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Gabriella Wilkerson commenting om Lia Payne

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Gabriella Wilkerson commenting om Lia Payne

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I really like your pinch pot because the sides are really even. The only thing that I would have changed would be not pinch it as much on the the top of the pinch pot so it would be thicker.Other than that your pinch pot was great!😀

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Gabriella Wilkerson commenting on Madeline Tuker

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Gabriella Wilkerson commenting on Madeline Tuker

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I really liked your pinch pot because the sides were really even really even and smooth . The one  I would change about your pinch pot would be that I would make it a little bit thinner on the edges by not pinching as much. Other that that it was great!😀

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ℒℯℴ 𝒸ℴ𝓂𝓂𝓮𝓃𝓉𝒾𝓃𝓰 ℴ𝓃 Lia

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ℒℯℴ 𝒸ℴ𝓂𝓂𝓮𝓃𝓉𝒾𝓃𝓰 ℴ𝓃 Lia

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Its a bit to thin so you don't have to pinch to hard.

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ℒℯℴ  𝒸ℴ𝓂𝓂ℯ𝓃𝓉𝒾𝓃𝓰  ℴ𝓃 918812

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ℒℯℴ  𝒸ℴ𝓂𝓂ℯ𝓃𝓉𝒾𝓃𝓰  ℴ𝓃 918812

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You could have not curved the edge by not pinching to hard on the in to the out.But it is not to thick and not to thin 👍🏽

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You did a good job on making the walls even but I think you could've done a better job on making the bottom less lopsided by maybe pinching in little less areas and taking a little more time.

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Attempt 2

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Your pot looks very nice! The walls look even and it is very smooth. However, the pot looks a bit wide and you could have pinched it less so that it would stay smaller and not get as wide or thick. Great job!

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Good job Elizabeth! I think that overall, your pot looks very nice. I especially like how it is very, very smooth. A suggestion I could give is to smooth the top left side down just a bit so that it would be more even with your right side. You could do this by pushing down on the edge, or putting your piece upside down on the table and pushing down slightly while it is upside down. Great job!

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i like your pot but i think that you can pinch little harder on the top but otherwise it looks great. :-}

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Elizabeth Tikhonin commenting on Ella Morse 

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Elizabeth Tikhonin commenting on Ella Morse 

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I like how your pinch pot is so smooth and if i could give you a suggestion it would be to pinch a little more harder at the top and smoothen it out a little bit. Other then that it looks awesome.

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I really like how you made your pot wide. One thang i like about your pot you should change is how thin it is you could have pressed less hard but overall good job.

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i think that you could have smoothed out the cracks on the front but otherwise i thought it was good 😀

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Anonymous (Aiden) your pot is really good-I love the shape of it! the only tip that i have for you is that maybe you would like to smooth the outside of the pot a little bit more with one of Mr. O'Conner's tools. Also you could score and slip a little bit more clay onto the outside, it looks a little bit thin. Your pot is really good!
Ella Morse

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I like your pot it looks really good! But one suggestion is that you can pinch alittle softer. But a way to change it is to put clay on it the thin parts to make it thicker. But otherwise i really like it. :-)

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Your pot is very well rounded, and I like how you rounded the corners in. Maybe you could smooth out the pinch marks by pinching more even or with water

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Your pot looks great. It is smooth and even, but you could of made those  extra marks on the pot.

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Your pot looks really good, it is very smooth on the outside of it!
You did a good job of making the sides even-i can't find anything wrong with it.
Ella

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the size of the clay pot is a good size and looks pretty smooth but you could make it look more professionals.

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i really like the texture of your pot.I think you could have carved "to:" in better by using one of the tools with the curved ends. Overall it was very good.

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Your pot is almost the same width all around. On the lid you could have made the side smoother.

