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Janet 11

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Zheng tin

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Its good but next time use painting

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Ke Ying:your ears too big and paws also too big next time do a little bit small.

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zheng tin如果可以涂的均匀一点就好了

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Wan Rou:兔子在加一个嘴巴和颜色鲜艳一点

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Wan Rou:星星剪歪了

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Zhi Ying：如果背景颜色不一样 春就会比较明显一些

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Zhi Ying：叶子多一点会更好看

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Yi Xiong：在粉红色那个方块里加多点字。

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Chuan Rui : you should add some colors next time.

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zheng tin：可以减得整齐就好了

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Zhi Ying：你的屋子有一点空 建议你加一些家具 比如 椅子 桌子 书架 沙发这些东西等等

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Wan Rou:你的星星剪平一点还有星星大一点

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WenXuan：哇 太華麗了吧！！

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weihao：你的东西很华丽

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Zhi Ying：哇！ 太美了吧！

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Siew Jian:
if it is 3d it will be even better tham Chuan Rui: if it is 3d it will be even better :)
Ke Ying:Chuan Rui your art very empty you can put some bird anything you like.

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WenXuan：要是有一個可以固定的床就好了
weihao：你要装饰你的东西和背景

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Zhi Ying：如果信封的颜色换比较鲜艳的 可能会更好看
Tham Chuan Rui : maybe you should add some other colors instead of black because its dark as black:)

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Siew Jian:加上叶子和一些花 会越漂亮

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Yi Xiong: The paper is a bit too small.
Ke Ying:you can draw a vase and you can put a little bit of 3Dflowers

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Zhi Ying：要是那个merdeka图颜色会更美

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Vicktor: 兔子的耳朵再长一点就会更好看

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Vicktor: Your spring character is wrong.
Yi Xiong: The character is crooked.
WENXUAN: Your words are missing a picture
Ke Ying:zhiying you can color your background with colorfull,grass,and 春can cut better than this.

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Vicktor: 叶子不够多，可以再多一点

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Vicktor: 花朵部分要用toilet roll来做才是正确的做法。

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Vicktor : 可以帮家具涂上颜色，没有这么单调

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Vicktor: 你没有background
Siew Jian：如果背景是五颜六色会更加好看
Zhi Ying：把春字剪出来会更好看些

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Vicktor: 兔子的手黏倒反了
Zhi Ying：兔子的眼睛粘歪了

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YuTing:这个很有立体感，尤其是那只小🐦很生动。

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Aiden:try colouring the bird and make it more colourful,you can also try cutting out more flower with different sizes,and making the branches more consistent

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Joel:有点简单，需要加上衣厨，桌子或椅子就会不一样的感觉。
zhiying：或许加上一个小人物会更有感觉一些

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wan rou:上面的挂钩可以再小一点
Joel: 这鸟画得有点随便，如果可以用白色纸会更好的。

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Zheng Tin ：那个春不是那么的整齐
Yi Xiong：这“春”字要小一点。
vicktor : the colour is good

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Janet Teoh：立身感没有很好，看起來有点平面，但是你的背景可以加点颜色这样看起来会有点美
vicktor : u can adit have house or a tree

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Pei yu: i really like the art but i think you should put a bit more things to the art! :}
Yi Xiong: Cut it out and turn it into a hanging.
Ke Ying:you can draw two bird,cut the out 晚安and paste above the bird ,cut two hanger

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Zheng Tin：你的春字写错了（春）
Yi Xiong：颜色太单调。
WenXuan：春的日多了一笔
Wan Rou:你的春和你的背景在设计一点

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Pei yu : you should try covering the tape, its very obvious that we can see it.

