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Very interesting essay, I learned a lot about chimps. The only mistake I found was that you repeat the word human being a lot.

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Throughout the course of QUIM3045 several works were carried out that are in an electronic portfolio.  Of all the work done my favorite was the promo video because it was together with my classmates and research.  The process was extremely fun.  It was something completely new and out of my comfort zone.  I think this way of presenting a research proposal is magnificent.  Because many students when reading articles on science topics find them difficult and boring.  In this way, the most important points are given and the student's attention is captured.

I think it was my best job because I got a perfect note.  In addition to that I had to put the practice knowledge acquire during the 5 units.  It was a bit strange to be in front of a camera.  Another complication was that I had to speak slowly so that the viewer could understand my part.  I would love to do this research in real life.  So we can help thousands of people who have this disease.  I hope in the future to do such a creative and dynamic work again.

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*I think the grade of this test is a D.

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Having taken the # 3 exam on April 15, 2019 I felt quite comfortable with the exam.  The only part that caused me frustration was the part of identifying nouns, verbs and adjectives.  Because in my years of studies in public school I always had the difficulty in English and Spanish grammar.  I think the note of this test is a D.

Upon receiving the exam note I was surprised to receive a B. Especially seeing that I did not do so bad in the part of the verbs. It was surprised because this issue of grammar I do not understand in any of the two languages. These exams have helped me understand that i should not be afraid of English. This  have also helped me to see that my skills in this language are not so bad.

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The second exam taken on March 27, 2019 of units 2 and 3 I felt a little more confident. The only parts that caused me insecurity were the first and the third part. The first because I had not studied any vocabulary and the third because i wasn't sure of the answers. For the second part I felt again the same frustration of not being able to write what I think, because I did not know how to write the words. But for the other parts I was very calm. I think it won't go so well because I did not study any vocabulary. My note in the exam i think will be a C.

When I received the exam note, I was surprised to find out very well; I got a B. I think that English being my second language causes me so much insecurity and that's why I think i will get bad grades in the exams. I must begin to believe more in my abilities and skills for English. One thing I have to do for the next exam is study the vocabulary of the units.

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The second exam taken on March 27, 2019 of units 2 and 3 I felt a little more confident. The only parts that caused me insecurity were the first and the third part. The first because I had not studied any vocabulary. In the third I'm not sure of the answers. For the second part I felt again the same frustration of not being able to write what I think, because I did not know how to write the words. But for the other parts I was very calm. I think I will not go out so well  because I do not study any vocabulary. My note in the exam think is a C.

When I received the exam note, I was surprised to find out very well; I got a B. I think that English being my second language causes me so much insecurity that I think I go bad in the exams. I must begin to believe more in my abilities and skills for English. One thing I have to do for the next exam is study the vocabulary of the units.

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The physicist Richard Feynman left the scientists as a legacy that to prove a law not only guess, but have to compare the hypothesis with the observations obtained in the experiment.  Feynman shows us that the scientist tends to make an assumption about what can be and makes comparisons with nature, an experiment or an experience obtained.  This is the way current scientists when it comes to testing a law.  Many scientists think that having much information about a law, theory, hypothesis or fact, already makes it correct.  An investigation must be done in order to prove its veracity before the world.

In the scientific community there is a great confusion between the concepts of hypothesis, facts, theories and laws.  These four concepts go hand in hand, but they difference is that the hypothesis makes a question that you want to check it’s correct or incorrect.  For comparison you have to investigate in the area that you are performing the hypothesis.  Instead a fact is an observation of the world that surrounds, as examples is that the sea is blue.  It is something that when you see it you know that it is that color that nothing caused it to change color.

For our third concept, which is the theory based on following the steps of the scientific method.  This has to prove an investigation, observations or an experiment.  Instead, the concept of the law has to be approved with the repetition of the experiments.  If it gives the same result, it can be said that the law is correct.  These last two concepts can be approved as correct, but over the years and other scientists verify certain theories and laws can reach conclusions that are false.  This happens with the acquisition of more information, the knowledge of certain topics or the realization of experiments with better instruments.

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It's a pleasure to help you with your English!

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A need you to correct the spelling in this work.
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Here is another work for you to correct the spelling. Thanks!

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In recent times there has been much talk about the development of nanotechnology in medicine. Nanotechnology is the study and application of extremely small things that can be used in all areas of science. In the medical, it is trying to create nanoparticles that can detect cancer tumors in time and can be destroyed without having to operate on the person. If this research is successful, we could use the nanoparticles to cure many diseases or create more effective treatments. In the latest, a nanoparticle could be created to replace the two treatments used for dialysis. Dialysis treatment is necessary when a person has kidney failure that causes their two kidneys not to clean the blood of toxins and wastes.

There are two treatments to clean the blood, one of which is hemodialysis, which is a machine that cleans the blood for 3 to 4 hours. This treatment is done 3 times a week in a specialized center in the area. The other treatment is peritoneal dialysis which is a tube inserted into the abdomen that contains a liquid that enters the system and cleanses the blood and removes all toxins and waste. It has to be done daily and can be done from home. If nanotechnology can replace this treatment with a nanoparticle that is inserted in the body and has the same functionality as hemodialysis and peritoneal dialysis. Research on this topic will be done in search of information and research paper. It will be directed towards the area of ​​medicine, because many people in our country have to give this treatment lot of time and sacrifice. The purpose of the research is to give a normal and lasting life to people that required this treatment.

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Very Interesting work!

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In recent times there has been much talk about the development of nanotechnology in medicine. Nanotechnology is the study and application of extremely small things that can be used in all areas of science. The medical field, it's trying to create nanoparticles that can detect cancer tumors in time and can be destroyed without having to operate the person. If this research is successful, we could use nanoparticles to cure many diseases or create more effective treatments. In latest advancements, it was reported that a nanoparticle could be created to replace the two treatments used for dialysis. Dialysis treatment is necessary when a person has kidney failure that causes their two kidneys not to clean the blood of toxins and wastes.

There are two ministrations to clean the blood, one of which is hemodialysis, which is a machine that cleans the blood for 3 to 4 hours. This treatment is done 3 times a week in a specialized center in the area. The other treatment is peritoneal dialysis which is a tube inserted into the abdomen that contains a liquid that enters the system and cleanses the blood and removes all toxins and waste. It has to be taking care of daily and can be done from home. If nanotechnology can replace this treatment with a nanoparticle that's inserted in the body and has the same functionality as hemodialysis and peritoneal dialysis then we can truly advance in the medical field to help future generations. Examinations and fact-finding will be done on this topic in search of information for this research paper. It will be directed towards the area of ​​medicine, because many people in our country have to give or endure this treatment for a long period of time and a lot of sacrifices are made in the process. The purpose of the research is to give a normal and lasting life to people that required all of these ministrations.

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I'll be sending you a job so you can correct the spelling

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Hello! Alondra Márquez