawankot/12d8o8z41uh9/wish/226208364 "The path, as you ascend higher, is intersected by ravines of snow, down which stones continually roll from above; one of them is particularly dangerous, as the slightest sound, such as even speaking in a loud voice, produces a concussion of air sufficient to draw destruction upon the head of the speaker" (92).]]> 2018-01-30 17:18:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kawankot/12d8o8z41uh9/wish/226208364 kawankot https://padlet.com/kawankot/12d8o8z41uh9/wish/226212960 The author is writing about the death of William at the beginning of chapter 9.I think this part's tones are the sadness and the depression. Moving to the chapter 10, I wasn't sure what word would fit this part of tone, to be honest. I thought this is close to scary feeling. In chapter 11, I think the author's tone is moving up to the good feeling. Keep writing about the bad thing from a different angle will bring the reader into the story. Writing about the good feeling after bad things is going to be a transition of the story.]]> 2018-01-30 17:26:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kawankot/12d8o8z41uh9/wish/226212960 kawankot https://padlet.com/kawankot/12d8o8z41uh9/wish/226214355 "Darkness then came over me and troubled me, but hardly had I felt this when, by opening my eyes, as I now suppose, the light poured in upon me again" (99).]]> 2018-01-30 17:28:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kawankot/12d8o8z41uh9/wish/226214355