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A good understanding of the tok prompt and how it relates to their object.

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objects must be specifically identified and explained, cannot be brief or simply be "HUMAN"

Deep, thorough analysis

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By making sure that the objects are specific and can be related to the question. By using TOK concepts to explain how the objects relates to the question and breaking down the questions to make it easier to explain.

David

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Choosing 3 specific objects that should have a personal connection with you. Question should be broken down and also be answered in a clear manner.

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The question should actually be answered.

Grammar is used correctly and context is established.

Objects are specific and vary from each other in form and subject.

Kian

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A presentation is well made when it is specific and answers the question. No object should be generic like "Human" or "food". There must be personal connection to the object with specific context while following the rubric.

John Pork

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In-depth analysis of the specific objects chosen that demonstrate understanding of the question and TOK concepts—how they all relate to one another to form a cohesive discussion.

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Make sure the object is specific and has personal connection

-Richard Cheng

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actually following the rubric and its terms

doing this will get you a minimum mark of 4/10

not doing this will get you a 1; refer to exhibition J

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1. Specificity: the objects have to be personal and specific. The species “humans” is not a specific!

2. Definitions: the terms must all be defined in the introductory question.

3. Question: the question must actually be answered through analysis, evidence and interpretation.

4. Objects: the objects must be different but can relate in some way.

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Confident delivery and a deep understanding of the core TOK concepts.

Hailey

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specific objects, actually ANSWERING the question, establishing proper context but mostly actually answering the question

jasmine

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Knowledge the object shows is clearly defined

Contrasting AOKs (i.e. an object from The Arts and an object from Natural Sciences)

Specific objects (not broad like human or fire)

Also an object instead of a technique

Compare objects (make sure they are different and describe how)

Aanya

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Needs to be less broad and longer (more detail)

emily

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Specific objects!

cassidy