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vicktor :i like the color is mech
zhiying：如果可以用和胶带一样颜色的颜色纸这样那个胶带就没有这样明显了

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Yu Ting:那个字少了一个E

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Aiden:Try cutting out the star more consistently and hide the tape on the paper.good job🙂
Janice:你的星星可以再修剪得更好一些。

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Pei yu : i think you should put more details onto the background :)
chuan rui : its nice but you should add more colours in the background :)

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Pei yu : The tiger is very cute, though i do think you should blend the colors if you can. :)
vicktor : ok
Chuan Rui : you should add the malaysia star and moon in the middle. but still it is nice :)

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ke ying:有些点很大，下次小心一点。 Zheng Tin：有些点太粗了
Yi Xiong：纸张可以放小点。

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Tham Chuan Rui 4

Pei yu : The colors are going out the lines, make it more proper.

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Pei yu : you should more of those flowers so it wont look so empty.
wan rou:那个花可以再大点，然后白色的点可以多一点

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Yu Ting: 眼睛太小粒了
Aiden : you can make the eyes,nose ,and feet more bigger. You can also use a brighter colour like pink.🙂
Janet Teoh：免子的耳朵可以加上颜色和手脚
zhiying：鼻子和眼睛如果可以画大一点 就会比较明显了

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Yu Ting:娃娃太大了，感觉房间很小。
the room needs to be bigger for such a big baby in it

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weihao：你的背景的树木要画粗
Yi Xiong：一些花可以变得大一点。
Joel: 背景空荡荡，需要加云或白色的雪在飘。

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Pei yu : i think you should make the tree have more outlines.
Janet Teoh：您背景可以加上花花草草和小动物如小鸟、猫、狗、青蛙......等
zhi ying：要是树上可以加上苹果之类的东西
看起来就会更真实了
Janice:我认为树的根有一点粗 如果再细一点就好了

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Aiden : i think that the outline should be darker like brown for the hands, orange for the tiger or red for the heart 🙂
wan rou:很美，线画的很整齐

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Yu Ting: 太简单了，加多一点东西会比较美。
Pei yu : i like your room! But maybe you should put more furniture to your room.
Janet Teoh：您可以在家里加点床、窗口、窗帘、桌、书......等等
Yi Xiong：加一点东西在这美术上。
vicktor : you can put a carpet on the floor

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weihao：我不懂你在画什么东西
Janice:可以再给画加点色彩。
Peiyu : the paper is a bit too empty, you should make it have more things in it. It would be boring if it is just an empty page.

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Joel: 背景有像烟花飞的感觉
Zheng Tin: 那个春字不是那么的立体
vicktor : ohh ok
Yi Xiong：做涂料很鲜艳。
Janet：那个春字可以在大点

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Joel: 哇！你的鸟儿是3D的。

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you should make the tree lighting from the sun :)

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Zheng Tin；very nice
Ho sun yi：顔色深一點就好了

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Siew Jian：哇！很好看

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Ho sun yi:立體感沒有很好，看起來像平面
Yi Xiong：这美术加多点颜色会更好看。

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weihao：你的兔子的颜色要比较浅，不要涂太深

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Tham Chuan Rui : you should paint the grass as a better explanation

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Janice:兔子的脚可以修剪得更平一些

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Ho sun yi：吧月亮換成太陽就更好了
Janet：您的花可以在画多一点

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Janice:你的兔子颜色有点特别，能的话再把嘴巴涂点颜色 会更漂亮一些
Janet：免子可以在中间吗？因为这样看起来免子好像在生气
zhiying：要是把嘴巴画弯一点的话 会更好

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Aiden: you can try to use a dark background with a brighter colour to make it stand out more.🙂
vicktor : I like the grass,it is beautiful
wan rou:很美，有星空的感觉

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vicktor : nice cactus

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You should add the clouds

Chuan Rui : you should add the clouds to make better details
Joel: 把草加上去会让图画看起来很不错。

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Pei yu : i think you should smooth out the bottom of the pot.
vicktor : the cactus is good also u can put some flower

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vicktor : nice tree
wan rou:树有点肥
Janet：您的树可以再瘦一点，这样看起来比较好看，然后你想耍上点点可以把一张纸剪成树的模样，贴着上面最后耍上点点的时候，就不会看到树上有点点了。