First of all, I loved your presentation about the Personal Project. It showed how passionate you are towards space. It made me interested in space. Here are some things that you can include in your Personal Project!! I hope it helps you :)

Part you should improve on is to talk about how your topic is connected to global context. This will help you adapt your project to the world. It will probably help you explain why this topic is important to the world, not just your interest. Another improvement you can make is to include ATL goals and learner profile goals. Including this will help you get used to things you are not good at. For example, you have mentioned how you needed to improve on time management. You can set a goal in the beginning of the project in order to improve on. So perhaps you can include it in your next project!! You can also include your target audience so that you are clear about what your goal is. By doing this, it is easy to reflect on your product by including self reflection but also including feedback from a third person perspective. (sending google form based on your success criteria.

Thank you for sharing your Personal Project with me. I hope we can see each other someday!!

From Yumeno