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It’s not necessarily the prompt thats the issue; revise your delivery to highlight the pith.

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No one is particularly special and try not to feel bad for yourself. Just create something down to earth and beautiful

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Admission officers are looking for your ability to grow + adapt. Analyze yourself and include internal conflict + how it led to self discovery.

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A good college essay doesn’t depend on empathy and shouldn’t always revolve around ranting about an emotional situation.

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Avoid cliches because the reader is bored

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An important takeaway is to focus on growth and recovery from some sort of conflict in order to show colleges who you are as a person alongside your academic performance.

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“It’s not about you” remembering your audience (which is a bored admissions officer) and focusing on your ability to grow in your essay to ensure your not coming off as conceited

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It’s not about you. It’s about the audience, getting their attention and trust.

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It is crucial to write a lot of drafts. You can not cram a college essay as if it were an AP World essay. It is important to take your time. Start writing small things that occur in your life, this can help you in the process.

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It’s less about you but more about the audience

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The essay is not necessarily “about you.”

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it’s important to show growth and use effective storytelling throughout your essay to captivate your reader

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You should first start by crafting your pith

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To think about a moment we’re your identity was challenged

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Focus on growth/ something that made you change for the better and why

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The College Essay should revolve around the theme of your ability to grow as a person.

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Your essay should be about a story of you growing from a conflict you faced.

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finding the pith of my story

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it is not about you, but is about the audience

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Try not to try as much and too personal and dreadful will make the reader bored. Write about the ability to grow and continue drafting and starting over.

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One important takeaway is that you have to gain the admissions officers attention.

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your essay is not about you, it’s about your audience.

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Admissions officers look for your ability to grow, learn, and change.

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Focus on my ability to grow