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Great Job

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Your essay was really informative! Changed my thinking about girl's education!😊

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Super interesting! I learned SO much

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I really enjoyed your intro and I learned a lot from your essay

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I love your essay!! It changed my mind about animal welfares.

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I really enjoyed the hook

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Your essay is super good! I love how you stated your facts and put the website so I can learn more about that fact

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Yaaaasss King slay my guy. Best writing in Gen z.

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Your essay was very detailed and interesting.

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I really enjoyed your essay! The photos were super cute!

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Great opening paragraph. Puts me in the shoes of a bully's victim.

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the bobm

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Everyone did a great job!

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Love the pictures!

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Your essay was really good because u know I touched it up a little bit

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You grapper was amazing! It really hooked me, and made me want to keep reading!

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I really enjoyed your essay! Good Job!!

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THAT IS SO GOOD OMG

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Yes amazing!!

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Great job! I loved the diverse word choice!

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I love everything about your essay, very well detailed.

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I love your pictures and your paragraphs.  The essay was so sad for me to read. Your essay is so good!

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LOVE IT

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Noice essay. Btw your cracked at fortnite

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I loved your essay!!! Amazing!!

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I triple dog dare you to say yours was good because it was!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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your essay was good

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your essay was litearley awesome!!!!!

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Your lead really made me want to read and learn more about bullying. Really Good Job M8

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I really liked the photos, they were nice

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I really liked your hook it was amazing.

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Even though you had no Glossary you did great!

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Loved it! Nice Job

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Ur essay was cracked

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I love your Essay!

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I loved your essay! Good Job!

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THAT WAS SO SICKO MODE

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i liked your quote at the beginning and your essay was just amazing

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Nice Essay. More photos maybe?

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Your essay was amazing!!

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Your essay was great! I learned alot

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You did amazingly on your essay. you chose the right article(s) for your essay.

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I liked ur essay a lot, the way it was formatted and the picture where great

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i loved you quote at the beginning

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Your essay was cool

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Your essay was Fabulous just amazing

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you have no GLOSSARY

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good

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Your essay was really good!

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i have no words. the essay was so good. very solid.

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AMAZING JUST AMAZING

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Lila your essay was amazing. That hook really hooked me into reading the rest of your essay.

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Your hook was awesome! It seriously made me want to read more!

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Essay was bougie 😙💅

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I LOVEEEEE YOUR ESSAY!!!! IT WAS GOOD!!

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Great job!! loved the intro and pictures!!

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I LOVE YOUR ESSAY!!!!

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Great job

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I love how you did the hook it made me interested to read.  AMAZING!

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I CAN'T YOURS IS SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!

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I love your intro and your pictures, I like that you put Maggie in one of the pictures too!

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I love how she added ten child labor facts.

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Great Essay

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Alex C your essay was amazing it was so well made

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I like the pictures that you have used. It is a good example of bullying.

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Your lead was really good, made me wanna read more

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Your essay was AMAZING proud of you!!!!!!!

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I loved your essay

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AMAZING INTRO

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I thought your conclstion was very good and changed my thoughts about Animal Welfare

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You had a very good graber I really wanted to read more

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Yours was great and I like how you went in depth

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Nice hook and nice statistics

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Your introduction is great and really made me want to read more. I also liked the organizations you picked for the "Teens who have helped" paragraph and how you wrote with a lot of information that informed me on the problem.

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WOWOWOWOWOW

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Your essay was great and I like how you really explained on your topics

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Your essay has very good word choice and has very good descriptions

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Your essay was really good!

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Your introduction was very good

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Great report overall man, I will give you your gum too

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Your was awesome!

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I love your "Teens who have helped" paragraph. I think you choose great organizations to write about.

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I like your statistics

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Your hook quote was amazing and drew me in.

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YOUR ESSAY IS SO GOOD

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I LOVED YOUR ESSAY IT WAS SO GOOD AND INTERESTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Lucas Cronin your paper was very descriptive

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Lucas Cronin your paper was very descriptive

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Your essay had very good word
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your essay was so so so good! it really gave the point. you really did a great job!

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I love your conclusion and the quote at the end. It really ends the essay up so that people want to help animals.