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This room may be baned to listening music.

So, you had better stop your music.

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That's great to know the expression "had better", but if you use "had better", you might give others a high-pressure impression. You can use "should" instead. Runa

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Your music sense is very good but could you turn down your music volume?

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I can feel that you properly respect others. This sentence would be better if you add the sentence to tell why you ask to turn down music. ex)I can't concentrate on my studies...Runa

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Would you be quiet?

If you do it, I must get good score on the test.

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That's good to That's great to know the expression "be quiet", but would John understand your request to turn down the music by just saying "be quiet"? I think you should use the way to tell John your request more directly. Runa.

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I want you to be quiet because I want to study quietly. Could you do me a favor?

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That's great to know the expression "Could you do me a favor". I think you can say your request more directly after saying "Could you do me a favor?". ex) Can you turn down your music volume? Runa

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please turn down your music just right now

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I can feel that you tell your request directly. That's great. Even though "Please" adds politeness, the original sentence is still a command. So I think it would be better to use "Could you~, Would you~.Runa

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Thank you.But I want to study at the quiet place.

So, please use your headphone or turn down your music.

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You suggest to John to use headphones. That's nice.

It would be best to use "in a quiet place" instead of "at". RUNA.

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I want to get more good score for the test.I want John to stop music when I study,

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That' great to know the expression "I want 人 to do", but It may give the impression of rudeness because the expression is sometimes strongly demanding of the others. Though I often used it in the class.. Your sentences would be better if you use "Could you~, I would be grateful if you could~" . RUNA

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John. I have headache so could you turn off the music?

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However, if you tell John that listening to his music gives me a headache, He might get hurt... RUNA

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I want to study quiet, so could you turn down the music.

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That's great to use a polite expression when you ask others to tell your request.

If you need to ask for something else, you can use "Would you~". RUNA

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I want to concentrate on studying.

So, please stop listening to music while I'm studying.

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That's good to tell John about your request to study without music.

Even if "Please" adds politeness, the original sentence is a command. So it would be better to use "Could you~, Would you ~".RUNA

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I'm sorry but I want to you turn down the music volume. Please turn down this music volume?

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I can feel that you respect and do not try to hurt John. Tha's nice.

However," S want O to do" might give the impression of pressing someone to ask. So it would be better to use "Could you~, Would you~".RUNA

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That music is good. But I can't study while listening music. So,could you turn down that music?

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That's good to tell John "Your music is nice" to ask him without hurting. You also use a polite expression "Could you~". That's great.

You should say "listening to music" instead of "Listening music ". RUNA

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Actually, I think your music's volume is loud. I want you to turn down it.

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You can tell directly that the music is too loud. That's great.

However, "S want O to do" can make a stronger impression than in Japanese, even if you try to ask politely. It would be better to use "Could you~, Would you~".RUNA

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When I have to study hard, I don't like listening to music, so Will you turn down your music?

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You could tell John why you want to turn down the music. That's great.

I guess you could use "will you~" in this situation, but "would you~" is a more polite way to say it because it opens up more options for others.

”Will you~" may make others hard to say "NO". RUNA

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Your music is nice. But I want to concentrate and study hard. Could you turn down your music?

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You could tell John about your request directly. That's nice! If you face a similar situation, please try to tell your request like this. RUNA

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But I can't concentrate on my studies while I hearing music. So, can you turn down your music?

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You could tell your feelings directly. That's great.

When you ask a friend for something, "Can you~" is fine, but I think it's more polite to add "Please" after the sentence.

You should say "listening to music" insteadad of " Hearing music". RUNA

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I have a hanny news

I dreamed that I was full of sweats

I pleased to be there

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That's good for you. Maybe you were craving for it. What kind of sweets do you like?Runa

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I have a happy story that happened. recently.

When I watched the movie “SLAM DUNK”

in movie theater, I wanted to watch it again, but I didn’t have chance. However the movie was released on Netflix yesterday, so I watched it right away.Then I felt happy.

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I also watched it. The film music was so good. I have a friend who goes to the movie more than five times...

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I have a happy story that happened recently.

I was waiting for the character I wanted to get in game

I finally got the character

I was happy to get it

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I also like playing games, so I understand

your feelings. But be careful of spending a lot of money in the game... Runa

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I have a happy story that happened recently.

When I practiced my draft for broadcasting tounament, my club member was listening to me. And then they spoke highly of my way of reading.I was very happy to hear that.

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Wow, that's happy news. What kind of speech contest are you entering? Runa

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I hava a happy story that happened recently.

I watched mission impossible on the TV again. It made me happy

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Do you like Western movies? It is useful for you to watch it with subtitles and listen to the English! Runa

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I have a happy story that happend recently.

