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I wanted to go camping+.
First, I pack a tent+.
Next, I want to a park and built a tent+.
Then, I played and ate BBQ and pizza.
Last, I sleep in a tent.
It was so fun.

20/25

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I wanted to go to Korea.
First ,I bought a plane ticket.
Next, I ate BBQ.
Then, I played with my friends.
Last, I slept.
I was very happy and had lots of fun.

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Title : Let's Go to ________!

Body: I wanted to go to ___________.  (place) First, I had to pack my_________, my __________ and my__________ (3 things you need) . Next, I (rode/drove/walked/went) to  __________ (place) and ____________(past tense verb).  Next, we _________________ (+ past tense verb). Last, we ________ed and ate _________ and drank ___________.

Conclusion: It was so fun and I can't wait to go again.

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I wanted to go to my friend home
First, I chose a toy.
Next, I went to my friend's home.
Then, we ate snacks.
Last, we played together.
I'm happy.

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I wanted to go to France to go camping.  First, we packed a tent, a flashlight and binoculars.

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Next, i went camping.
Then, we made a campfire and had a barbeque.
Last, we went swimming and made a campfire.

I like camping.

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We wanted to go camping.

First we packed a tent and a flashlight.
Next, we went camping.
Then, we made a campfire.
Last,we ate  a some meat.

No conclusion sentence.

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Please take a clearer photo! I cannot read this!

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We went to school
First, we went to school.
Next, we +studied  math and English+.
Then, We ate lunch.
Last, we went back home.
I like korea.

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Let’s go to find a bee!
I wanted a find bees.
First,we took a binoculars and a small card.
Next,we went to an orchard and looked for flowers and honeycomb.
Then,we saw the bees.
Last,we took a picture.
It a fun and good adventure!

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I wanted to arrive Korea . (missing words)
First,I wanted to  home. ( capitalize "I", verb tense)
Next, we wanted home and clean shouse. (verb tense, missing article.)
Then, we ate dinner .
Last, we slept in my house.

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i wanted to goto france wead camping

first, we packat, of lagh tand blnoculqrs.

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October,2021
I wanted go Mountain with family.
First,I maked kimbab.
Next,we

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First, we went camping.
Next, I unpacked  toys, books, and my sleeping bag.
Then, we play on the mountain.
Last, we eat the BBQ.

I'm happy in the camping.

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We wanted to go to the swimming pool with my friend.
First,we park a swimsuit for swin+.
Next,we go to the swimming pool+.
Then,we changed i to a swimsuit+.
Last, we took a swim+.
is varygood and make   me happy too!!!!🥳🥳

All verbs are in PAST TENSE.

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Jong bin

We wanted to go to Korea.
First, we take a ______? (word is unclear)
Next we go to +the airport.
Then, we get in the airplane.(spelling error)
Last we go a taxi.  (+get into)

+ conclusion. See my example.

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We Play Game+s

First, I  played a game on Friday.
Next, me play+ed another game+.

Then at 4:00 o'clock we finished the game.
Then at four o clock we finished playing.

and+Last, I eat dinner and I go to play with my boy baby +baby brother.

Last,I want to bed and I sleep.

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Oct 13th ,2021
I wanted to find a nice place for camping.
So i  found some +a village near Hanoi city.

First,we brought +our swiming suit_,foods and clothes.

Next,we went to SocSon. There are many trees.
Then,we swam together and ate dinner.
Last,we did +had a campfire at night.  I ate mashmellow.
It was amazing.

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Please take a clear picture! I can't read the words because they are backwards.

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I wanted to go smimming.
First, I packed a swimming pool suit and towel.
Next , I go to the smimming pool.
Then, I warmed up.
Last,  I +went swimming.
I was so fun and I was so happy.

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I wanted  to went camping.
First,I packed a tent,a flash light and binoculars+. BBQ marshmallows (not complete sentence)
Next, we went camping on the mountain.

1. Then, we built a tent and made ___ camp fire to ate marshmallow+.

Last we ate BBQ and slept in the tent.

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I wanted to go to my friend's home
First,I chose a game and toy.
Next,I went to my friend's home.
Then, we ate sancks.
Last, we playing together.
I ______ happy.

Please change some of your words because it looks like you copied from another student!

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I wanted to go to korea
First,I bought a plane ticket.
Next,I ated king crab
Then,with my younger sister went to everland park.-->
Then I went with my younger sister to Everland Park.
and played the adventure games.
And i went to lotteria with my family.
we went up to +the 123rd floor and i see the whole the city in there.
Last,we went to visit grandmother.

i felt happy