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Your pinch pot has a great shape and I love how smooth it is. My suggestion to you would to maybe make the walls a little thicker because they are very thin and they probably aren't very sturdy. Other than that, your pinch pot is GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉

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I like how smooth the pot is and it appears to be the correct depth, but you could pinch the walls with more force to make the walls thinner. 😇

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I like the design of the piece and I think it is the right depths and thickness on the sides. I think you could have smoothed out the top anymore. Over all, it is a great piece for your design.

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Morgan Arnurius commenting on Madeline Tucker

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Morgan Arnurius commenting on Madeline Tucker

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I really like how you smoothed it out. One suggestion is you could pinch a little harder to make the walls a little thinner. Overall nice pot :)

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You did a great job on smoothing out your piece but I suggest not making it so thick by pinching harder on the sides

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Your pot is very smooth and even. I think you made it well. You could have pressed closer together to get rid of some of the finger prints.

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It is well made on all sides and it is the correct thickness. Also, it is hard to tell, but it looks about the correct depths as well. I think you could have made it more circular but that might have also been on purpose for the piece. Over all, it is a great piece and I like it.

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I like the general shape of the piece, but you could pinch with more force to made the walls thicker. Your comment for Madeline Tucker's is really good by the way.😇

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I like your pot. It is even and smooth on all the sides and in the inside are all even, but you could of made the finger marks on the pot a little smoother but the than that it looked really good.:) ;)

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My third attempt!😋

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your pinch pot has a very good shape and height, but maybe you could smooth out some of the pinch marks with water or make your pinching even. You did a great job!

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Brinley Murphy commenting on Jacob Reinbolt  

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Brinley Murphy commenting on Jacob Reinbolt  

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I like how your pinch pots style because it looks like you really took your time to form the shape of the pinch pot . Something you could maybe improve on is smoothen out the sides by after pinching it lightly smoothen out the out side.

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Morgan Arnurius commenting on Emma Moody

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Morgan Arnurius commenting on Emma Moody

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I like how your walls are even. One suggestion is, I think you could smooth out the inside and outside. You can get your hand wet and then just smooth. Overall nice pot :)

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I like your pinchpot's thickness. I think you pinched with the perfect amount of force and did it properly. Next time, i would maybe try to smooth it out a little more and get the finger prints out. You could do this by adding slip or water, and/or using one of Mr. O'Conner's smoothing tools. Otherwise, your pinch pot is pretty good! 😃

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Tater Tot

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I like how the top is smooth and even but, I suggest that you pinch more so the hole is bigger and smooth the outside

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I like how the walls are so even . I suggest that you just smooth the bottom more.

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Kaylee to Grace Fowler i like ho you made the pot look so smooth and how you also how you made it look so even but the bottom of the pinch pot less thick by pointing a little harder because it would make it look more even from the rim of the pinch pot to the bottom being flat.

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Kaylee to Grace Fowler i like ho you made the pot look so smooth and how you also how you made it look so even but the bottom of the pinch pot less thick by pointing a little harder because it would make it look more even from the rim of the pinch pot to the bottom being flat.

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I really like the style of you pot. I like how the wall of the pot are even with the bottom of the pot. Somethings tat i would improve on it making sure that the top of the pot is even. It is a very good pot overall. :D

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You could not make it curve in at the top by not banging it on the table to much or making it to thin.

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Jacob Reinbolt commenting on Grace Fowler 

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Jacob Reinbolt commenting on Grace Fowler 

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I think you did a good job on keeping a good consistency of thickness. Your walls do not seem thin. The only thing to improve is on elf your sides is thinner than the rest.

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I really like how you smoothed out the side of the pot. I think that you could improve on is making the top part even on all the sides. It is a very good pot. :)

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Its good but the middle is really close in and you could make it not do that by not pinching from the out in.

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Kaylee to Garret i like how you shaped it and how you had made your walls even but i think you could have made the bottom of your pinch pot more flat by pinching little more harder.  

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Kaylee to Garret i like how you shaped it and how you had made your walls even but i think you could have made the bottom of your pinch pot more flat by pinching little more harder.  

