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Main theme of our story: loneliness and isolation

Central story question that drives the narrative? : what if you followed and watched how your grandfather spends his day?

Assess how empathy is elicited for the main character:

the feeling of loneliness of an elderly makes the audience feel sad for the main character, wanting to accompany him when no one is there to do so

Main structure:

Act 1: morning, before going out for lunch (starting the day)

Act 2: going for lunch and eating lunch alone

Act 3: going home and waiting until night (ending the day)

done by vivi and peitong

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9th and 10th photo need to have shots in between them for more information

Shots added:

a shot of main character (grandfather in the elevator and elevator going up)

a shot of main character (grandfather opening or unlocking the front door when he returns from the coffee shop)

will be adding more shots in between the different scene of the story to make the video nicer

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V1

In this film, we follow Grandfather’s daily life. Spending his days alone, he wishes he had someone to talk to. As time passes, his hopes of someone visiting him diminishes. This story aims to evoke a sense of loneliness and help us empathise with the elderly. We hope that this story would encourage (our audience) to visit their grandparents more often.

[ FINAL LOGLINE ]

V2

Following Grandfather, we get to see how he usually spends his day. He can be seen spending time alone, waiting for someone to talk to. As he waits for someone to talk to, the sky eventually darkens. Will anyone visit him?

done by ranelle

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edited by vivi

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done by peitong

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Ms sherlyn

Screen direction same side

The title: make him move the other direction as it is confusing for watchers

Narration?

- May be confusing to audience as might not understand

- But meaningful if silent to show how ah gong silent throughout the day

Nice idea - repetition to show mundane the life of ah gong is

Find ways to make watchers empathize with the main character

Music started to be flat after a while. Last part the music can repeat

Ms sophie

Close up to him

Add in Personal items

Repeat timelapse after the last part to show his day repeats and its the same all the time

Repeat scene walk towards coffee shop to show repetition

Group 7

Colour grading good

Ending abrupt

Done by vivi

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to get a close up shot of Ah gong taking his cup

a shot of his old wedding photo in his bedroom

to edit the video to show that his lonely life routine repeats everyday

re-film some scene E.g. transition shot from void deck to kopitiam

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interview style: voiceover

re-film elevator scene

re-film kopitiam transition shot

character focus to be on one side otherwise will be confusing for viewers

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edited by vivi

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clock

https://youtu.be/xtQcMx5WItE?si=a5Fmnw1lOW--rJ8b

click (for the black screen part)

https://youtu.be/q8ZLBOFQ2g0?si=fqm_i8NMqDsScy0H (1)

https://youtu.be/2ROmnlBQweY?si=Os41ZGgC0cpuBrki (2)

birds? like chirping background noise

https://youtu.be/e_zCM0EobAY?si=nXqtE6XJWtnMn0XR

humans talking

https://youtu.be/8tFpb-1sA9g?si=Ma9r-XstuVTmNnMX

elevator

button https://youtube.com/shorts/PBrLakdM7zk?si=73hCa_3swMcAnFTz

https://youtu.be/YqJQWSVo3NI?si=eBf1aerSF1mIrh8B

walking

https://youtu.be/fGK6WNC-nsg?si=t_ovMB6oe0S8KtY9 (??)

calm evening bgm

https://youtu.be/jmrvDx4okis?si=VPnB77yVQutgYQI3

Extra:

cassette tape

https://youtu.be/VRwxgYzRTBI?si=_Vj4qi4MKAl902re

https://youtu.be/nbfw6vbIO-Y?si=P7avVC1FLq_4Ca7D

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Ms sherlyn

overall, like audio as it sounds like the grandfather very close can hear = more empathy

title should be in Chinese ：

爷爷的日常 （yeye de ri chang） traditional Chinese with English

go easy in drop shadow

credit can fade off, not so fast show

more b roll

Ms sophie

end is very abrupt

need to have gradient for the end, rhythm issue

More b roll

last part can be fast to slow

Group 8

nice narration from Ah Gong subtitles

Done by vivi

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made by peitong

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HOW TO MAKE MILLIONS BEFORE GRANDMA DIES | Official International Trailer

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edit title to 阿公的日常

edit the rhythm for the end (repetitive daily life shot)

edit fade off to the credits

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1. Difficulties Encountered

Pei Tong: being unable to help edit the video as we couldn’t really share the video and edit together.

Ranelle: Finding a day for all of us to film.

Vivi: Having to go through many YouTube tutorials to learn how to use premiere pro.

Phoebe: being available on some days to assist with either filming or editing.

2. Learnings & Insights - what have you learned from this ICA and any new insights you have gained, including how you have grown in terms of knowledge/ as a person?

Pei Tong: I’ve learnt how difficult it is to film a video and how important the different shots and their                    impacts are to the video.

Ranelle: I learnt how difficult it is to film a short film, because despite it being a short video, we had to spend a lot of time filming and editing. I also learnt how sound effects/bgm play a huge part in videos.

Vivi: I learnt how to use the different shots, ways to make the video flow smoothly and edit on premiere pro. It is not easy to film a short film as it takes many tries to get the right scene.

Phoebe: I learnt that the entire process of filming is not as easy as it sounds. It will take a while to get used to it and study the shot methods.

3. Result and self-reflection

how do you feel about the final product, were you satisfied / unsatisfied? Why?

What you could have done better?

Pei Tong: I am very satisfied with the final product because I know my group and I have done our very best to make the video. Even though it is only a 2-minute short film, we had put in all effort and time we could. Thus, I am very satisfied with the final video. I think I could have done better by thinking of more ideas that we could use to enhance the storyline of our story.

Ranelle: I am very satisfied with the result because we all tried our very best. We found time to stay back to discuss, and we even made people moved by our short film. Goal accomplished. I think we could have tried out more shot ideas like panning and having more angles.

Vivi: I am very satisfied with the final product because we had put in a lot of effort to film, edit and gather feedback to further improve our video. I could have added more ideas to enhance our shots.

Phoebe: I am satisfied with the final product as it turned out pretty well and close to what I had imagined it to look like. I feel like I could have contributed more as a teammate if I had better time management.

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Edited by Vivi