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I know that you need to change the structure of a story to make it intriguing and unique.

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That it is a bit like the p and second z in pezz

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In media res

Building tension

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Shift and focus and how to use them in sentences and can explain what they mean

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Short sentences
Chronological order

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He uses in media res because In the text it states, “there was a hand in the darkness and it held a knife which builds suspense so your intrigued to read on - Harvey

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I learnt how to link what the text is suggesting into my answer to the question and how it creates and affect (well, sort of)

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I’ve learned that you can start a story off with tension by using in media rez

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I have learned that structure is not just about the layout or order in which things are written but about things like short sentences, rate, in media res, shift focus and zoom and narrative devices

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I can see how the author shifts our attention with how the sentences are structured and can change how we think of the story.

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He talks about the person and the knife and then he moves onto the murders and the toddler escaping

Hlep me get out of here please

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I learned that I need to think about the different kinds of structures that are in the text such as short sentences and flashbacks

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I now know what techniques I need to use to answer the question.

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I’ve learned that it’s not just about what it is that’s in it but what the reader thinks when reading this and what makes them want to carry on reading -Shearn

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Give learned that you use different type sentence lengths and types

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I have learnt that to answer this question we need to think about how the writer, structures the opening, the middle and the ending, not just how it is on a whole.

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I have learned the use of Shift, Focus and Zoom in, and learned about the opening. Matt

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I have learned the use of Shift, Focus and Zoom in, and learned about the opening. Matt

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I could use the tense of the writing and the order of how it’s written in

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In media res
Short senteces
build up sentences

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He uses short sentences and paragraphs to introduce things faster and to capture the readers attention. They will also use in media res and chronological order to entice the reader. You can also use shift, focus and zoom

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You can use short and quick sentences to build up the readers intrest

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I have learned about how to structure sentences using in media res and how to use shift focus zoom

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I now know that structure is about the order or the way that the author lays out his writing to pull the reader’s attention in.

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I learnt that I need to think about what the writer wants the reader to think.

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I have learnt how the different factors that the author uses when he creates a book and how to answer a question on it

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Ryan:

Short sentences, chronological- order, focus, zoom, shift