My favorite artist' s movie was relaesed. It' s cool and painful song. I was impressed it. I have listened to it lately.

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That's good. Who is your favorite artist? I like "Mrs. GREEN APLLE". Their music pick me up. Runa

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I have an interesting story that happened recently. I found your father at the train station on my way home. So I said, "Dad!" But he wasn't my dad, he was a stranger. I was so embarrassed.

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Acually, I also had similar experienceps. I thought she is my friend and waved hands, but she was another person... Runa

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I have an happy story that happened recenty.

Lastmonth, I introduced Kaizyuu8gou to my mother. Then, she like it and bouht its all magazins so I like happy.

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スペル書き直しましょう！ （By Akiyama)

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Yor mother is so nice. I know the anime is broadcasted now. I want to watch it next time. Runa

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I have a happy story that happened recently.

I tryed on my mother's furisode last Saturday,bacause my sister will attend coming of age ceremony this year.I have never worn furisode. It was very beautiful and I was happy.

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That's a lovely experience. What color furisode was it? I wore a yellow furisode in my ceremony...Runa

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I have an interesting story that happened recently.

Recently , My legs hurt too much to play baseball. Because My foot got caught in the gutter at last month . It’s interesting for me.

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That's tough...! I think you should have some rest for your leg. Take care of yourself. Runa

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I have a happy story that happened recently.

I was drawing a picture of class flag with my friends. It was difficult for me to draw the picture quickly. But, we were able to cooperate. It was made me happy.

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You've already started making flag, that's nice. I hope you make good one. Runa

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I have a happy story that happened recently.

While I was playing a game, I rolled a gacha. Then,I was able to got my favorite character. It made me very happy.

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You have good luck with "gacha". What games do you like? I want to try it. Runa

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I have a happy story that happened recently.

My family and I had yakiniku on last Saturday and Sunday. We ate meat, vegetables and yakisoba a lot. It was delicious, but I don't want to have yakiniku for the time being.

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Lucky you. Proof you eat a lot is doing well! I want to go to "Gyukaku" and eat meat a lot too. Runa

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I have a happy story that happend recently.

There was handball tounament yestarday. My teammate made the other team with a handicap. I had a one-on-one penalty with the shooter. I was nervous but I stopped the thown ball. It is glad for me to be said " Nice kill ! ".

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That was good to show your greatest potential in the game. Good luck for your next game too. Runa

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I have a happy story that happened recently.

Last Saturday, class flag' members worked at school. While we were drowing it, we were listening to music Mrs. GREEN APPLE etc by PC. One of them we are going to sing the song at Wakaturu festival. It was so fun.

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I like Mrs.GREEN APPLE! What song is it? I want to hear your chorus. Runa

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I have an interesting story.

My brother had written a strange name in the name section of his homework. He was also sleeping without remorse when mother got mad at him. It was very interesting to see my brother being so naughty.

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I think your brother was very tired... It is important to take a break between studies. Runa

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I have an interesting story that happened recentrly.

I watched the movie last weekend.

The name is ''Kaettekita Abunaideka''.

I saw that series for the firtst time,but it was very interesting

for me.

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I've never seen the movie, but I know the rough story. I like ditective dramas, so I'll check out next time. Runa

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I have an interesting story that happened recently.

The other day, my friend bought a food by PayPay. Then, he said "I feel like I haven't spent any money." I laughed at him. I think he probably shouldn't use PayPay.

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Thank you posting and sharing in the class. I also pay with e-money a lot, I understand your friend's feelings. Runa

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I have a happy story that happened recently. In the shogi club, I played shogi with a graduate. The result of the match was my victory. I was very glad and my motivation increased. I was lucky, but it was a good experience.

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That's cool. You're working so hard. I think you should have more confident. Runa

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This music is nice, but I'm sorry, please turn down your music volume.

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You could tell your request by choosing words that do not hurt him. That's nice.

Even if you add ”Please", the original sentence is a command, so it would be better to use "Could you~, Would you~". RUNA

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I have an interested story that happened recently.

I bring up many potatoes in my school. I planted them last week. I hoped that they grow well. When I saw them, they looked like dead. So I dug them then. But, their roots didn't die. I was good to see them. I want not to water.

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I hope that you grow good potatoes. It is important to water for potatoes...Runa.

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I have an interesting story that happened recently.

I love Chiikawa, so I have a lot of goods and Chiikawa clothes.That day, I put on my Chiikawa clothes and got on the train.Then a little boy pointed at me and said in a loud voice, "Chiikawa". Everyone on the train looked at me.

I was a little embarrassed.