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Not bad, explain more pls

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Good idea, could have explained how the product worked more thoroughly and earlier in the presentation

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Idea was good at start but wasn't explained enough and didn't really know what I was investing in. Should have talked more about the product rather than bushfires.

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Didn't have Palm cards and swayed all the way through your speech, it was a bit off putting

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Good idea I could see it been successful
Improve on fluency and eye contact and

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Interesting idea but there wasn't really a business plan and you pretty much said there was a decent chance that your business wouldn't succeed so I'd have wasted 50,000 dollars

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Good idea, could work on presentation skills, and drones aren't allowed legally with in a certain distance of land.

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Need to practise your speech more and bring in Palm cards. I reckon the amount of money you asked for was a lot more reasonable than other people's.

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Need a bit more character but good idea and need smaller palm cards

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Good idea but was quite lacking in alot  of areas such as method of payment and plans for the future

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Smart idea, need to speak clearer

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Short and emotional in the future work on clarity of speech, the emotional pull was well done

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Good idea, spoken a little bit slow and mumbled a bit, good powerpoint

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Good idea, spoken

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Super idea but you may have needed to spend more time on the presentation and you needed to rehearse the speech a lllooottt more

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Good idea but a bit mumbly you needed to practice the speech a bit more.
Also it would have helped if you took the paper out of the plastic sleeve it was a bit crink

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Good idea, well thought out, great PowerPoint, could have rehearsed the speecha  little