# data[].attributes.body
My best friend name is Agung. He's lives in Bali. He's older than me. He's 23 years old now, and me I’m 20 years old. He's taller than me, but I'm more handsome and smarter than him. He's His hobbies are running and playing soccer. He's the fastest in our soccer team. I'm thinner and shorter than him, because he likes to do exercise every afternoon. He's the kindest and the most polite among the other my friends. Sometimes he's more annoying than me. He's His home is farther than mine me, about 12 minutes. I'm better than him for at riding a motorcycle. Sometimes his he's room is dirtier than mine me, and I’m more organised than him.He's as more humble as me. He's the best friend among all.

Great work Manik! Well written paragraph. Check the difference between me and mine and his and he’s.
16pts/20.

# data[].attributes.body
My best friend is Jong Bum. He lives in South Korea.
He is very sociable and takes good care of people around him. He is an artist and always does his best in his work.
He is more passionate than I am and I learn that. He likes traveling and enjoys new experiences,he is really bed bad at cooking, so I always tell him how to cook. He and I We are best friends, but we have many differences, He and I have different personalities, hobbies and more.
So Other people wonder how he him and I could be friends.
But We do not know remember how we became friends. I want to meet you see him next year and have a drink with him.

Excellent work! Few mistakes and very well written. Don’t start the sentence with ‘so’ or ‘but’.

16pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
My best friend is Federico. He lives in Italy. Federico is more friendly than me. He is the more popular than me in Italy. We live in the same city. Sometimes we go to play soccer but I'm better than him. We met at work. Once a week we meet to have breakfast. He is taller than me.

Nice work, it’s a bit short but almost no mistakes.

12pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
I have my best friend in Taiwan. She is really really the best friend I’ve had in my life. Her name is Kim . Sounds like a man but she’s a hundreds percent a woman . When she speaks more tendered??? than me . Of course with smile, always.
It’s Strange things happppened with us . Because we ‘ve known each other for over 25 years .never didn’t talk for a years before . I remember seven years ago one morning my phone was it’s ringing my phone , through the phone A woman says: Have a gass guess who I am. Amazing, it’ was my classmate. She’s changed .l remember when she was a girl taller than me . and more considerable considerate always helping someone who need it. help . Now she works at for a big company and become excellent at what she does. I think she is the most best employer in her company.

Good work Sonia!
Try only to use punctuation marks, no other symbols like this you used ~~ Some good use of tenses, Don’t forget to use ‘s’ with third person singular in Present Simple, for example: speak s, work s

13pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
My best friend's name is Seul Lee. She lives in Korea. The reason why she is my best friend is because I have seen know. her for a long time since we was were very young. Her hobby is makeup and shopping. And I like it too! We always go shopping together. She is taller than me. Her height is 165cm. She is the most beautiful :p I think She is more intelligent than me. She is older than me. But we went to kindergarten together.

Great work Rozy!! Only a couple small mistakes.
Very well written and great to read! Keep up the good work!
15pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
My best friend's name is Joo.Joo is Korean but she lives in Philippines. Joo is taller than me.Joo is less intelligent than me about and was not as good at the school study.But she  is best better at exerciseing anything than me.Maybe she is the healthiest my of my every friends. Joo's hobby is swimming and riding.

Speak about her personality
She is more mature than me especially her way of thinking.Also, she is more considerate than other people because she has two younger sisters.

But she has a lot of fear about is insecure ity. She is more worried than me.When we went to abroad by plane,she was afraid to go down.

Great! 😊
Use small ‘s’ to write ‘she’ and good is used with preposition at with verb+ing/noun
good at dancing or good at maths

16 pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
My best friend's name is Ye-hyang.
She lives in Korea. We have met 17years ago.
We have similar personality ties. We haven't fought.
She likes animals. She likes to goes to Animal Cafe.
Her hobby is playing phone games.
She always plays phone games.
She is more helpful and more mature than me.
When I have a problem, she helps me.
She is shorter than me but her hair is longer than me mine.
She is a worker (what kind of worker??) . She likes her job.
She is more frugal  than me by money.
She is less talkative than me.
She always hear s listens to about my stories.
She Her voice is more louder-spoken than me mine. Sometimes I feel her noisy by her voice is too noisy.
She has lived in Cambodia 2 years ago. When I was preparing for Sydney travels ling she gave me adviced. me.