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Leo's 3rd Attempt

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The walls look pretty even, but the top rim looks kind of bent. I would fix that if you have a chance. Overall a very nice pot, but again I would fix the rim.

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Your pot looks very smooth and has a great circular shape. One suggestion I have is to apply less force and pinching on the top left  side, creating an even pot. Other than that your pot is great.
- Alyssa Gast

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maybe garretoo you can make it rounder but after all it looks great bro.

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yours looks great. but maybe you shouldn't pinch too hard. if you were going for a cup then mr oconner told me pinch more up and if you were going for a bowl pinch out. other than a few suggestions it looks great

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the pot looks great!!!! i would not use a spike to carve the eyes, use a loop tool to carve so it makes it pop out a little more.

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I like how the walls are very even and the top is nice and flat, but I think the opening in the top is a little more square than I believe you intended.

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Olivia Rhea commenting on Madeline Tucker 

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Olivia Rhea commenting on Madeline Tucker 

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It looks amazing! I love how it looks so even! But I have one suggestion, maybe you could have pinched a bit harder at the top so that there would be a bit larger of a hole. But other than that it was great😀👍

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Lia Payne commenting on Jacob Rienbolt....

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Lia Payne commenting on Jacob Rienbolt....

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I think that your pot looks very nice because of the width and height making it appear to be very even. A suggestion I'd like to make is to pinch with a little less force because of the thinness in your walls, but overall a great work of art!

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I think that it is very nice but you can smooth it out and have it not so wide as you have it. But over all I think that you did a great job.😇

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I think you could pick a little more on the left side.

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Caden Hammonds commenting on Jacob Reinbolt

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Caden Hammonds commenting on Jacob Reinbolt

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I like how it looks very rounded. Maybe you could smooth it out on the outside because it looks like you have lots on pinches.

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I like how your sides seem pretty even. Though one thing I think you could improve would be your wall thickness. Maybe don't press as hard. Still nice pot, and it seems well pinched.

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what i like is that your corners are well shaped
what you should of done is that you should of smoothed the in side of you pot

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Lia Payne commenting on Madeline Tucker...

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Lia Payne commenting on Madeline Tucker...

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I would like to start by saying I love the shape of your pot, and you smoothed it out very well. A suggestion I would like to make is to pinch with a little more force, because your pot appears to have very thick walls.

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i think you could have probably made it rounder but after all it looks good bro

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I really like the shape of your pot, the walls and sides seem very even. But one suggestion I have is to smooth out the top of the pot so all is even. Overall you have created a nice piece.
- Alyssa Gast

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i think it looks great.the sides seem pretty smooth. maybe pinch a little harder. but other than tat  suggestion it look awesome

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I like how the pinch pot looks overall, but o the right side it is kind of falling over. You could maybe pick that wall back up and smooth it in with the pot. Other than that everything looks great.

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Olivia Rhea commenting on Brinley Murphy 

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Olivia Rhea commenting on Brinley Murphy 

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The Pot looks Really good! The walls look mostly even, but one suggestion. you could maybe apply a little more pressure to the corners. The top was even and it wasn't cracking! Over all a great pot!

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It looks really good. I like that the walls look pretty even. It looks like a very nice pot, I can't wait to see what it turns out to be.

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Ella Johnston commenting  on Brinley Murphy

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Ella Johnston commenting  on Brinley Murphy

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I like how the right corner is very even, but the top looks uneven, if you were to set it on the table. The right corner is a little bit thicker than the right corner.

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I think that their pot is very evenly pinched on both sides. He/she did a very wonderful job. But I think that you could've made the pot more wide not thin and tall. But you can do what you want to do.😜

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what i like is that you made the corners even
and what i think you should of done is that you should of gut that crack in the side and cover it up so it would look better

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My third attempt!!!!!

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attempt 2

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Jonathon's

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Much better then the first one.😂

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Final attempt

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My masterpiece!

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it had an ear on it

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My best attempt 😃😝😋