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Give TWO peers ONE piece of Warm Feedback or Make a Connection Feedback EACH

(2 pieces of Feedback in total)

This would be a suggestion, Something you may add to their work

WARM Feedback (One think you like, one thing that stands out, something positive)

SENTENCE STARTERS FOR WARM FEEDBACK
I really like that way you...
This part stands out because
Wow, this is great because...

MAKE A CONNECTION Feedback (What new ideas does your peer’s work give you? What does it remind you of? )

SENTENCE STARTERS FOR MAKE A CONNECTION FEEDBACK
This reminds me of…
This part makes me think about…
This connects to my work because…

*If a peer’s post already has 2 comments, find another peer to respond to.*

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When I was working in my Notan Design I was just thinking about any hard figures to do. I was kinda nervous because I thought it would be difficult because I had really small pieces, but it turned out good. If I would recreate my Notan Design over again, I would make my desing more complex or else diferent shapes that make it look more simple.

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When I was working on this I really thought it was frustrating but at the end I really got surprised with the final outcome. I Had some difficulty’s but that really didn’t stop me from working .

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My favorite part was the bleeding paper and my least favorite part was gluing it to my paper because the pieces were small and difficult to glue

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I liked when I had to cut because it was fun

I didn’t like how I had to be really careful

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My favorite part about creating my notan design was cutting each side to making everything even it was very fun. My least favorite design about my notan design 

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When I was working on my artwork, I was inspired by the simple things and most natural things in this beautiful world. The more simplistic things the better.
My favorite part about creating my notan design was making the background tissue paper. The combination of the blending of the colors is just magnificent.
My least favorite part about creating my notan design was cutting because I'm not the best at cutting.
If I could create my notan design over again, I would make my design more complex.

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My favorite part about creating my notan design was picking out the colors and drawing.
My least favorite design about my notan design was cutting it.
If I could create my bitan design over again, I would redo my my leaf.
My favorite part about my notan is how it turned out in the end because it looks beautiful.

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My favorite part about creating my notan design was cutting the different pieces.

My favorite part about my notan design is the city.

My least favorite part about creating my notan design was cutting the small pieces.

If I could create my notan design over again, I would change the theme of my notan.

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I really don't have anything to complain about because these have been the art projects I have enjoyed the most. I enjoy making the drawings and the part where I got to cut and glue the designs and at the end how it all comes together. I wasn't inspired by anything I just let my imagination go

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My favorite part about creating my notan design is drawing it because I got to relax myself and draw what I like drawing.
My favorite part about my notan is how it turned out in the end because it looks cool and looks beautiful.
If I could create my notan over again I will put more designs
My least part about creating my notan was gluing and cutting the pieces

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#9 - FINAL PHOTO & REFLECTION_ Japanese Notan Design (Apr 12, 2022 at 7_37 AM)

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my favorite part about creating my notan design was the tissues because of the colors they produced. My least favorite part about creating my notan design was the Exacto knife cutting because I felt as if I cut some pieces too thin. My least favorite part about my notan design in the middle of my arrow, I feel as if I could've made a different design. If I could create my notan design over again, I would remove the arrow.

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My favorite part about creating my notan design is the process because I really liked choosing how it would look.  If I could create my notan design over again, I would choose other shapes and try to make even bigger shapes because I want to see how different I could make it look. When I was working on my artwork, I was inspired by other images I saw on google and all the possible designs I could do. My favorite part about my notan design is how it looks overall with the very colorful background because I think it looks pretty.

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my favorite part was when i put the bleeding paper and my least favorite part was gluing it because the pieces where too thin, my favorite shape is the one that looks like flames and I were to do another not an design I would put more shapes

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#9 - FINAL PHOTO & REFLECTION_ Japanese Notan Design (Apr 12, 2022 at 7_55 AM)

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If I could recreate my notan design I would add different shapes, my least favorite part of my creation is that some shapes are too close together, my favorite part of creating my notan design was laying out the shapes and cutting them.

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If I could create my notan design over again, I would add more designs.My least favorite part about creating my notan design was the heart's because it was hard to keep them in the same size.My favorite part about creating my notan design was the fire because the way I did it looks cool.When I was working on my artwork, I was inspired by the cloud because I thought it was going to mess up but I didn't and also it reminds me liking the clouds cause when I look up to look at the clouds I feel calm.

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My favorite part about creating my notan was picking out the colors since the colors I chose came out so well.
My favorite part about my notan is that the theme I chose, not every notan has a theme but I decided to make a ocean theme and it came out well. I really love what I was going for, the ocean can be multiple things, it can be scary or beautiful, depending on how you look at it. The ocean has unique creatures and thats why I love it

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My favorite part about creating my notan design was assembling it because it looked really interesting.
My favorite part about my notan design is my use of space.
My least favorite part about creating my notan design was making the drafts because it was hard to come up with a good design.
If I could create my notan design over again, I would try to use more of the space in the middle.

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If I could create my notan design over again, I would add different shapes.My least favorite part about creating my notan design was cutting because it was hard.My favorite part about creating my notan design was designing the shapes.My least favorite part about my notan design is the square shape.

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When I was working on my artwork, I was inspired by coral in the ocean. My least favorite part about my notan design is the dots because they aren't super round. My favorite part of my design is the shape that looks like a cloud. If I could create my notan design over again, I would redo my wave to make it look different.

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When I was working on my artwork, I was inspired by the beach because it is one of my favorite places and I tried to incorporate some shapes that relate to the beach. My favorite part about creating my notan design was creating the bleeding tissue because it was satisfying. My favorite part about my notan design is the background because I like how the colors look together. If I could create my notan design over again, I would add more triple cuts because now I know the process.

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#9 - FINAL PHOTO & REFLECTION_ Japanese Notan Design (Apr 8, 2022 at 7_55 AM)

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ONE PIECE OF WARM AND ONE PIECE OF COOL FEEDBACK, TWO PIECES OF FEEDBACK TOTAL

Give TWO peers, ONE piece of WARM AND ONE piece of COOL FEEDBACK each on Design Ideas

WARM Feedback (One think you like, one thing that stands out, something positive)

SENTENCE STARTERS FOR WARM FEEDBACK
I really like that way you...
This part stands out because
Wow, this is great because...

COOL FEEDBACK
(This would be a suggestion, something you might add to their work)

Use ONE of the following sentence starters for COOL FEEDBACK to help you respond/comment to TWO peer’s Padlet posts in total:
(CLICK ADD COMMENT UNDER THEIR PHOTO TO ADD ONE OF THE FOLLOWING)

What if you added…
If this were my piece I would add…
I wonder what would happen if…

ONLY TWO COMMENTS PER POST

*If a peer’s post has 2 comments on it, find another peer to respond to.*
NO ONE SHOULD HAVE MORE THAN TWO COMMENTS UNDER THEIR PHOTO.

*Remember to BE SPECIFIC, give them a piece of feedback that will help them revise their sketch.

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- Complete Designs Ideas #2 on page 35 in your Visual Journal.

- Take 1 photo of page 35.

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Give TWO peers ONE piece of Cool Feedback EACH (2 pieces of Cool Feedback in total)This would be a suggestion, Something you may add to their workSENTENCE STARTERSWhat if you added…If this were my piece I would add…I wonder what would happen if…*If a peer’s post already has 2 comments, find another peer to respond to.*

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- Complete Designs Ideas #1 on page 34 in your Visual Journal.

- Take 1 photo of page 34.