Nice use of comparatives and superlatives. Try to join sentences into paragraphs, don’t separate them. Check the difference between pronouns mine, my, her. Well done Eunji!

14pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
My best fiend id crazy

# data[].attributes.body
My best friend's name is Cindy and she lives in Sydney. She as tall as me. But I have a longer hair than her. She is more sensitive than me, but she is also younger than me. Cindy is the most popular in the job. When we have meeting; She is more punctual than other friends.The most important thing in our relationship is honesty and kindness between us.

# data[].attributes.body
My best friends is more the hobbest

# data[].attributes.body
Ale                                                              I know met my best friend when we went to the university. Her name is Camila, she is more confidente than your her colegue colleagues. She is very bright and succesful in your her work. She is the youngest in her company, but she has a problem because is the most aggressive. My best friend is very funny, every day she talks to me independient regardless of the distance. She is taller than me. Too, I have another best friend, her name is Karla. She is more friendly than me but is more unhelpful than me. She was has a litle daugther, is the most beautifu girll, her name is Sol. I  hope to see  you them soon.

Sounds like you have great friends! Make sure you use the correct personal pronouns (your, her, them). Only join two clauses in one sentence if they are related. If they aren’t start a new one.

13pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
Me&best friends

Me best friends name is Yui.
She lives in Japan.
She is funnier than me but she is very strong-willed.

And she does nails very well nail ares.
I will trust very much.

A bit short so it’s hard to score.

8pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
Felipe
My best friend and me
My best friend name’s Santiago.He’s seventeen years old, he is  has been my best friend for 10 years. He is as tall as me, but I’m stronger than he him, He has a problem in with his head. He’s the craziest in the world, maybe more than Ahmed, he’s the funniest,m. I’m friendliest frendlier than he him, he doesn’t talk about himself, he’s reliable and bright. Also he’s a good soccer player, he lives in Sydney too. I’m more patient than him he, he’s lazy. He’s the most relaxed and unsensible person I know, he’s a good student, but despite all negatives he’s the best friend I have.

Very very good! Make sure you use full stops (.) not commas (,) at the end of a sentence. Check the difference between subject and object pronouns, for example:
he - him
she -her

14pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
My best friend is Mohammed. He lives in Riyadh and he's married. He has a child it's name Khald. This moment Mohmmad's wife is pregnant. He is 29 years old so, he is younger than me. He is fatter than me. He is polied polite and antilgent intelligent. He works for the goverment. He is a pilot. He likes his jop job. He is more handsome than me. He is shorter than me. He is has been my friend since childhood. His family consists of two brothers and tree sisters.

Good work! A couple of spelling mistakes but great use of the comparative structure. You construct the sentences very well so it makes your work easy to read.

14pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
Me and my best friend

My best friend name’s Slki. Slki is a handsome guy
He was got married last year.!  He have had one daughter this year!
He went to Canada nineteen years ago. He is the most intelligent guy I know.
He is smaller shorter  than me. He’s His hobbies are playing the basketball and watched watching movies.  I first got to know my best understanding when I was in the second grade of middle school. His family member father is a university professor, his mother runs a Korean restaurant, and his sister lives in Canada with Slki.
I miss you him a lot because I haven't seen you him in two years since Slki came to Korea in the first year of the year!   I want to see my best friend after finishing my English study in Australia.

Great story, hope you get to see him soon! Check the difference between subject and object pronoun: he-him
We usually use shorter for people unless you mean size.
12pts/20

# data[].attributes.body
My best friend is Nagi.
She lives in Yokohama, Japan.
We met 6 years ago.
She is smaller than me.
Her height is about 150cm.
She looks like a child.
But, she is more talented than me.
She likes reading books, drawning pictures,  playing the piano.
She is the best most intelligent in of my friends.

Good work. Try to write  in paragraphs instead of starting every sentence in a new line.

12pts/20