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Hope this is ok

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Is this ok, Miss Tay?

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Nice Gracie! Especially that cat standing on top of the building! Nice touch!

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i hope this is good.
Ms Tay: This is good Julian! The "FMSP" is written well too with zooming effect of small to large letters. Well done!

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so this is my drawing. I hope its fine.
MS Tay: Looks great, love the colours too. If you can draw the building lines especially the details - inside the buildings with pencil again so we can see the details would be much better

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is this ok ? can i colour ?
Ms Tay: Look good :) go ahead and colour lightly so as you don't lose the details.
Only comment : the clouds can use more curvy organic lines rather than zigzag lines that you have now.